From Has A Serious Writing Problem

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  • Опубликовано: 20 окт 2024

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  • @therico5377
    @therico5377 22 дня назад +43

    The one thing that annoys me about this show is the lack of communication between characters. If I were the leader, I would have a weekly town hall meeting, where all the residents would report any strange/weird occurances that they have seen/heard, or any places that they have discovered.

    • @WinteryRachel
      @WinteryRachel 22 дня назад

      It's hack writing, unfortunately. It's the easiest way to create a conflict or crisis.

    • @alexpowers5117
      @alexpowers5117 21 день назад

      What did you see boyd
      Boyd: I gotta go

    • @timproc9355
      @timproc9355 21 день назад

      @@therico5377 there was a scene with Fatima and Elgin explaining this.

  • @WinteryRachel
    @WinteryRachel 22 дня назад +12

    I am so glad someone is finally saying this. The writing is sub-par. The only reason I am so invested in the show is that I love the concept and it's (for the most part) well acted. However, so much of the writing feels focused on 3 episode story arcs, as opposed to a truly cohesive narrative.

    • @anatolyalekseev101
      @anatolyalekseev101 22 дня назад +1

      Another good thing is that writing, despite making most of the characters idiots, is still more or less logical. Also I like that they have left many clues spread over entire series, like rats eating a raven in the basement, etc, that you at first don't pay attention to unless you UNDERSTAND them after someone finally tells you.

  • @tenglobalmedia1473
    @tenglobalmedia1473 22 дня назад +24

    one important point to note about the feasibility of the irrationality of the decisions for the characters, is that under extreme stress and duress, humans, especially in large groups, living under extreme fear, stress and life threatening ( not to mention horrific ) circumstances for a long period of time would do unreasonable and seemingly stupid things. We have to remember these characters haven't slept for a long period of time, probably weeks. Their decision- making and actions are going to be beyond questionable especially to people like us, observing from the fourth wall perspective.

    • @anatolyalekseev101
      @anatolyalekseev101 22 дня назад +1

      Disagree. First off, it's not possible to not sleep for weeks. Secondly, humans are known to be very flexible and can accommodate to literally any living situation.

    • @alexpowers5117
      @alexpowers5117 21 день назад

      I would be pissed if monsters knock on my door I would take action also boredom can be a powerful motivator

    •  19 дней назад

      @tenglobalmedia1473 how long is that gonna be a excuse gang cuz holy fwk some of the people been their for years

  • @qmnnvrdyz8965
    @qmnnvrdyz8965 16 дней назад +1

    From what I understand, Frank was suppose to nail the windows shut, so they couldn't be opened, not "board" them up. But, yes, alot of things are goofy!

  • @jeremiahboothe
    @jeremiahboothe 22 дня назад +4

    The reason they were mad at the guy who got his family killed by not nailing his windows shut was because the entities manipulate people into opening them, and had manipulated his daughter who easily opened the window, if it were nailed shut, she wouldn't have been able to open it.

    •  21 день назад +1

      I blame the mom she was standing right their whispering to her kid acting like she can-hear she should've been running and yelling at her to get away from the door

  • @cqwinton
    @cqwinton 22 дня назад +11

    Boyd told Frank to nail the windows shut not board them up. Maybe the homes with kids should be boarded up though. 🤔

    • @Ressic
      @Ressic 22 дня назад +4

      You're right! I they missed the quote from that 1st episode scene where Boyd is berating the father. He says "if you have kids, you nail your windows shut!"
      Most people don't have kids.

    • @Ash.Crow.Goddess
      @Ash.Crow.Goddess 22 дня назад

      They only have one kid. Lock him in at night.

  • @shaquilleknights3197
    @shaquilleknights3197 22 дня назад +7

    The only unrealistic thing is the fact that no ome wuestions Victor or keep track of where he is/going. The townspeople died from his time what tf did he do after? How'd he survive? Why wasn't he eaten?

  • @MrJroc58
    @MrJroc58 22 дня назад +36

    Actually you’re over analyzing. They had to get the animals, IT’S THE FOOD

    • @cqwinton
      @cqwinton 22 дня назад +6

      @@MrJroc58 Agreed. If it wasn't their last and only food source they probably wouldn't have gone out to get them.

    • @Yella451
      @Yella451 22 дня назад

      exactly

    • @TheDrew718
      @TheDrew718 22 дня назад +8

      So where exactly would a cow wonder off to that it can’t be found the next day? If the cows could find a way out of Fromville, well then…

    • @americantroy77
      @americantroy77 22 дня назад +1

      @@TheDrew718facts

    • @Ash.Crow.Goddess
      @Ash.Crow.Goddess 22 дня назад +3

      I disagree. They're only going so far. As soon as Boyd went exploring through the forest, he found them. They are not out of food today. That gives them time to go find them in the day light. The only thing you'd worry about is them freezing. But I don't think it's that cold out yet. There's time to regroup and deal with it. If Boyd didn't run out all crazy like, the others wouldn't have either.

  • @drippi2129
    @drippi2129 22 дня назад +8

    As the seasons go on we're seeing that the emperor has no clothes, in terms of the writing for this show.

  • @americantroy77
    @americantroy77 22 дня назад +6

    My wife’s job has a morning stand up where they all must meet and talk about what happened yesterday Fromville definitely needs a daily morning stand up.

    • @WinteryRachel
      @WinteryRachel 21 день назад

      @@americantroy77 Like, for real. It seemed like Boyd did bit more of that in the beginning. He doesn’t ring the bell anymore or anything.

  • @lisasimpson8895
    @lisasimpson8895 22 дня назад +14

    if the characters were smart, there would be no show hahahah

    • @BKRouteTV
      @BKRouteTV 22 дня назад

      this can't be true is it?

    • @in2dbox
      @in2dbox 22 дня назад +3

      That’s just lazy writer’s mindset

    •  21 день назад +1

      Don't even have to be smart just use common sense cuz all yall are saying right now is if the characters used common sense the show would be over that means the writing is really bad PERIOD WE NEED MORONS OR ELSE THE STORY STILL BE OVER LIKE WHAT THE HELL

    •  21 день назад +1

      ​@@in2dbox people like lazy writers so they dont have to actually think

    • @iamnwb
      @iamnwb 21 день назад

      The show would be better if they were smart

  • @karmaserene
    @karmaserene 22 дня назад +4

    Why doesn’t anyone believe anyone else when they’re literally in that town?

    •  21 день назад

      Exactly!!

  • @timproc9355
    @timproc9355 22 дня назад +1

    1.Fatima addressed the information sharing already with Elgin. She said they tried, and they could never figure anything out because it never made sense. She hints at it being a taboo because some went crazy trying to figure it out. Victor addressed it with Jade and told him to stop pursing his visions because bad things again a taboo.
    2.They stopped boarding up when they got the talismans. The simple reason for getting rid of the boards is for light and air flow. Imagine a house that is closed off from air flow. Major example being the community house it would reek. They simply let their guard down because they went thru what 100+ some days I can't remember atm. Yes, people do at the worst times and places. I'm in the military and seen even the most disciplined people drop their standards in hostile environments.
    3. Lot of the people doing stuff also comes down to the entity or whatever's influences. Yes, it's pretty much a plot armor but it has been shown particularly Sara from the start. Now we are seeing it with Boyd being the focus of the entity(s) and a tool. Bringing the worm/dream monster to town for example.
    4. It's established that woods have no exit and change at a whim. Boyd has the most experience going into them outside of Victor. But now he has an understanding how bad it is, and they can bring thing back to town that are dangerous. We also don't know how long it took them to round up all of them since Boyd been there for a several years and it started with him. Losing a cow in the woods for even a week is a dead sentence at their current state.

  • @stephenhonnan1537
    @stephenhonnan1537 21 день назад +2

    It would be pretty boring if they did all the things you’ve said, some people share information but most of them just accept they can’t leave and when it’s dark go in your house. This season they will share more info and go on the attack FINALLY

    •  21 день назад

      Basically the writing is bad because any shred of common sense would destroy every thing

    • @purrfitazitgetz3365
      @purrfitazitgetz3365 19 дней назад

      We hope but Dey do a lot of dumb shidd and if I depend on dese people to protect my life and my kids what’s wrong with communicating wid dem

  • @xSDxReaper
    @xSDxReaper 22 дня назад +2

    yelled at him for not boarding up the windows because he was the only one with a kid

  •  21 день назад +2

    3:02 he chose to go in the box no one forced him boyd said himself it was just for show

  • @DeathSocrates
    @DeathSocrates 22 дня назад +1

    The windows most likely don't need to be boarded up because of the magic rocks. The diner specifically doesn't have any boards over the windows because no one lives there.

  • @iamnwb
    @iamnwb 21 день назад

    The realest reviewer about From. Thank you.

  • @anatolyalekseev101
    @anatolyalekseev101 22 дня назад

    Dude, I totally agree with you ) What's also irritating, instead of working all day long in the field, the Fromville inhabitants are always fucking around doing nothing. And then they suddenly: "Boyd, we're out of food...". As if only that now-passed-away Chinese woman has to cook for 30 or 40 persons daily just out of her kindness. The only explanation is that Fromville influences people and makes everyone dumber, otherwise I can't explain why Victor and Tabita are hiding existence of the monster cave, given that literally each day monsters are feeding on someone new, potentially children.

  • @skullscorp
    @skullscorp 22 дня назад +4

    If character were more intelligent then you would have totally different plot. Unfortunately, they need to be stupid at times. For example if you made them totally smart then you would have to end the plot in one season.

  • @mysticmissy2598
    @mysticmissy2598 22 дня назад +1

    No Boyd said they have to board up the windows IF they have kids

  • @paint6255
    @paint6255 22 дня назад +1

    Dan Underscore has a serious explaining and thinking problem..

  • @vinayak90417
    @vinayak90417 22 дня назад +1

    Don't overcalculate things.. it's a good show apart from some communication error btw people..maybe cuz of extreme stress i don't care it's still a solid show to watch🤷🏻‍♂️

    •  21 день назад

      Naaa theyve been in their long enough for that not to be an-excuse

  • @LNVKRmusic
    @LNVKRmusic 21 день назад

    nice video! you made a lot of very good points! as someone who loves this show and always recommends it, I have had issues with the stupidity of the characters and lack of communication! it has got to be shown in more detail if there are reasons why they (the main characters at least) aren't sharing all the information they have to get more brains on the problems! i was overall a fan of the first episode of S3 but the end couldn't of happened if they didn't act stupid! i hope they don't rely on characters being dumb in order to move the plot for the rest of this season because thar could be what ruins the show IMO!

  • @colt5189
    @colt5189 22 дня назад

    I bet From becomes like Heroes. Where it keeps sliding off a cliff every season after the awesome first season.

  • @mismismism
    @mismismism 22 дня назад +2

    I'm holding out hope but they are doing the same thing I hated about season 2 already. No one communicates wo they look like idiots and it's frustrating to watch. Jim, Boyd, Jade and Tabitha worked my nerves this episode, Ethan too actually because I started rewatching the show to refresh myself on the million mysterious things they hinted at that haven't gone anywhere yet and the first episode Boyd puts that guy in a cage because he didn't nail the window shut knowing kids are stupid(even though his wife was there and didn't even try to stop it), but yet that doesn't apply to Ethan even though he constantly does reckless, stupid child things. He was missing at the beginning of the episode, why is it even possible for him to get out at night or open anything? And don't get me started on Boyd, not even a lock on the barn? Even if they somehow didn't worry about the monsters, the other humans are trying to take them.
    For a show like this to work, the writers need to pay attention to details. We're supposed to believe that all these things have meaning and will come together but they can't even put the characters in scenes that make their actions make sense.
    I'm giving it a few episodes to feel it out but between that and already adding more monsters with whatever the cabins and totems are, I'm concerned.

  • @REALDUDEUNIVERSE
    @REALDUDEUNIVERSE 22 дня назад +1

    here's a little mystery i figured out, victor was not alone for 40 years in FROMLAND. where he was and who he was with i don't know

  • @ericwilll8522
    @ericwilll8522 22 дня назад +8

    They already said in season one that you nail in the windows to prevent children from opening. You only board up the opening if it was compromised/broken. You need to rewatch season one instead of putting out misinformation. I feel like you continuously do this..

    • @ericwilll8522
      @ericwilll8522 22 дня назад +1

      The reason Boyd flipped out in episode 2 was because the father didn’t nail the windows shut, not because he didn’t board the windows. Dude you definitely need to look more into the videos you make.

    • @ericwilll8522
      @ericwilll8522 22 дня назад +1

      The obvious reason why they stopped boarding up the windows was when Boyd found the talismans.

    •  21 день назад

      ​@@ericwilll8522 u do realize they had the talisman is ep1 and 2 the only reason the monster got in is because the kid let it them in the mom was sitting right their and did nothing to stop it

  • @arnoldbrindza7601
    @arnoldbrindza7601 22 дня назад +2

    What pisses me off the most is how they go out to explore and just come right back for no real reason
    First Boyd and Sara and then Kenny and fuckface

    • @arnoldbrindza7601
      @arnoldbrindza7601 22 дня назад

      There was no reason for them to come back other than bitching out both times

  •  21 день назад

    The goats and cows weren't going to far he couldve waited till the morning

  • @purrfitazitgetz3365
    @purrfitazitgetz3365 19 дней назад

    Ethan opening da door for a goat @ night really put da FN icing on da cake

  • @thesetoppicks
    @thesetoppicks 19 дней назад

    Guys I think you are all missing something. This place has bad energy. And the same way it has healed some people it has caused victor to loose / suppress memories and if it can do that im more than sure it is affecting everyone's sense of reason!!! The longer your there i believe this happens. So the lack of information sharing is being caused by the affects of the town.

  • @ikariuswings
    @ikariuswings 19 дней назад

    You make a good point of the the search by Jim, but i like the writing as a whole... a mistake once or twice is human... people are stupid... that's what humans do...

  • @carlie-10
    @carlie-10 21 день назад +1

    I don’t agree with what you say, also if they all got together and talked first few seasons it would be over. Also it’s only been weeks in from since the Mathews came. So realistically they have not really been there that long. And all had their own stuff to deal with. I think the writers are great. Some mishaps but that can happen.

    •  21 день назад

      Ur argument goes out the window when u choose to ignore bad writing leaving info for no reason is dumb

    • @carlie-10
      @carlie-10 21 день назад

      I don’t feel it’s bad writing that’s just my opinion.

  • @CT5VnewEra5365
    @CT5VnewEra5365 22 дня назад +6

    If you don’t like the show/writing then just stop watchin it😑 and you wouldn’t have anything to complain about!😒✅

    • @anatolyalekseev101
      @anatolyalekseev101 22 дня назад +1

      If you don’t like the criticism of the show/writing then just stop watchin it😑 and you wouldn’t have anything to complain about!😒✅

  • @pierreaston7709
    @pierreaston7709 22 дня назад +1

    I agree with the fact that these characters seem to be allergic to communication. I agree that asking Boyd how to get to the tower rather than Victor when the whole reason theyre going is to find Tabitha and Victor was who took her there... thats goofy. But some of this youre just over analyzing. Im sure Boyd's character would have known it was possibly a trap to draw them outside, but he couldnt have known some of the creatures were already in the barn. And Frank was scolded for not boarding his windows because he had a child. Thats the rule... "if you have kids you nail the windows shut!!!". Its not mandatory that everyone nail their windows. After discovering the talismans Im sure they took the boards off the windows because they knew as long as they keep them shut they were straight and being able to let the sunshine in and have some sense of normalcy is a must in a constant high stress situation like this. Thats why Soldiers and Marines will decorate their hooches in combat zones.

  • @regularguy3879
    @regularguy3879 22 дня назад

    I enjoy the show but I'm afraid it will end up similar to lost, too much unanswered questions + creating more still. The show relies heavily on mystery but not at all on explanation

  • @BKRouteTV
    @BKRouteTV 22 дня назад

    that guy had to just be suicidal there is no way he just trusted her lol

  • @jahivah
    @jahivah 22 дня назад

    Thanks for calling out the obvious. The premise of the show is excellent, but the execution has been betond poor. There are way too many useless characters, some seemingly with no purpose and zero logic to their actions. Why don't they set traps for the monsters? Why has no one tried to learn more from Victor? Guns don't work against the monsters, but lets just keep them and shoot them nonetheless. Why no town hall meetings focused on problem solving?

  • @REALDUDEUNIVERSE
    @REALDUDEUNIVERSE 22 дня назад +1

    Dan , i love your commentary , and i agree, the producers of this show have not given us one answer and they never will. and if they do it will be at the end of the show and the answers will be lame. did you ever watch LOST?

  • @t_the_rex
    @t_the_rex 21 день назад

    You are doing too much. Just because a character makes a bad decision or doesn’t act like you think they should doesn’t mean the writing is bad. The writing is to keep people engaged, so they will write things so people will yell at the tv screen. Have you never seen a scary movie when people run in the wrong direction and the audience yells at how that was a dumb move.

  • @The_Barefoot_Wrestler8824
    @The_Barefoot_Wrestler8824 22 дня назад +5

    you take this seriously than you should its not real, its tv. you came for the 11 year old like he was a grown man in real life who chased the goat lol . Relax some, its only tv. Not many tv shows make complete 100 percent logical real life sense.

  • @supervillain246
    @supervillain246 21 день назад

    Can we not bash the damn show

    •  21 день назад

      So just suck the show off

  • @Ets638
    @Ets638 22 дня назад

    Gee I wonder how many show ideas Dan has tried to finesse with no luck? Better just stop watching because this show has given you an odd way of sentence structure and very strange voice and accent. Jarring to our ears 👂.

  • @bubsrt
    @bubsrt 22 дня назад +5

    i mean i kinda agree but if u care this much just dont watch the show lmao

    • @smallkok3566
      @smallkok3566 22 дня назад +1

      he can watch and have his own opinion lmao

    • @mandolyn
      @mandolyn 21 день назад

      ​@smallkok3566 Certainly, people have opinions but to be watching a show and seeing all that's happening and then making a video or batching in comment sections about how much smarter you are or how much better you'd handle things in this nightmare situation is a little strange but congratulations I guess.

  • @RedTail1-1
    @RedTail1-1 22 дня назад

    Was not expecting the heavy accent... Very jarring...

  • @Yummynomnom123
    @Yummynomnom123 22 дня назад

    first