Crossing the Line | OC Animatic

I've done it!! After 3 months, I've finally completed my first animatic. Now I can get back to my commissions and ychs.
Characters:
Jenna- red
Madelyn- blue
Selena- purple
Despoina- magenta
Maeve- green
Lydia- orange
Story: Jenna is an outcast in her community, having been born with a rare case of albinoism. The others believed her to be a bad omen, bringing misfortune wherever she went. Because of this, she and her family were shunned, living on the outskirts of their village in a small cave. Madelyn, Jenna's sister, believed in redemption for her family and started to help around the community. They saw her as a beacon of light and allowed her family back into the community but to remain cautious. Jenna was often bullied and beaten if she got too close to older children. Her mother decided it was safer to keep her inside the den from then on. Madelyn never acknowledged Jenna's situation, slowly drifting away from her sister. When Madelyn confronted her as she tried to leave the den at night, Jenna snapped.
[Song] Tangled Crossing the Line
- • Crossing the Line
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Programs Used:
Abobe Animate CC
Premiere Pro 2023
XP-Pen Deco Pro [Medium]
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[@Amichie]

Ayy this came out beautifully! Super proud to see you get it done and it sucks Jenna has to go through such an icky past. Hype to see more of the story 💙
Also first :>

[@Cattasterfee]

GREAT WORK SCAR!!!!!

[@soraashen178]

Aaa so excited to see these characters again!! I can't wait to see more of them in the future! This was so well paced and the movements felt full of life! You should be proud! 🎉🎉😆

[@KimSxxiny]

I dont know these characters but I LOVE THESE SM!!!❤

[@solangegriffin5894]

That looked very interesting and very fascinating to see that

[@WhispersEcho12081]

GOD THIS WAS AMAZING

[@rainbowhawk911]

Incredible animation and storyline! God has given you a gift!

[@biddiebonesanimations]

this looks amazing! i love your style :)

[@willow_rinekoen-vtuber3694]

this is incredible! very much like the lore :>

[@reubenguttenberg7405]

Mandy Moore as Rapunzel

[@mrbutterkun302]

So smooth!😍

[@Stremd]

THIS IS SO GORGEOUS

[@JMPT]

Very Nice ❤️💙