Twilight rain Holy God Please stay Don't forsake me today As I'm stuck in this drain We're worlds apart Deciphering your art Mother nature in a drought In the beginning was your word Beating on your chest with clout While I sit here and pout What's in your plan Since the foundation of your nailed scarred hand Considering my sins? How? Am I Eve? Am I Adam? The Tree Or the talking serpent In between? Wise fool times 3 Sometimes I'm an atheist as you can see Yelling to the wind that's unseen How am I supposed to know your dimension You gave me theses set of eyes that can barely see Anyhow I just don't know what to say Lord I miss you I'm struggling Didn't you know me? Wasn't I on your mind Seems so much better when I was a kid Time grew to fast as I'm catching this rain in a cup But I messed up I fell from your grace you say Carrying that cross you say You did it for me you say But I don't understand the message today I'm to old for this Lord I need that child like faith Don't you remember me? I'm not a murderer like Cain Don't you hear our blood running through Our veins? what does it say? Here's that cup of rain I'm on the other side of this bow, Today It's my tears as I pray Writer Ryan K Pendley
Thanks for your question! The undergraduate courses cost $1,545 for 3-credit tuition or $1,290 for non-credit tuition, and the graduate courses cost $2,817 for 3-credit tuition or $2,615 for non-credit tuition.
She isn't comparing/contrasting Las Vegas and love. She is using the stereotypical/concepts of Las Vegas to explain/characterise her love. If the theme was 'I found love in Las Vegas' and spent the song talking about how unbelievable it was to find love in a place like las vegas, then you'd call it juxtaposition.
fish in the sun from the cyclone It came from the ocean and it found a home God must have given me a happy sole because She waits for me to smile and let the dankness go
😂 her first metaphor for love was "gamble". What 12 year old writing a crush poem hasn't done that...since the invention of gambling? Kenny Rodgers gets a pass
Great video, thank you for the amazing content. Very well articulated. She is a Great teacher, and speaker. I was captivated - that says a lot for me and my a.d.d . Lol. No joke really. I’d love to chat with her anytime 👍
idk but this insight has certainly helped someone win 7 grammys oh wait, but those songs that won weren't exactly lyrically best from the artist, it was actually pretty sub par compared the artitst's normal work, why is that? Because the grammy doesn't give a crap about good songwriting, it cares about hits, it cares about the charts, which necessarily isn't a bad thing but my point here is that grammy doesn't scale anyone's musical abilities, its scales their ability to know their audience and make the most easily digestible, sing along music, not songs with complexity, the ones that have deep meanings in lyrics, the lyrics should be easily processed by any average listener in a hit.
Great video, loved the way you explained the topic well, the meaphors by Pat are very creative.
I like it! Great idea, to get the lyrical juices flowing.
WOW!!! Loved the examples. Made it look easy. Thank you so much.
Dude when he said let's do another metaphor I thought the ocean and a relationship and she used the ocean! Mind blown 💥
This was great description.
Thank you! This helped.
Twilight rain
Holy God
Please stay
Don't forsake me today
As I'm stuck in this drain
We're worlds apart
Deciphering your art
Mother nature in a drought
In the beginning was your word
Beating on your chest with clout
While I sit here and pout
What's in your plan
Since the foundation of your nailed scarred hand
Considering my sins? How?
Am I Eve?
Am I Adam?
The Tree
Or the talking serpent
In between?
Wise fool times 3
Sometimes I'm an atheist as you can see
Yelling to the wind that's unseen
How am I supposed to know your dimension
You gave me theses set of eyes that can barely see
Anyhow I just don't know what to say Lord
I miss you
I'm struggling
Didn't you know me?
Wasn't I on your mind
Seems so much better when I was a kid
Time grew to fast as I'm catching this rain in a cup
But I messed up
I fell from your grace you say
Carrying that cross you say
You did it for me you say
But I don't understand the message today
I'm to old for this Lord
I need that child like faith
Don't you remember me?
I'm not a murderer like Cain
Don't you hear our blood running through Our veins?
what does it say?
Here's that cup of rain
I'm on the other side of this bow,
Today
It's my tears as I pray
Writer
Ryan K Pendley
what book by Pat Patterson is she talking about ?
Writing better lyrics for sure.
There's a free course in coursera with the same name, given by Mr. Pat.
Book is actually Songwriting Without Boundaries.
whats the cost of an online class at berklee?
Thanks for your question! The undergraduate courses cost $1,545 for 3-credit tuition or $1,290 for non-credit tuition, and the graduate courses cost $2,817 for 3-credit tuition or $2,615 for non-credit tuition.
Amazing tip 😀
My flows a tidal wave like I angered the gods. Loves a gamble like a vegas trip. JXXL
I feel dumber
😂 is that kindergarten shit really the first metaphor she chose?
NO STAIRWAY TO HEAVEN UNLESS YOU'RE KENNY RODGERS!
Cmon, this is Berklee.
so basically, everything piece of lyrical wisdom actually comes from Pat Pattinson
Disagree. Your definition of collision implies juxtaposition.
She isn't comparing/contrasting Las Vegas and love. She is using the stereotypical/concepts of Las Vegas to explain/characterise her love. If the theme was 'I found love in Las Vegas' and spent the song talking about how unbelievable it was to find love in a place like las vegas, then you'd call it juxtaposition.
fish in the sun from the cyclone
It came from the ocean and it found a home
God must have given me a happy sole
because She waits for me to smile and let the dankness go
How many can catch the depth of this on a spiritual level?
Please explains it to me 😅
@@oilinmyface787 I shouldn’t have even commented lol 😂
@@bloomseason583 oh come on, now I'm more than curious 😁 you could write me a secret email or message somewhere 😉
😂 her first metaphor for love was "gamble". What 12 year old writing a crush poem hasn't done that...since the invention of gambling?
Kenny Rodgers gets a pass
What’s the name of the pat book
"with an iron clad fist, i wake up, french kiss the morning" JBJ
poped into my head as i watched
okkay
Don’t French kiss the mourning, pat them on the back and give them a hug 🤗 lol
I was following well until she entered into topic of omniscience.. how is being all-knowing angry? haha
If you were all-knowing and you saw what was happeining on this little planet in this corner of the galaxy you'd be angry too
@@romeod7549 yo that’s a great perspective
lol she did not talk about metaphors, it was similies.
Yeah, I was actually hoping she would elucidate on how we are taught that was wrong.
u felt a bit of personification as well
Awesome thanks you
This video is absolutely amazing. Thanks for sharing!
Great video, thank you for the amazing content. Very well articulated. She is a Great teacher, and speaker. I was captivated - that says a lot for me and my a.d.d . Lol. No joke really. I’d love to chat with her anytime 👍
Pop quiz, "What does an angry God do?" :)
so how many grammys has she won with all this deep song writing insight?
idk but this insight has certainly helped someone win 7 grammys
oh wait, but those songs that won weren't exactly lyrically best from the artist, it was actually pretty sub par compared the artitst's normal work, why is that?
Because the grammy doesn't give a crap about good songwriting, it cares about hits, it cares about the charts, which necessarily isn't a bad thing but my point here is that grammy doesn't scale anyone's musical abilities, its scales their ability to know their audience and make the most easily digestible, sing along music, not songs with complexity, the ones that have deep meanings in lyrics, the lyrics should be easily processed by any average listener in a hit.
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
phenomenal
What a beautiful coach and instructor ❤️❤️❤️