This isnt enough for the whole song yet but I wanted to post this in hopes I could get any and all feedback. I want to write relatable lyrics that also resonate with me and others. Please feel free to share an opinion and please dont hold back I want to know genuinely others thoughts on this even negative. Shout out to thatkidgoran for making another absolute banger. I love all your work and have listened to countless beats of yours. Thanks for all the inspiration over the years and tonight, much love from someone who wants to make it with his music some day, keeping being awesome and amazing at what you do ❤ Sometimes i feel like the kid in me is lost forever I sometimes feel like he is gone and will not come again But then a sound a place a song a smell will take me back And then the memories from childhood come rushing in The good times the bad times and the in between The times where I swear I thought I could fly The moment of landing where I realized Were all mortal and were all gonna die Not then though I was in the prime of my youth From watching cartoons, taking naps in my room Play some games, eat some food, and then id go back to school Always hoping every body'd maybe think I was cool But I wasnt thats okay though cuz I loved me I expected nothing and I needed nothing from me Everything just came so easy and naturally So this has to be a different version of me This cant be the same kid when im always anxious Hating and shaming myself acting like ill never make it Like im always faking and my whole lifes a presentation Like its on a set course and theres not a way to change it Do not be mistaken, I am not complaining im just saying Sometimes control seems so far out of my reach and it gets dangerous Living inside of my mind, with these demons inside, trying to fight them off all of the time, but it starts to be draining Sometimes I feel like a warrior in the making Next moment struggle with every breath that I am taking
Old school vibes, feel the rhythm ignite, In a world that's movin’, we keep it tight. The beats never fade, they just evolve, In this game of life, we continue to solve. Verse 2 Streetlights flicker, we gather at night, Underneath the stars, everything feels right. Cyphers in the alleys, where we share our flow, Spittin’ truth and passion, letting everybody know. Hustle in our veins, dreams never sleep, Through the struggles we face, our bond runs deep. From the block to the booth, we’re making our mark, Illuminating the dark, igniting that spark. Chorus Old school vibes, feel the rhythm ignite, In a world that's movin’, we keep it tight. The beats never fade, they just evolve, In this game of life, we continue to solve. Verse 3 Legacies built on the back of our grind, Every verse, every line, crafted and refined. Respect for the legends, who paved the way, Their voices still echo, guiding us today. From the underground scene to the mainstream stage, We carry their spirit, we turn the page. So here’s to the future, but we never forget, The roots of our culture, the love and the sweat. Chorus Old school vibes, feel the rhythm ignite, In a world that's movin’, we keep it tight. The beats never fade, they just evolve, In this game of life, we continue to solve. What do you think? Would you like any changes? 4o mini Get smarter responses, upload files and images, and more. Log in Sign up requestAnimationFrame((function(){window.__oai_logTTI?window.__oai_logTTI():window.__oai_SSR_TTI=window.__oai_SSR_TTI??Date.now()}))
Lost forever in lost whatever’s Indifferent now then back then when I had endeavors Searching again for the optimism that kept me together During the hottest and coldest nights to the wildest weathers Nights that used to cut me up like paper shredders Wanting to feel more alive when I felt deader Stuck in my head praying for better moments Realizing years later I was my worst opponent Procrastination never had to catch up just keep its grip Was a long ride going yet it lasted the trip Killed myself a bit more every night taking another sip Answer was never at the bottom just another ledge I was grabbing when I began to slip Too many days standing in my shadow wondering if I'd see the light Too many nights feeling like God had it out for me or the devil played out of spite Wasn't sure where my head was always at Everyday it felt like I was in a new place tryna combat All my demons and bullshit that would never let me make a comeback
Yooooo brooo that's definitely one of the best written raps I've ever read in the comments on any of kidgorans beats and I have all of his beats in a playlist on a loop bro, mad potential
RelmoMusic - (untitled) Lost forever in this music never overdoing just choosing everything i'm brewing up in a glass show some class, when I push on the gas put on some jazz when we go fast life one hundred, dropping like bubbles not going to fumble about being humble, stay out of trouble stumble on faith, look your destiny great so keep your feet on the ground listen to the music and sound mind goes sourround sound
Lost forever, stuck in translation as i endeavor, so lost i forgot to embed her in my lines, been lost for quite some time idk if it’s a sign, grabin the brine cause im dry need the fluid to kick up an hydrate the mind bc right now my brain be diein inside
I Missed Maze Old Days Maz Frnd Circle Mazi College Amhi Vibe Karaycho Tupac Music Ch na Jarasahi Knowledge 2017 passun ghastpy tarihi Ghari Nahi Ala Tu Kahitari Banun Mala Kiti swapn Marun Basloy Evdha Down To Earth Kasa He Shaharatle Por Mala Vichartat Jo Lahanpani khedala Matit Shetkryacha Porala Kasala Maaj Tyat Nay Mazi Chukun Durun Bhayan Vatat Maz Rup Prtyekjan Mala Bhetlya Nantr Mhnto Vataychy Tuzya Ahankar He Khup Pan Me Asto😮 Mazya Bappa Sampr Natevaer Marta Badhaya Sangta Tyanchya Poranchya Chadhaya Baap Mhnto Maza Sunny Singer He To Pan Khotya Khotya Marto Badhaya Pappach Swapan Hot Ban Abhiyanta Pan Porga Banla Kalakkar Atta Music Mdhye Banaychay Pappa ki Tyache Swaoan Kru Shakel Sakkar Sakali pralhan shinde Ratila kanat arijit Mazya Hrdyala Padle Tade Tari Lihto Premache Geet
Yeh aa tau itna kaiko uchalra mara nai patti to to tu bangaya sanki sunta nai kiska tu bas sunra mere man ki dhire se jala warna jalnege yeh log jyada kuch nai bro bas karra mei smoke teri bein ko sikhadala mne hi hop to fir bolrahi call pe meko video mei jo karra kya wahi hai hip hop Verse: a bhau ruk deta teko ghauv bhai mana mene isliye uthara tu fyda mujhe diss karke bro karra pull up pass rehta to maa kasam karrata teko suck a homie log aara marke bandana latak raha bro tera niche dek banana jo v are bro dekha mene insta post tera dance karke public ko rap ka gyan dera jo v mere issa ka hai bas wahi sab me lera a teri girlfeind mili.perso meko bolri 9 ko dekha kya aaj kal wo dikhta nai aur milta nai meko pehle jaisa mene rply karra bro dekh ye sab likhne nai aara isliye love aong add karra
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I don't always comment, but I always binge 😅 Dope as always! 🔥🔥❤🔥
I appreciate that🙏
This isnt enough for the whole song yet but I wanted to post this in hopes I could get any and all feedback. I want to write relatable lyrics that also resonate with me and others. Please feel free to share an opinion and please dont hold back I want to know genuinely others thoughts on this even negative.
Shout out to thatkidgoran for making another absolute banger. I love all your work and have listened to countless beats of yours. Thanks for all the inspiration over the years and tonight, much love from someone who wants to make it with his music some day, keeping being awesome and amazing at what you do ❤
Sometimes i feel like the kid in me is lost forever
I sometimes feel like he is gone and will not come again
But then a sound a place a song a smell will take me back
And then the memories from childhood come rushing in
The good times the bad times and the in between
The times where I swear I thought I could fly
The moment of landing where I realized
Were all mortal and were all gonna die
Not then though I was in the prime of my youth
From watching cartoons, taking naps in my room
Play some games, eat some food, and then id go back to school
Always hoping every body'd maybe think I was cool
But I wasnt thats okay though cuz I loved me
I expected nothing and I needed nothing from me
Everything just came so easy and naturally
So this has to be a different version of me
This cant be the same kid when im always anxious
Hating and shaming myself acting like ill never make it
Like im always faking and my whole lifes a presentation
Like its on a set course and theres not a way to change it
Do not be mistaken, I am not complaining im just saying
Sometimes control seems so far out of my reach and it gets dangerous
Living inside of my mind, with these demons inside, trying
to fight them off all of the time, but it starts to be draining
Sometimes I feel like a warrior in the making
Next moment struggle with every breath that I am taking
Old school vibes, feel the rhythm ignite,
In a world that's movin’, we keep it tight.
The beats never fade, they just evolve,
In this game of life, we continue to solve.
Verse 2
Streetlights flicker, we gather at night,
Underneath the stars, everything feels right.
Cyphers in the alleys, where we share our flow,
Spittin’ truth and passion, letting everybody know.
Hustle in our veins, dreams never sleep,
Through the struggles we face, our bond runs deep.
From the block to the booth, we’re making our mark,
Illuminating the dark, igniting that spark.
Chorus
Old school vibes, feel the rhythm ignite,
In a world that's movin’, we keep it tight.
The beats never fade, they just evolve,
In this game of life, we continue to solve.
Verse 3
Legacies built on the back of our grind,
Every verse, every line, crafted and refined.
Respect for the legends, who paved the way,
Their voices still echo, guiding us today.
From the underground scene to the mainstream stage,
We carry their spirit, we turn the page.
So here’s to the future, but we never forget,
The roots of our culture, the love and the sweat.
Chorus
Old school vibes, feel the rhythm ignite,
In a world that's movin’, we keep it tight.
The beats never fade, they just evolve,
In this game of life, we continue to solve.
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Like a breath of fresh air for my ears! 🤙🏼
Always worth the wait TKG. Another banger!
Thanks man
My guy lets goo!!🔥🤝
you cooked
Just upload my twist to this. Verse and hook got it going
Lost forever in lost whatever’s
Indifferent now then back then when I had endeavors
Searching again for the optimism that kept me together
During the hottest and coldest nights to the wildest weathers
Nights that used to cut me up like paper shredders
Wanting to feel more alive when I felt deader
Stuck in my head praying for better moments
Realizing years later I was my worst opponent
Procrastination never had to catch up just keep its grip
Was a long ride going yet it lasted the trip
Killed myself a bit more every night taking another sip
Answer was never at the bottom just another ledge I was grabbing when I began to slip
Too many days standing in my shadow wondering if I'd see the light
Too many nights feeling like God had it out for me or the devil played out of spite
Wasn't sure where my head was always at
Everyday it felt like I was in a new place tryna combat
All my demons and bullshit that would never let me make a comeback
Dude do you rap? My exams are going on rn. I am need of people who like to rap. I am a rookie producer and rapper, want to Collab?
Yooooo brooo that's definitely one of the best written raps I've ever read in the comments on any of kidgorans beats and I have all of his beats in a playlist on a loop bro, mad potential
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RelmoMusic - (untitled)
Lost forever in this music
never overdoing just choosing
everything i'm brewing up in a glass
show some class, when
I push on the gas
put on some jazz
when we go fast
life one hundred, dropping like bubbles
not going to fumble
about being humble, stay out of trouble
stumble on faith, look your destiny great
so keep your feet on the ground
listen to the music and sound
mind goes sourround sound
Lost forever, stuck in translation as i endeavor, so lost i forgot to embed her in my lines, been lost for quite some time idk if it’s a sign, grabin the brine cause im dry need the fluid to kick up an hydrate the mind bc right now my brain be diein inside
I Missed Maze Old Days
Maz Frnd Circle Mazi College
Amhi Vibe Karaycho Tupac
Music Ch na Jarasahi Knowledge
2017 passun ghastpy tarihi
Ghari Nahi Ala Tu Kahitari Banun
Mala
Kiti swapn Marun Basloy
Evdha Down To Earth Kasa
He Shaharatle Por Mala Vichartat
Jo Lahanpani khedala Matit
Shetkryacha Porala Kasala Maaj
Tyat Nay Mazi Chukun
Durun Bhayan Vatat Maz Rup
Prtyekjan Mala Bhetlya Nantr Mhnto
Vataychy Tuzya Ahankar He Khup
Pan Me Asto😮
Mazya Bappa Sampr Natevaer Marta Badhaya
Sangta Tyanchya Poranchya Chadhaya
Baap Mhnto Maza Sunny Singer He
To Pan Khotya Khotya Marto Badhaya
Pappach Swapan Hot Ban Abhiyanta
Pan Porga Banla Kalakkar
Atta Music Mdhye Banaychay Pappa
ki Tyache Swaoan Kru Shakel Sakkar
Sakali pralhan shinde
Ratila kanat arijit
Mazya Hrdyala Padle Tade
Tari Lihto Premache Geet
Yeh aa tau itna kaiko uchalra mara nai patti to to tu bangaya sanki sunta nai kiska tu bas sunra mere man ki dhire se jala warna jalnege yeh log jyada kuch nai bro bas karra mei smoke teri bein ko sikhadala mne hi hop to fir bolrahi call pe meko video mei jo karra kya wahi hai hip hop
Verse: a bhau ruk deta teko ghauv bhai mana mene isliye uthara tu fyda mujhe diss karke bro karra pull up pass rehta to maa kasam karrata teko suck a homie log aara marke bandana latak raha bro tera niche dek banana jo v are bro dekha mene insta post tera dance karke public ko rap ka gyan dera jo v mere issa ka hai bas wahi sab me lera a teri girlfeind mili.perso meko bolri 9 ko dekha kya aaj kal wo dikhta nai aur milta nai meko pehle jaisa mene rply karra bro dekh ye sab likhne nai aara isliye love aong add karra