Since you live with Eve, how was able to just walk in? first time ok, a second? What country is this? or make believe. How did he loss his job and why? Did he not believe the pictures of evidence of his mistress? Did he not seek legal assistance or at least attempt, only to be informed he don’t have a leg to stand on? The story is ok, just need proofreading ,orderly presentation and the mistress exposed as well
How did he get in the house
Confusing
Since you live with Eve, how was able to just walk in? first time ok, a second? What country is this? or make believe. How did he loss his job and why? Did he not believe the pictures of evidence of his mistress? Did he not seek legal assistance or at least attempt, only to be informed he don’t have a leg to stand on?
The story is ok, just need proofreading ,orderly presentation and the mistress exposed as well
Story didn't make sense