When Eve told OP what to expect from now on, I lagged my A$$ off!! Also, did anyone notice the irony of a partner in a law firm making a direct threat to kill OP in front of a bunch of cops? 😂😂😂
A good story, if a little unrealistic. Very enjoyable. Thank you LLC. Although this is a good short story, I must say I’m enjoying the longer format stories of your newer work. ❤😊
What I like about this story: - Short and well written. No half hour of listening to how Thomas courted Janice in college and hearing how she did / didn't cheat on him back then. - MC (Thomas) gets to hear what was planned for him without having to endure it. - The execution of Thomas' plan was quick and the planning that went into it was explained without spending a half hour hearing every phone call and conversation. What I wish were better: - The fate of Darren and Janice The story says Thomas had 'friends' inside, so why not add a few sentences about their fate. I wanted to hear how they suffered.
This is not hard to do. Tom has GPS on his phone which would have made sense. With the GPS the location would have been a dead on lock. Eve's recording and video was enough to bring them in. The 15 men with AR-15s make this kidnapping and extortion. They now can find the other victims through Eve. This guy should be in jail for a very long time.
What would have made it a great ending...Darrin, the "super alpha", meeting some "nice" anti-mol**ters in the big house as he had planned for our hero. But, it was a federal prison, different "clientele".
Story wad short sweet and to the point a nice no drag out revenge tale,sometimes thesexare just as fun too. Omg, funny how those* tools* won't need to 🤣 use them ever again so freely ,they messed with the wrong guy,that wife was no wife, she's just sad hussy 😅 Thxx LLC for this story
A man who wants to have control & power over everyone isn't an alpha he's just an arrogant jerk who'll end up on the loosing end of the stick. P Diddy & Jz anyone?
Yes overlooking allowing the cell phones was a major flaw. It could have been dealt with by 'hero' seizing 'trainer's' phone, or "dealing with" their guard like an "enemy sentry"; story left plenty room for something like that. The falsely imprisoned former victims, I suppose may be inferred to be treated by related forthcoming legal process, but again, story left room to at least mention that. Interesting and sickening how contemporary "America," with it's "eqsteins,"* etc. leaves this not so far fetched!
I kinda hoped ,since the so called alpha male was facing life the bogus charges against the other husbands be expunged.He had voice recording of Eve as evidence,and others to turn states evidence.
@@lpoerscatalya8914 Send her a video of her AP getting done in prison and then servicing all the homeboys on his knees just like she was wanting to see her husband do 😂
this is very similar to a story of the guy on a weekend into the mountains and escaped by burning down the bridge in and out turns out it is the same story tweaked and shortened but this is shorter and could be shorter without the doubling up at around the 4 - 7 min mark i can not believe a marine would go in this unprepared if i was going in unprepared but suspicious. i would already have teed up potential backup and had the spare keys secreted in my luggage wouldnt be surprised if the rooms are wired for visual and audio so their room is actually in lockdown. no red flags huh and in describing ops name...no mention of the confederate general of that name........ i was right...he was prepared.
Had Janice known about her ex's powerful connections she wouldn't have allowed her boss to screw her but then again she showed what a double 304 she is.
Could there be a story, like this one, where MC is just a street smart guy, a quickdraw champion, or just ordinary guy who escape this trap? Or....hes an "accountant" for some cartels/mob? Or a "special enforcer" for cartel/mob. Make it russian, they were cruel
This ahole lawyer disregard the first rule warfare. It's about intelligence and fuel. The fool disregarded the intelligence portion by not doing a background check on his "prey."
I have never heard of the country and western singer named Stonewall Jackson and I know my country and western music that I have heard of a confederate general who was killed by his own troops by the name of Stonewall Jackson
Probably talking about Alan Jackson. Edit:Guess I was wrong about AJ. Did a quick search, and there was a singer named Stonewall Jackson back in the day.
Apparently, most went with the program, but yes, it would have been nice if they had said that part of the charges included the framing of those men who are now in prison for crimes they did not commit. Maybe some crooked judges and prison wardens are involved too.
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When Eve told OP what to expect from now on, I lagged my A$$ off!!
Also, did anyone notice the irony of a partner in a law firm making a direct threat to kill OP in front of a bunch of cops? 😂😂😂
A good story, if a little unrealistic. Very enjoyable. Thank you LLC. Although this is a good short story, I must say I’m enjoying the longer format stories of your newer work. ❤😊
Sounds like a diddy freak off party!!🤣🤣🤣🤣
What I like about this story:
- Short and well written. No half hour of listening to how Thomas courted Janice in college and hearing how she did / didn't cheat on him back then.
- MC (Thomas) gets to hear what was planned for him without having to endure it.
- The execution of Thomas' plan was quick and the planning that went into it was explained without spending a half hour hearing every phone call and conversation.
What I wish were better:
- The fate of Darren and Janice The story says Thomas had 'friends' inside, so why not add a few sentences about their fate. I wanted to hear how they suffered.
Thanks!
Loads of love for you
LOL, kidnapping, drugging, assault, threat of murder and extortion. Fun story.👍
Damn, sounds like some James Bond shit 😂
This is not hard to do. Tom has GPS on his phone which would have made sense. With the GPS the location would have been a dead on lock. Eve's recording and video was enough to bring them in. The 15 men with AR-15s make this kidnapping and extortion. They now can find the other victims through Eve. This guy should be in jail for a very long time.
This isn't James Bond this is Diddy, Jz & other Hollyweird sickos.
So all paralegals cheat and lawers feel they are super entitled idiots
EEnjoyed the story. Most high powerful men are submissive but always an exemplary. Loved the former "slave husband" came forth. T
What would have made it a great ending...Darrin, the "super alpha", meeting some "nice" anti-mol**ters in the big house as he had planned for our hero. But, it was a federal prison, different "clientele".
Story wad short sweet and to the point a nice no drag out revenge tale,sometimes thesexare just as fun too. Omg, funny how those* tools* won't need to 🤣 use them ever again so freely ,they messed with the wrong guy,that wife was no wife, she's just sad hussy 😅
Thxx LLC for this story
A man who wants to have control & power over everyone isn't an alpha he's just an arrogant jerk who'll end up on the loosing end of the stick. P Diddy & Jz anyone?
Thomas "Stonewall" Jackson 😆.
Hahaha
And he died 10 years ago...only if this story happened in the 1870s.
Wow... boss man wanted to pull a Diddy on him. Glad he was a true marine!
Ha!
Darren really was a fool instead of going for single women he goes after married ones. Look where his arrogance got him.
So with all the preparation, they never took all the cell phones? Also, what about all the men that were falsely imprisoned?
Yes overlooking allowing the cell phones was a major flaw. It could have been dealt with by 'hero' seizing 'trainer's' phone, or "dealing with" their guard like an "enemy sentry"; story left plenty room for something like that. The falsely imprisoned former victims, I suppose may be inferred to be treated by related forthcoming legal process, but again, story left room to at least mention that. Interesting and sickening how contemporary "America," with it's "eqsteins,"* etc. leaves this not so far fetched!
We already called the Innocence Project.
Cell phone jammer
Im guessing they thought no phone would have a signal there so there was no need to confiscate them.
good story. I hope he and the other marine get together
That would be fun and it would be nice to see more stories connecting them working together.👍
Good one. Short and to the point without any unnecessary BS 👍👍
Good story. A good plot, without flourishes, direct and that kept me interested. Thanks for the post.
Good story 👏 Thanks 😊
The dream about death is ironic, the death of his marriage
While they didn't say I believe that the phone call was a code to let his dad know bad crap was happening and to be ready for the raid.
Never piss off the Marines
her new position was the open town bicycle
Listening to the beginning of this, I wondered how he would leave that place in one piece.
great story, cheater never deserved love, forgiveness. This story reminds my ex.... Bad bad chick
Someone needs to learn the difference between Calvary and Cavalry. 🙄
Or Calgary
someone can AI can not.
I kinda hoped ,since the so called alpha male was facing life the bogus charges against the other husbands be expunged.He had voice recording of Eve as evidence,and others to turn states evidence.
Janice would have a Viking funeral very fast
Janice. The ultimate 304. Why don't these guys see through this garbage ? The writing is like Shakespeare. All on the wall
Hopefully they're able to get the other men out of prison, if they're still alive.
Sheriff Bob is the man !!!!!
I see a bunch of gravestones in their future.😅
It would have to r-rated. Also no one on the compound gets out alive!
Ah yes Stonewall Jackson the country music star not the Confederate army general lol
My G G Grandfather was named Stonewall Jackson Newsome. Very popular to use SJ.
Great story 🎉🎉
Could not help but laugh listening to this.
What a wild story.
Crazy 😧 to accept this all condition. 😮
they would have to kill me first. I would got out fighting
@@kdeville87 same go all out
@@lpoerscatalya8914 Send her a video of her AP getting done in prison and then servicing all the homeboys on his knees just like she was wanting to see her husband do 😂
Ford 150 4 wheel drive pickup. are there ford F150 2 wheel bicycles ?
I got friends who's waiting for you 😂😂😂that does not sound like it's going to be sny fun😮😮
Excellent story!
Who died after his dream…..
I do believe it was the marriage that died!
His marriage 😅
Short an to the point I loved it I wonder why people think they are immuned to the law
Great story 🙂
this is very similar to a story of the guy on a weekend into the mountains and escaped by burning down the bridge in and out
turns out it is the same story tweaked and shortened
but this is shorter and could be shorter without the doubling up at around the 4 - 7 min mark
i can not believe a marine would go in this unprepared
if i was going in unprepared but suspicious. i would already have teed up potential backup and had the spare keys secreted in my luggage
wouldnt be surprised if the rooms are wired for visual and audio
so their room is actually in lockdown. no red flags huh
and in describing ops name...no mention of the confederate general of that name........
i was right...he was prepared.
Great story.
Had Janice known about her ex's powerful connections she wouldn't have allowed her boss to screw her but then again she showed what a double 304 she is.
I am not sure ... nice story . But would a wife accept this for her husband ? Is this not a bridge to far ?
Could there be a story, like this one, where MC is just a street smart guy, a quickdraw champion, or just ordinary guy who escape this trap?
Or....hes an "accountant" for some cartels/mob?
Or a "special enforcer" for cartel/mob. Make it russian, they were cruel
People will do anything for a promotion. Damm that.
I love stories like this
What f with the Wrong man
This ahole lawyer disregard the first rule warfare. It's about intelligence and fuel. The fool disregarded the intelligence portion by not doing a background check on his "prey."
I have never heard of the country and western singer named Stonewall Jackson and I know my country and western music that I have heard of a confederate general who was killed by his own troops by the name of Stonewall Jackson
Probably talking about Alan Jackson.
Edit:Guess I was wrong about AJ. Did a quick search, and there was a singer named Stonewall Jackson back in the day.
Waaay too short lol
Wrong use of ARDENT.
Yeah#1
JZ as always 😅
Wait........WHAT??????😮
😅😅😊
Incomplete story what about husband's who wrongly accused and suffered 😬😬
Apparently, most went with the program, but yes, it would have been nice if they had said that part of the charges included the framing of those men who are now in prison for crimes they did not commit. Maybe some crooked judges and prison wardens are involved too.
Where is the long version of this story that is much much better the long version
Janice. Town bicycle
"Stonewall Jackson"
We told ya, we'll rise again, brother!