I don’t understand these comments. Of course, was absolutely in it mother-in-law her daughter is the worst ,, it doesn’t need to be written down explicitly. Little family is growing and will stay happy. And for myself, I love this ending. These stories are so similar, normally after this, I felt like leaving the cinema. I think the ending is cool.
Hope this analysis makes sense: 1) So the fortune teller mentioned that George was just normal nothing special but….he prooved her wrong in my opinion. Even though the op was somehow involved with his job, George would have to be smart to be handling people work under him successfully and properly. 2) interesting to think back to the mom set Diane up on a blind date with the odd acting spouse 3) In real life doctors would usually know if she was being poisoned So if he isn’t a psychopath, is it for us to believe the fortune teller once told him he had bad luck and had to be married and remain married to stay alive in this life? Hard to explain but Psychopath and coincidences otherwise Or Fortune teller who is actually not a fraud? True crime makes me really think deep so I am not sure if it is purposedly an out of this world story or a psychopath (I did like the backstory about the twins and their scar stories. I liked how the fortune teller said a scar is just a scar and nothing more 😊 I was glad that no one was making fun of her about the scar and simply curious. I have a scar, or many if including over a dozen surgeries but most scars are hidden. I was just glad it didn't go in that direction at all and wasn't marriage based on scars vs none 😊 Assuming his mom passed away too or heading that way due to the fortune tellers readings. Jmo in real life, I never understand though, if people are true fortune tellers, telepathic or other similar abilities, then I would think all cold cases could be solved and that all missing people could be found whether alive or not. I'll truly bellieve if someone could ever do that. (and yes, I think deep into some of these stories lol even if just stories)
It’s rare to see a dark ending to these. Aside from the supernatural stuff, it seems that there was karma somewhat served to the MIL for how she looked at her DIL (and the sister as well), and how she just completely doted over her daughter and neglected her son. Though based on the comments, it seems most people would just rather have the same antagonist getting served justice in the end. Guess everyone just likes the same formula over and over until it’s time to complain about that.
@@naoyukiogura5299 why is it not a good idea? It seems like there’s always a complaint with these channels, whether it’s the stories being too formulaic, being too long, not having a epilogue, etc.. Sometimes they have no choice but to break from the norm, which in this case, involving the supernatural and having a bad ending.
@@osohombre When you have a channel that has long established the norm of karmic endings, the worst thing you can do is to break AND fail at the attempt. This video is one such attempt that I’m surprised people aren’t giving enough backlash to it, and I will be making a callout video about it.
@@naoyukiogura5299 Huh.. I stopped watching these for like a year or two, no wonder it felt a little different. I remember people ending up homeless in debt in a wheel chair due to their sins.
Hey, writer, did you rin out of crappy endings and you decided to go for crappy entire story to compensate? Please, next time, just plagiarise an episode of Supernatural, it will be just as unbelievable but at least it will have comidic timing
That’s your complaint? Like, fuck, the lack of epilogue should be the bigger problem, but given the exclamation point and question mark spam you made, I doubt you’d think that.
FYI women are called widows and men are called widowers. Use proper terms and stop repeating useless words like saying divorce three times in the same sentence. Hope you don't talk like that in real life
You know many of the complaints on here are the reason why Good budding writers quit. They write a few "Duds" and everyone gets so pissy and can't understand that sometimes people have off days! Yall need to chill tf out and give the writers a break. If you dont like it, dont listen. I honestly feel that if a writer can make you feel SOMETHING towards the CHARACTERS they do a Good Job!
As a reply to all that comments: of course there is Karma, it just doesn’t need to be told explicitly. And this different story has been good entertainment not the usual CEO crap.
Okay, definitely a new writer & I imagine new to writing period. I only got to 10:09 and I am - confused. 🫤 14:54 “your twin must be a gemini too”. 😅 well yes. Because they are twins. What 🫤
![[Apple] MIL skips my daughter’s funeral to go on a family’s trip, but she soon bites the bullet](/img/1.gif)
What was that? It just sounds like MIL's daughter was being poisoned by her husband at the end. Bad ending.
Dude, how many times do we have to tell you we want the old way you do endings back!? Show us the bloody karma!
All the fortune teller stuff and the ending was so weird.
What the hell was that? Did you just drop this in the middle? That's one hour of my life I'm never getting back...
Thanks comments for warning me. I too would have wasted an hour of my life.
The after story: Diane's husband tries to date a new woman but he is crushed by a collapsing crane on his way there. The curse is broken.
@whofandb I need this but add a confession to the family and someone tripping him into that spot because the curse started again
That it? Bad ending?! No karma or anything! What the hell!
They’ve been getting sloppier and sloppier.
Right!!!! I thought for a second that he didn't know about the bad fortune but he did!!! This is not a satisfying ending at all😭
My thoughts exactly!! I was like...ummmmm is there more to it?!?!?!?
Would you believe there are audiences who actually like endings like this? Lord knows why, but yeah. Not everyone likes happy endings...
I don’t understand these comments. Of course, was absolutely in it mother-in-law her daughter is the worst ,, it doesn’t need to be written down explicitly. Little family is growing and will stay happy. And for myself, I love this ending. These stories are so similar, normally after this, I felt like leaving the cinema. I think the ending is cool.
Whoever wrote this needs an award... for the Crappiest Crap Written.
I've written worse stories bro. if anything this is average.
@@RalMaybeRoblox If this is average to you, then holy fuck it’s bad.
@@naoyukiogura5299 Oh yeah, yeah it most definitely is.
I’m sorry but WHAT KIND OF ENDING WAS THAT I’m really hoping there’s going to be a part 2 to this story
Well this was incredibly unsatisfactory.
What kind of insane story was that?!
Well, this was an odd one.
This story gave off weird voodoo vibes.
Wow, an original story!! Thankyou!!😊
Hope this analysis makes sense:
1) So the fortune teller mentioned that George was just normal nothing special but….he prooved her wrong in my opinion. Even though the op was somehow involved with his job, George would have to be smart to be handling people work under him successfully and properly.
2) interesting to think back to the mom set Diane up on a blind date with the odd acting spouse
3) In real life doctors would usually know if she was being poisoned
So if he isn’t a psychopath, is it for us to believe the fortune teller once told him he had bad luck and had to be married and remain married to stay alive in this life?
Hard to explain but
Psychopath and coincidences otherwise
Or
Fortune teller who is actually not a fraud?
True crime makes me really think deep so I am not sure if it is purposedly an out of this world story or a psychopath
(I did like the backstory about the twins and their scar stories. I liked how the fortune teller said a scar is just a scar and nothing more 😊
I was glad that no one was making fun of her about the scar and simply curious. I have a scar, or many if including over a dozen surgeries but most scars are hidden. I was just glad it didn't go in that direction at all and wasn't marriage based on scars vs none 😊
Assuming his mom passed away too or heading that way due to the fortune tellers readings.
Jmo in real life, I never understand though, if people are true fortune tellers, telepathic or other similar abilities, then I would think all cold cases could be solved and that all missing people could be found whether alive or not. I'll truly bellieve if someone could ever do that.
(and yes, I think deep into some of these stories lol even if just stories)
It’s rare to see a dark ending to these. Aside from the supernatural stuff, it seems that there was karma somewhat served to the MIL for how she looked at her DIL (and the sister as well), and how she just completely doted over her daughter and neglected her son.
Though based on the comments, it seems most people would just rather have the same antagonist getting served justice in the end. Guess everyone just likes the same formula over and over until it’s time to complain about that.
Don't.
Just. Don't. There's a reason why it's not a good idea to break from the norm.
@@naoyukiogura5299 why is it not a good idea? It seems like there’s always a complaint with these channels, whether it’s the stories being too formulaic, being too long, not having a epilogue, etc.. Sometimes they have no choice but to break from the norm, which in this case, involving the supernatural and having a bad ending.
@@osohombre When you have a channel that has long established the norm of karmic endings, the worst thing you can do is to break AND fail at the attempt.
This video is one such attempt that I’m surprised people aren’t giving enough backlash to it, and I will be making a callout video about it.
@@naoyukiogura5299 Huh.. I stopped watching these for like a year or two, no wonder it felt a little different. I remember people ending up homeless in debt in a wheel chair due to their sins.
@@RalMaybeRoblox At least it makes for good listening content than what this abomination of a story is.
I honestly have no idea what I just watched (listened to) I'm speechless. What happened to the ending.?? Ugh
Hey, writer, did you rin out of crappy endings and you decided to go for crappy entire story to compensate? Please, next time, just plagiarise an episode of Supernatural, it will be just as unbelievable but at least it will have comidic timing
Gary is a psychopath and a sociopath! Here's hoping he gets arrested for all the pure evil he's done and continues to plan to do!
This was a weird one.
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...I think Diane was murdered!! That is...holy heck!!
OMG, he is a vampire 😂
Don't bother with this one, there's no payoff, no "After That", and no karma. It's like they ran out of words and ended it abruptly
Damn
What a load of hogwash. Not finishing this one.
Wth this story made zero sense and crappy ending….
Stop it with the "you see" after so many statements. Do you guys need a proofreader for your scripts??? I will volunteer to do it!!!
That’s your complaint? Like, fuck, the lack of epilogue should be the bigger problem, but given the exclamation point and question mark spam you made, I doubt you’d think that.
After reading the comments, I’m nt watching
Awful wast of time on this one. Too long and a horrible ending to top it off.
This story was wild, I get it and I'm here for the storyline need to make this one a special series.
That was a weird story. The ending didn't make a lot of sense and kind of came out of nowhere.
YIKES! This was BAD! IMPOSSIBLE plotlines. POOR editing. WOWIE-ZOWIE. I wouldn't hire THAT writer/editor again!
That mil is plain evil
your twin must be a Gemini too, wow what a coincident
I see some complaints about the story, but I think it was good
FYI women are called widows and men are called widowers. Use proper terms and stop repeating useless words like saying divorce three times in the same sentence. Hope you don't talk like that in real life
Dude, shut up and quit being a snowflake. Are you 100% perfect? No, you’re not.
Weird, evil and so sad, all part of life 😢
Is there going to be a part 2 for this?
You wish
Nope. This story is just poorly written.
This story gives off witchcraft or voodoo vibes. Not gonna lie. 😨
Right
This would have made a great Halloween video!
Good morning, everyone from Alabama. That was a weird story.
OMG! I know life is unfair, but this is sick!
Nah. I'm not a fan of this one
You know many of the complaints on here are the reason why Good budding writers quit. They write a few "Duds" and everyone gets so pissy and can't understand that sometimes people have off days! Yall need to chill tf out and give the writers a break. If you dont like it, dont listen. I honestly feel that if a writer can make you feel SOMETHING towards the CHARACTERS they do a Good Job!
What did you just write?
Interesting that a boi would take someone else’s work & not provide a link for credit to them, is this socialism, taking what you didn’t earn?
That was creepy.....
Oh for frig sake fortune tellers no real karma ending waste of time
It was premeditated MURDER
Holy carp, this story is utter nonsense. It sounds like the hubby poisoned Diane with a carcinogen.
Nice, for once something that ended up shi**y. Life ain't always sunshine and roses. Thank you for something else for once
What even IS this storyline? And that ending sucked! No bad karma or anything!
What happened to the guy who married Diane
As a reply to all that comments: of course there is Karma, it just doesn’t need to be told explicitly. And this different story has been good entertainment not the usual CEO crap.
ha ha ha no.
Good Lord, such crap.
Ok, i got bored of this halfway through. Not a good one, apple 😌
This story is annoying.
lol,if theres a rating in every story i would rate this story a zero% ,i just wast my time listern to it but no lesson or satisfactory in it😡
Okay, definitely a new writer & I imagine new to writing period. I only got to 10:09 and I am - confused. 🫤
14:54 “your twin must be a gemini too”. 😅 well yes. Because they are twins. What 🫤