@@fireblaze6047 long story short i started in 2016 was on the grind for 2 years then took a 1 year brake and came back and made a few more animation until i made this the ones i made i have only shown to friends but this i decided to make public cause they liked it so much
Thanks for the criticism but Imma have give valid answers all of your critiques? (I have no clue how to put it) with the animation. For camera movement the animation just looks stiff which you never want in animation imo, with my *5* years of experience (technically 3.5 since I took like a half a year brake then another 1 year) I have learnt that it just looks bland that if the camera just stays in one place or if it just moves when the character moves, I have tried to mess with the camera a lot throughout the entirety of me making this animation and at a certain point of the animation after I had already finished the scene it felt like it was missing something that made it look slow and stand out compared to the fast pace animation that came before it, but when I made the camera follow Saitama in a way that didn't look bad it changed the entire way the scene looked and made it look *better*, i will say this though, maybe the shakes are a bit much cause I am not used to making them, otherwise the "much extra" is quite the opposite, that is what makes the animation look like an animation that isn't stiff. and as for the transformation, I have tried to focus on them a bit more, but when I did the animations momentum fell apart and it would then go from fast to slow then fast out of nowhere cause of my animation style being fast, BUT that doesn't mean I couldn't change the scene to slow and then ramp up again, i could have done that, since I have never done that, i didn't think of it up until now, my 5 years of experience was only for fast paced action which would only get faster and faster. (The slow part at the end was just to make the animation longer that's the only reason I made it, I say this cuz it practically would ruin the entire point I just made lol) But the transformation critique is valid and I will make sure to make transformations in the future which slow and then ramp up again to start the fight And at the end of it all I think what you dislike from what I can tell is the fast pace animation itself which doesn't allow you to process whats going on which confuses you ig (I can't say much since I have seen the animation frame by frame at least 20 times) Anyway besides that thanks again for the criticism I will make sure to keep them in mind for my next animations (which won't be as fast paced)
Bruh this animation is indeed rushed, I didn't think anyone outside my friend group would actually see it so I just made one for fun xd but my next one won't be as bad I promise, imma take your criticism and try my best to implement it into my new one (but doubt 100 if anyone will see that one cuz it has nothing to do with one punch man or dbz) edit: i changed my mind it is about dragon ball.
Very good animation, it shows that you have potential, thanks for the video, a new sub and a like bye bye.
Gokus transformations were as quick as hell...man!!. I couldn't even see him charge up or transform😂
*when I thought no one would see it outside my friend group I didn't try hard to make It look good. But boi was I wrong...*
@@HydroC0 LEMME Join it
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@@HydroC0 base goku is enough tho
K
@@HydroC0 dud actually reply
Speed animation:0 👌👌
Very intense
thank you! but my next ting is gonna be better i hope xD
That was pretty quick:)
Underrated
Nice
Good
Now i can see what's going on
My eyes can see it now
Good!
Why you so good at animating you should make a tutorial that would be useful
0:05 there’s so much going on
Very nice
When did you start sn ? And if so your really dang good
@@fireblaze6047 long story short i started in 2016 was on the grind for 2 years then took a 1 year brake and came back and made a few more animation until i made this the ones i made i have only shown to friends but this i decided to make public cause they liked it so much
@@HydroC0 wow
Noice
Cool like very cool could I ask something could a link of the gokus thx
Yeah
A-Amazing
when u stutter on purpose lol
@@Controldropper 😂
buena animacion sigue asi!
big good
Thank you!
muito top
1st!!
Why
@@Controldropper why not
Muy buena animación
10/10
Thank you for not starting anything because it's a debate
This is cap battle of gods saga base goku puts every Saitama on a t shirt
Mf bro can't take an animation and is hating someone that has more talent than you
I saw nothing 😔😔😔 make them longer
Watch My latest animation, it's 4 minutes long! It won't disappoint
It's cool and all but there's so much extra camera movement and the transformations are way to fast. I can't even acknowledge what is happening.
Thanks for the criticism but Imma have give valid answers all of your critiques? (I have no clue how to put it)
with the animation. For camera movement the animation just looks stiff which you never want in animation imo, with my *5* years of experience (technically 3.5 since I took like a half a year brake then another 1 year) I have learnt that it just looks bland that if the camera just stays in one place or if it just moves when the character moves, I have tried to mess with the camera a lot throughout the entirety of me making this animation and at a certain point of the animation after I had already finished the scene it felt like it was missing something that made it look slow and stand out compared to the fast pace animation that came before it, but when I made the camera follow Saitama in a way that didn't look bad it changed the entire way the scene looked and made it look *better*, i will say this though, maybe the shakes are a bit much cause I am not used to making them, otherwise the "much extra" is quite the opposite, that is what makes the animation look like an animation that isn't stiff.
and as for the transformation, I have tried to focus on them a bit more, but when I did the animations momentum fell apart and it would then go from fast to slow then fast out of nowhere cause of my animation style being fast, BUT that doesn't mean I couldn't change the scene to slow and then ramp up again, i could have done that, since I have never done that, i didn't think of it up until now, my 5 years of experience was only for fast paced action which would only get faster and faster. (The slow part at the end was just to make the animation longer that's the only reason I made it, I say this cuz it practically would ruin the entire point I just made lol)
But the transformation critique is valid and I will make sure to make transformations in the future which slow and then ramp up again to start the fight
And at the end of it all I think what you dislike from what I can tell is the fast pace animation itself which doesn't allow you to process whats going on which confuses you ig (I can't say much since I have seen the animation frame by frame at least 20 times)
Anyway besides that thanks again for the criticism I will make sure to keep them in mind for my next animations (which won't be as fast paced)
@@HydroC0 lol how did goku and saitama shirt get destroyed
Ez Saitama punched goku so hard his shirt was destroyed, as for Saitama self explanatory cause of how strong goku is
Goku ssjg solo
Karai o goku precisa do mui logo de começo ta porra
Goku slams
Bruh this is so rushed
Actually take your time because half of the time no one could see what was happening
That's what makes this trash
Bruh this animation is indeed rushed, I didn't think anyone outside my friend group would actually see it so I just made one for fun xd but my next one won't be as bad I promise, imma take your criticism and try my best to implement it into my new one (but doubt 100 if anyone will see that one cuz it has nothing to do with one punch man or dbz)
edit: i changed my mind it is about dragon ball.
@@HydroC0 oh ok
Good luck!
Yet I could see what was happening, so living paradox or we just have different attention spans.