@@Jestmeow ah, this is a prelude, I tryed to take Byron's text as if it was a song. However I became too tired when I needed to decide shall I do the other parts of the poem (there's only the first one)
@@Camille_Hargraves can't get the form abrupt changes without any reason (used google translate) Short (which is not bad, but didn't give a time to realize, what is happening), and not fully explained by the music. Like, you saying Prometheus is smth and etc., and in random moment you say qofuxjwvriayqjwho (ending with that). Can't say all problems, but eh I'm not a teacher, just saying what did say to me.
@@ImJumber ah, I see, thanks you. About the form, it is also hard to me, Byron has 14 lines and yeah, it's at least even number but still has very hard phrasing, besides the text be like unstopable phrase and it's really difficult for me to set some pauses somewhere.
you made me stare at the screen smiling as I heard it
amazing, sick af
@@eeeeeeeeee9 thanks! I'm very happy u liked it!
Sounds nice. Wish it was longer though
@@Jestmeow ah, this is a prelude, I tryed to take Byron's text as if it was a song. However I became too tired when I needed to decide shall I do the other parts of the poem (there's only the first one)
But anyway, thanks you!
Strange piece
But, nice
Thanks, but why strange, ahaha?
@@Camille_Hargraves can't get the form
abrupt changes without any reason (used google translate)
Short (which is not bad, but didn't give a time to realize, what is happening), and not fully explained by the music.
Like, you saying Prometheus is smth and etc., and in random moment you say qofuxjwvriayqjwho (ending with that).
Can't say all problems, but eh
I'm not a teacher, just saying what did say to me.
@@ImJumber ah, I see, thanks you. About the form, it is also hard to me, Byron has 14 lines and yeah, it's at least even number but still has very hard phrasing, besides the text be like unstopable phrase and it's really difficult for me to set some pauses somewhere.