Overall i liked it, you've got some potential. It felt sort of bland and lacking bass and structure and overall seemed all over the place, also the ending didn't seem to match the aesthetic of the piece. To add, I feel if you didn't make all of the melodies that play simultaneously sound very similar but rather gave them each their own type of melody that harmonizes with each other that would make all the difference. Keep up the good work. :)
Overall i liked it, you've got some potential. It felt sort of bland and lacking bass and structure and overall seemed all over the place, also the ending didn't seem to match the aesthetic of the piece. To add, I feel if you didn't make all of the melodies that play simultaneously sound very similar but rather gave them each their own type of melody that harmonizes with each other that would make all the difference. Keep up the good work. :)
I agree, thanks for the support and help. (This is my other account) I definitely will work on doing that with the next piece I make.
yes, that is my other account
It’s amazing!
naw, its not that good. I like the the one after this better
wow, delete it :)
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why?