I watched the whole video and here's some advice: The story could use a bit of work! It's a good plot idea but it could use some more scenes such as prophesies and a reason as to why Carla became a monster, you could also give us more background on everyone's story and why they hate Carla. I also suggest being more serious when talking in RP instead of joking around or using emojis. Hope the criticism helps!
She mom biru pup but can't want Rainbow pup but sad think doing... Pup she sad green... But she not pup Rainbow... She mom and pup Rainbow same... Sedih pup green... Not help me... What happened just who... But my pup green sad... Nobody idk know... She know just who pup Rainbow... She exterior... But died who... Ok guys... Thanks you guys video 600k... Bye bye...
Hmm ok pretty good,I’ll give you some tips so you can do the recoding better! tip 1: you can get set up with the things you need BEFORE THE RP tip 2 :maybe you could clear the chat after setting up! Tip 3:you’d probably want to edit with CapCut?tip 4: if you have a computer and you’re good at using it, you can record on laptop,and then post it on YT with your laptop if you don’t know how, just ask some thechyy peoples or something.. tip 5 just umm ask for a helper to do commands so you don’t have to type it too much… yep… that’s all the tips I probably feeling sweaty so it’s the end I hope you read this tip message bye.
WAIT ITS ME MAELY maely23456 omg thx
Do not be mean to Carla she will turn creepy so creepy😢
Carla is scary slime pup :(
I watched the whole video and here's some advice: The story could use a bit of work! It's a good plot idea but it could use some more scenes such as prophesies and a reason as to why Carla became a monster, you could also give us more background on everyone's story and why they hate Carla. I also suggest being more serious when talking in RP instead of joking around or using emojis. Hope the criticism helps!
She mom biru pup but can't want Rainbow pup but sad think doing... Pup she sad green... But she not pup Rainbow... She mom and pup Rainbow same... Sedih pup green... Not help me... What happened just who... But my pup green sad... Nobody idk know... She know just who pup Rainbow... She exterior... But died who... Ok guys... Thanks you guys video 600k... Bye bye...
i hope green pup is gonna be okay i wel get revenge your hater sis okay?
Can i join if there is part 2? Acc is adadorcasph
Hmm ok pretty good,I’ll give you some tips so you can do the recoding better! tip 1: you can get set up with the things you need BEFORE THE RP tip 2 :maybe you could clear the chat after setting up! Tip 3:you’d probably want to edit with CapCut?tip 4: if you have a computer and you’re good at using it, you can record on laptop,and then post it on YT with your laptop if you don’t know how, just ask some thechyy peoples or something.. tip 5 just umm ask for a helper to do commands so you don’t have to type it too much… yep… that’s all the tips I probably feeling sweaty so it’s the end I hope you read this tip message bye.
Red one doesn’t deserve it
Cool. But You Should Add Some Art And Effects It Will Make It Better! Even Though It Is ^^
So Cool I like how rad pup is not nice but lime pup is nice
" Comedy Gold "
Wow i like ghost the slime pup this is cool by houd
I Love The story and i love your keyboard 💖💖💖💖💖
While watching this I got dia out of nowhere
The thing more scary is what in sound hears NC running and axe hitting when is in private server
I like it ✨
I like your keyboard.
I think the Carla pup that turned rainbow was the favorite one
The diamond was sleeping the whole night Xd