Rhonda your voice is so beautiful and breath taking, the writing is so vulnerable honest and full of beautiful emotion and gratefulness of the love felt. I love your whole vocal range and incredible take! Definitely a new fan❤keep believing how amazing u are! i hope your music craft reaches millions and takes u wherever you want to go🙏🏾from artist to artist keep trusting ur ideas & gifts. You got a like & subscribe from me
Not bad at all. I'm not a big fan of beat tracks but you made the most of what you had to work with. Your song would be more dynamic if you were able to drop to guitar and vocal only in places and layer the piano and beat back in giving your beautiful vocals some room to breath. I have no doubt someone will orbit into your life soon and recognize the potential you have and give you arangements worthy of your talent. My life is better having heard your song.
@@brooklynrickey hey I appreciate the insight! I agree, beat tracks not my fave. I’m definitely a dynamics girl. Just playing around, trying to get a better idea of what I’m hearing, even if it’s not exact. I really appreciate the encouragement, I hope what you say comes true, that’d be dreams coming true for sure 🙏😊🎶
Rhonda, it's a nice song, written with feeling, I'm not professional, but I used to be average rhythm guitarist, neuropathy took away my feeling in my fingertips so I can no longer feel the strings on the fretboard. I used to be a tenor in the choir, and still can sing on key. My one change would be on your oo oo oo's, instead of repeating every time, mix it with oo oo (higher falsetto note) . Also if you download "Audacity" a free DAW, it allows you to record multiple tracks and syncs it for you. Harmonies and you could can add a beat you want with simple percussion instruments. Your guitar playing was flawless. Good Luck
Thank you for listening and sharing your thoughts and suggestions 🙏 I’m very sorry to hear about the loss of feeling in your finger tips and loss of guitar playing. I take it all to heart, I am learning garage band and am hoping to find the time to do some better recordings of these songs soon. Thanks again!
I love your voice and singing style. Would you be interested in collaborating with me as a singer for my original songs? i'am try make it for my portfolio .
lovely song Rhonda
@@pollaromusic thank you ☺️
Magnífica composición e interpretación, un gran trabajo Rhonda, enhorabuena una vez más y gracias por compartir tu trabajo, like 45
Great song and performance
Thank you🙏☺️
Love it... well done pretty girl. Great singing and lyrics :)
Excuse me while I listen to this song on repeat nonstop for the next 87 years 💫
@@StevenMartinOfficial wow, thank you! I’d be honoured if you did 😄🥰🎶
The song is beautiful, with a heartfelt touch. Well done...
Thank you ☺️🎶
Beautiful piece of work !!! You really got the emotion / message across ... Great take . SWEeeeeeeeT
Thank you! I really appreciate it, thanks for the feedback 😊
Rhonda your voice is so beautiful and breath taking, the writing is so vulnerable honest and full of beautiful emotion and gratefulness of the love felt. I love your whole vocal range and incredible take! Definitely a new fan❤keep believing how amazing u are! i hope your music craft reaches millions and takes u wherever you want to go🙏🏾from artist to artist keep trusting ur ideas & gifts. You got a like & subscribe from me
Wow, thank you 🙏😊 I appreciate the encouragement and support so much, thanks for being here and for the kind words 💛🎶
@@rhondaleighmusic no problem at all🙏🏾really enjoyed this
Not bad at all. I'm not a big fan of beat tracks but you made the most of what you had to work with. Your song would be more dynamic if you were able to drop to guitar and vocal only in places and layer the piano and beat back in giving your beautiful vocals some room to breath. I have no doubt someone will orbit into your life soon and recognize the potential you have and give you arangements worthy of your talent. My life is better having heard your song.
@@brooklynrickey hey I appreciate the insight! I agree, beat tracks not my fave. I’m definitely a dynamics girl. Just playing around, trying to get a better idea of what I’m hearing, even if it’s not exact. I really appreciate the encouragement, I hope what you say comes true, that’d be dreams coming true for sure 🙏😊🎶
good atmos...good performance ...good arrangiament...gooD!!!!!
Thank you! And thanks for listening ☺️
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Rhonda, it's a nice song, written with feeling, I'm not professional, but I used to be average rhythm guitarist, neuropathy took away my feeling in my fingertips so I can no longer feel the strings on the fretboard. I used to be a tenor in the choir, and still can sing on key. My one change would be on your oo oo oo's, instead of repeating every time, mix it with oo oo (higher falsetto note) . Also if you download "Audacity" a free DAW, it allows you to record multiple tracks and syncs it for you. Harmonies and you could can add a beat you want with simple percussion instruments. Your guitar playing was flawless. Good Luck
Thank you for listening and sharing your thoughts and suggestions 🙏 I’m very sorry to hear about the loss of feeling in your finger tips and loss of guitar playing. I take it all to heart, I am learning garage band and am hoping to find the time to do some better recordings of these songs soon. Thanks again!
Amazing,lets collab
I love your voice and singing style. Would you be interested in collaborating with me as a singer for my original songs? i'am try make it for my portfolio .