Garden of Rest (Original Song: Demo)

Rough recording of a new original song. The image is 'Vampire' by Edvard Munch.
Credit to Ian for sparking the idea for this song. Lyrics below.
He can take or leave me
That's what he said
Now I'm all gone
Disappear to grieve
What I thought I had
And still feels like I lost
I suppose we're not the same, it's been a long time
But I'd have took your name as mine
Vampire in the garden
Make me perfect
Make me young
Lie me in the leaves
My heart in your mouth
Blood on my tongue
I don't need to reflect
I can't see myself any more, anyway
Perfect, solemn eyes
White smile
I'm waiting for night
Take me, drink me down
I'm waiting for
Your last rite
Look so stormy-eyed
I'm praying still
Death be kind
Share my bones around
Then hold me for
The last time

[@prismonthethehorizon5793]

Sbsolutely love those two verse from Vampire in the garden, so good Seamus.

[@dominikpokorny]

A very pleasant song and I'm subscriber number 100 🙂

[@seamuscolemanmusic]

Thank you very much! I really appreciate you listening and for being my 100th subscriber! Thanks again. 🙂

[@animaginaryboy_]

Fantastic songwriting. I love the premise. The lines “I suppose we’re not the same” and “I don’t need to reflect; I can’t see myself anymore any way” relate together nicely in my mind.
I hope you’re able to release all of your demos one day.

[@seamuscolemanmusic]

Thank you so much, I really do appreciate that you continue to listen to my music. It means a lot to me. I'm working on recording the rest of the songs I've written over the past year or so, but they will probably sound pretty rough. But I will put them out there at some point. Thank you again.

[@CpAj1]

You voice is ravishing, very pleasant and nice. I enjoyed the harmonies. I also create music and this was a real treat thanks for sharing. New subscriber! Your on a roll today I see you have another below lol.

[@seamuscolemanmusic]

Wow thank you for such a kind comment. And thank you for subscribing! I really appreciate it, and I'll be checking out your music too. Thanks again.

[@CpAj1]

@@seamuscolemanmusic Your so welcome, thank you :).