Too many wasted words about poetic emotions, etc....rather than sticking to point of the story. There is no confrontation with the affair partner, and nothing about divorce and its aftermath. Incomplete stories like this fade fast.
I was going to point out something similar, how did he instantly jump into a conversation with Mike, a bit too all over the place and multiple instances of a line which is quickly becoming annoying considering how much it's used in these stories: she opened her mouth, but no words came out (granted there are slight variations but the same thing). Bad attempts to be poetic instead of a slight attempt to be original. Could easily use lines like: stunned into silence, in a state of shock, etc.
I fail to understand why cheaters weep. Instead they should be proud of what they have done.
It only went as far as the woman want
Too many wasted words about poetic emotions, etc....rather than sticking to point of the story. There is no confrontation with the affair partner, and nothing about divorce and its aftermath. Incomplete stories like this fade fast.
I was going to point out something similar, how did he instantly jump into a conversation with Mike, a bit too all over the place and multiple instances of a line which is quickly becoming annoying considering how much it's used in these stories: she opened her mouth, but no words came out (granted there are slight variations but the same thing). Bad attempts to be poetic instead of a slight attempt to be original. Could easily use lines like: stunned into silence, in a state of shock, etc.