I'm sorry guys but I didn't plan a part 2 if you want one can you give me some ideas?!?also I am not from TikTok someone stole my video and posted it on TikTok stop asking me if I'm from TikTok because im not it's annoying
Wth dont be mean maybe in the future you will be lesbain to oh and being a lgbtq is not a curse idiot , i am not mean , im just tryna protect what i am , soo ppls be proud of what you are ✊💙💚💛🧡💜🖤
Even know i'm christian i'm not tryna be mean or rude to lgbt just because they are like that dose not mean we should hate them idiot Btw i'm not boy I use my dad phone
I just can't understand how some ppl go out of their way to hurt others for the things they don't have but the other person has. I remember just a week ago I was jealous of everyone but I caused no harm to anyone and now the thing I wanted I'm about to get ,I feel so ashamed of myself for that but now to be honest I have taken inspiration from the ppl I was jealous of and I'm proud of myself for pulling myself out of being a toxic person
hey same here i got bullied so much irl and online it made me think i was ugly but now that i found how i want to dress and now i dont crare what ppl say
I LOVE YOUR STYLE DUDE you put so much detail into colors and clothes it shows and makes the story 10x more enjoyable I love how the outlines are not all just black and you use different outfits and eyes etc !!
@@n0t4m34 advice: try to upload frequently or have a decent upload schedule, the youtube algorithm will wreck your channel if you dont upload much or arent consistent in uploading-
you have given me so many ideas. -improve one of the relationships and focus on that one solely, maybe on how that romantic relationship affects their platonic ones -expand on the trauma from her childhood, and show a storyline of how she combats her mistrust of people (therapy is often underused in mini-movies despite being an important part of recovery irl, so I recommend that) -expand on the fact that she had a lot more trauma than shown, while many people have little confidence you need to be rather messed up from something to make you rather wear a paper bag over your head than show your face -introduce a new antagonist. while some stories can flourish without someone trying to stop the happy ending, it usually makes a story better. -maybe in part 2 make the antagonist a little more willing to sabotage themselves just to humiliate the main character (I don't actually remember her name I'm sorry) -maybe make one of the friends go through an illness that severely detriments their ability to function properly (loss of sight, partial body paralysis, struck by lightning and barely survives but has to undergo surgery and they have a few scares of losing their close friend) -maybe a few scenes at the end to show their adulthood If you actually reply, I wouldn't mind helping with some of the finer details, but I think this is good for now :)
@@-llonleykarll-556 aha... I'm the imaginative one... skilled? not so much. I had this series going called hybrids, one of the episodes might still be up. so, I had a whole plan to make it into a secret lab but eventually got bored of making something that I was unhappy with the quality. I started ep 3, but then got unmotivated from looking over the episode and seeing how fast-paced and hard-to-keep-with up it was
Note: This is all my opinion, don't take it seriously unless you want to. I really do love this GCMM. The bully isn't shallow or just used as a plot device and is given a personality, and the views and ideals of the bully are understandable. In my opinion, she was one of the best characters in the story. To me, the main character was a pretty well-written character, but she didn't have many flaws and didn't seem that realistic to me, and I think that almost all the characters having a crush on her was a bit excessive. The plotline wasn't amazing, but it was interesting enough to keep me watching until the end. Again, this is all my opinion, so feel free to ignore this.
Yes I respect your opinion ofc! but I have to disagree with one part- I don’t think it was excessive since they all kind of liked her since she was so pretty and kind. Ofc this is just my opinion haha
Yeah I think so too, the bully was pretty well written but It doesn’t make sense If she doesn’t wanna show her face, just by being bullied from one person, unless she has big anxiety or something like that
I agree with you opinion, this was a really good GCMM. With the whole crush thing tho, I don’t think they all had a big crush like the blonde girl, everyone probably just thought she was really cute and blushed. Just my opinion
Well, like I said in another comment, I don’t quite agree. Her flaws would definitely be things like being overly sensitive and having massive anxiety. Both are demonstrated many times throughout the story. I also think it was kinda cute everyone had a crush on her because it showed her just how beautiful the rest of the world saw her in comparison to her view of herself-inside and out.
Heyo, not hate, but I just want to share my opinion on this mini movie so you can improve you're future ones. Btw I never made mini movies, but I just know how someone could improve their storyline and such. So, I really like the idea of this, but you could have made it better. You made the main character act like some perfectionist, she has no flaws except a weak mind. When I say that is because when she got told she was ugly, she grew up with it and never forgot it. Most people would most likely move on from it, especially younger children. And you're kind of taking it somewhere else with the paper bag. The mother letting her do that, not taking her anywhere for that mental problem, not talking her out of it and just accepting her covering her face just shows the mother won't do anything to help the child, she just goes along with it even though she disagrees with the action. Also making them all have a crush on her? Tbh, it was unnecessary. I mean, having only one attracted would be better. And I will say this from my perspective, the bully would be the best main character in this story, she has flaws, her insecurity on her looks as a child made her upset when she saw others look better than her, causing her to become a more terrible person as she grew up, and the fact she acts this way makes it seem like there is something going on with her gaurdians(parents, grandparents, etc). Make your characters have flaws such as anger issues, too carefree that they aren't taking care of what they are supposed to take care of, and so on. Your main character is a Mary Sue (Definition: a type of female character who is depicted as unrealistically lacking in flaws or weaknesses). I suggest writing scripts or a summary of the story you have in mind before doing the actual thing. If you did, I suggest dividing it into smaller areas for the problem of the story and other necessities for a good story such as the ending and the solutions, stuff you learned in Elementary about reading books. If you read it, congrats! You are actually willing to try improving your channel instead of ignoring it like most youtubers who think they are amazing and spectacular because of their subcounts. *You can only improve if you can take criticism as an opportunity rather than an insult.*
@@isuckatmakingvideos469 You don't have to apologize about this, you have great talent for ideas, if you keep this up and keep learning more along the way, I won't be surprised to see you getting to the top with other amazing content creators.
@@isuckatmakingvideos469 but i like it when lots of people like the main character so i dont know who she'll be with and i can develop ships no matter if they get smashed at the end or not, its fun!😁
Girls I just wanna say ...ur bootiful how you are don’t say ur ugly and things like that . ur pretty ❤️✨ People are just jealous of you just wanna say that 😌 and one more thing bye beautiful,s ✨❤️✨❤️✨
amazing, the cuteness, the colours, the characters, the ships, the details, i can see you put lots of effort. Rating this 1-10, it would be 100000, I mean it. And why did you have to make it so cuteeee, its like so cute- TwT
"I feel jealous,the way all my friends love you,the way he protected you....i know im just a brat,but..im jealous..i always wish i were you...im sorry..:)"
I really like this GCMM. It has a good plot! No magic powers, no alpha wolves. And I think her being bullied for being so beautiful is a great and original concept Gotta say, she is extremely pretty
The story is really good. I love the characters are so cute!! Also I love your tast in music. Melanie Martine has good songs. I listen to here a lot. Anywas keep up the great work!!
Almost all the characters like her lol- anyway this was as amazing as always, I ship her with the "best friend girl "? I forgot her name lol- have a nice day to whoever is reading this
Please Do a Part 2! Idea:The Masked Girl And Her Friends From Her School Have a Sleepover And They Play Truth Or Dare And Then At The End One Of Her Friend's Ask Her To Be Their Girlfriend!
this is so original and it isn't cringe, THANK YOU. also how do we not see her hair under the mask? she might've tied it in a bun, but it would surely slightly fall apart, and at the party her hair was part down
!["Im a Boy, Not a Tomboy" ORIGINAL [Short GCMM] // RUSHED SORRY](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/z0E2mQ8ARik/mqdefault.jpg)
I'm sorry guys but I didn't plan a part 2 if you want one can you give me some ideas?!?also I am not from TikTok someone stole my video and posted it on TikTok stop asking me if I'm from TikTok because im not it's annoying
Maybe she ends up with the boy who helped her?? I’m not sure
The brown hair dude with red eyes.
I kinda like her with her friend blonde girl, (forgot her name already
Itz really coool! Luv it ❤️
Maybe the girl can end up with the blonde girl friend. Also the bully can be her friend
My first time, in 10 years, my whole life, I have finally found a non-cursed lesbian ship.
11:09
Skip to there :)
ur 10-
Wth dont be mean maybe in the future you will be lesbain to oh and being a lgbtq is not a curse idiot , i am not mean , im just tryna protect what i am , soo ppls be proud of what you are ✊💙💚💛🧡💜🖤
Even know i'm christian i'm not tryna be mean or rude to lgbt just because they are like that dose not mean we should hate them idiot
Btw i'm not boy I use my dad phone
Unbased
Are we just gonna ignore the fact that the black haired dude is sleeping on the floor in the last scene😂😂😂😂
Yaa ikr
Imagine being that lazy to get up
@@alexcassanova9079 couldn't be me 🙄🤚❤️
@@isuckatmakingvideos469 that’s meh at night
@@neko_nyaa.is.kawaii ikr
I just can't understand how some ppl go out of their way to hurt others for the things they don't have but the other person has.
I remember just a week ago I was jealous of everyone but I caused no harm to anyone and now the thing I wanted I'm about to get ,I feel so ashamed of myself for that but now to be honest I have taken inspiration from the ppl I was jealous of and I'm proud of myself for pulling myself out of being a toxic person
hey same here i got bullied so much irl and online it made me think i was ugly but now that i found how i want to dress and now i dont crare what ppl say
THE WORST OF PEOPLE DO THAT BUT THAT SHOULD NEVER HAPPEN AGAIN FOR KARMA WILL BE THERE OR HERE TO SAVE THE DAY!
@@TheAmethystAngel yep- after a kid bullied me she got put in the er NOT BC OF ME i wish tho- but she took a good fall down the stairs at school
I literally LOVE it
The OC, the story...
I LITERALLY LOVED EVERYTHING
SAME
I don’t like the vid I LOVE THE VID
I LOVE YOUR STYLE DUDE you put so much detail into colors and clothes it shows and makes the story 10x more enjoyable I love how the outlines are not all just black and you use different outfits and eyes etc !!
I do that too but no one checks out my videos :(
@@n0t4m34 advice: try to upload frequently or have a decent upload schedule, the youtube algorithm will wreck your channel if you dont upload much or arent consistent in uploading-
@@suzypilled probably since I took a break but thank you
@@n0t4m34 oh ok-
@@n0t4m34 I’ll do subscribe to u!
you have given me so many ideas.
-improve one of the relationships and focus on that one solely, maybe on how that romantic relationship affects their platonic ones
-expand on the trauma from her childhood, and show a storyline of how she combats her mistrust of people
(therapy is often underused in mini-movies despite being an important part of recovery irl, so I recommend that)
-expand on the fact that she had a lot more trauma than shown, while many people have little confidence you need to be rather messed up from something to make you rather wear a paper bag over your head than show your face
-introduce a new antagonist. while some stories can flourish without someone trying to stop the happy ending, it usually makes a story better.
-maybe in part 2 make the antagonist a little more willing to sabotage themselves just to humiliate the main character (I don't actually remember her name I'm sorry)
-maybe make one of the friends go through an illness that severely detriments their ability to function properly (loss of sight, partial body paralysis, struck by lightning and barely survives but has to undergo surgery and they have a few scares of losing their close friend)
-maybe a few scenes at the end to show their adulthood
If you actually reply, I wouldn't mind helping with some of the finer details, but I think this is good for now :)
wow..
if you made a movie i would try to be the first person to watch it
@@-llonleykarll-556 aha... I'm the imaginative one... skilled? not so much. I had this series going called hybrids, one of the episodes might still be up. so, I had a whole plan to make it into a secret lab but eventually got bored of making something that I was unhappy with the quality. I started ep 3, but then got unmotivated from looking over the episode and seeing how fast-paced and hard-to-keep-with up it was
That was the longest comment I have ever read...
@@riverpuresoapcompany1561 I try :)
Damn. That is a lot of ideas-
Imagine being so beautiful you make everyone blush, probably even animals.
🤣🤣🤣🙌Animals be like 🍅
I wish😭
i m a g i n e
I-THIS-I CANT EXPLAIN HOW GOOD THIS IS 😭😭😭😭😭
Same😭😭😭
I know right Iceberry!
Me: *sees brown with two holes paper bag*
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Also me: *Remembers Mono from Little Nightmares 2-*
I thought it was mono genderbend version
SAME
@@eauudithishere9621 me too lol-
ANY SAMERS IN CHAT BOIS
Sameeeeeee
Note: This is all my opinion, don't take it seriously unless you want to.
I really do love this GCMM. The bully isn't shallow or just used as a plot device and is given a personality, and the views and ideals of the bully are understandable. In my opinion, she was one of the best characters in the story. To me, the main character was a pretty well-written character, but she didn't have many flaws and didn't seem that realistic to me, and I think that almost all the characters having a crush on her was a bit excessive. The plotline wasn't amazing, but it was interesting enough to keep me watching until the end.
Again, this is all my opinion, so feel free to ignore this.
Yes I respect your opinion ofc! but I have to disagree with one part- I don’t think it was excessive since they all kind of liked her since she was so pretty and kind. Ofc this is just my opinion haha
Yeah I think so too, the bully was pretty well written but It doesn’t make sense If she doesn’t wanna show her face, just by being bullied from one person, unless she has big anxiety or something like that
@@NotCaitlinn me too
I agree with you opinion, this was a really good GCMM. With the whole crush thing tho, I don’t think they all had a big crush like the blonde girl, everyone probably just thought she was really cute and blushed. Just my opinion
Well, like I said in another comment, I don’t quite agree.
Her flaws would definitely be things like being overly sensitive and having massive anxiety. Both are demonstrated many times throughout the story.
I also think it was kinda cute everyone had a crush on her because it showed her just how beautiful the rest of the world saw her in comparison to her view of herself-inside and out.
That was cute!🥺😫✨💅 best 11:32 minutes spent in my life!
Same*
Ikr
Hii
Defo not me clicking on that
But it only says the enc
This.
Is..
The best gcmm I've seen in the whole world!!!
I like it!!!
I'm just hoping there's still part 2
But,
I think
That would never be happened
4:06
“H-hey A-Akihiko..”
*speaks in aggressive morse code*
One of the best Gacha club mini movie I’ve ever seen u are really underrated and I can’t understand why lmao your videos are amazing
The character designs are so pretty!!
(Not my account) is her friend bi or les- or is she just so pretty even girls simp-
I mean she pretty (っ´ω`)ﾉ
Dude i was thinking the same thing
@@ixamxbetter IKR
@@ixamxbetter lol same
Yeah but i like how it looksed so smal detail but 👏👏👏
OMG I LIKE THE GIRLS HAIR with a mask! IT'S SO CUTE
Bro mel in the background I’m crying this is so good😭🥺
This whole story is.. ✨AMAZING✨
I wear a mask with a smile for hours at a time…
Bruh
We all do
Stare at the ceiling while I hold back what’s on my mind:)
@@Soapscomputerscreen same
Same...
Awwww she looks cute with no mask even if she is hurt she is still going to recover
This is really good!
Probs homophobic people
R slur prob
@@fruityren ??
Probably since she said the r slur
@@Pearl9-11-01 ret@rded is a slur.
This is amazing you got the way that gacha club outlines look just right, and well done on making the paper bag, creative!
Omg I really loved this mini movie and the best friend simping for the mc is adorable!
The amount of detail is just- I have no words. It’s my first time seeing your channel and you’ve gained a new sub
Probably one of the best stories I have ever watched-
I really love this it's not too long and the story is very entertaining
i actually saw a kdrama like this abt the girl wearing a mask-,, no hate to both but u did a masterpiece, i love it!! >///
ma'am,i saw these on tik tok,and it's great! I love it! Keep going,its so good
11:30 everyone ended up being a single pringle
Heyo, not hate, but I just want to share my opinion on this mini movie so you can improve you're future ones.
Btw I never made mini movies, but I just know how someone could improve their storyline and such.
So, I really like the idea of this, but you could have made it better. You made the main character act like some perfectionist, she has no flaws except a weak mind. When I say that is because when she got told she was ugly, she grew up with it and never forgot it. Most people would most likely move on from it, especially younger children. And you're kind of taking it somewhere else with the paper bag. The mother letting her do that, not taking her anywhere for that mental problem, not talking her out of it and just accepting her covering her face just shows the mother won't do anything to help the child, she just goes along with it even though she disagrees with the action. Also making them all have a crush on her? Tbh, it was unnecessary. I mean, having only one attracted would be better. And I will say this from my perspective, the bully would be the best main character in this story, she has flaws, her insecurity on her looks as a child made her upset when she saw others look better than her, causing her to become a more terrible person as she grew up, and the fact she acts this way makes it seem like there is something going on with her gaurdians(parents, grandparents, etc). Make your characters have flaws such as anger issues, too carefree that they aren't taking care of what they are supposed to take care of, and so on. Your main character is a Mary Sue (Definition: a type of female character who is depicted as unrealistically lacking in flaws or weaknesses). I suggest writing scripts or a summary of the story you have in mind before doing the actual thing. If you did, I suggest dividing it into smaller areas for the problem of the story and other necessities for a good story such as the ending and the solutions, stuff you learned in Elementary about reading books.
If you read it, congrats! You are actually willing to try improving your channel instead of ignoring it like most youtubers who think they are amazing and spectacular because of their subcounts.
*You can only improve if you can take criticism as an opportunity rather than an insult.*
You have a point I'm sorry
@@isuckatmakingvideos469 You don't have to apologize about this, you have great talent for ideas, if you keep this up and keep learning more along the way, I won't be surprised to see you getting to the top with other amazing content creators.
@@isuckatmakingvideos469 but i like it when lots of people like the main character so i dont know who she'll be with and i can develop ships no matter if they get smashed at the end or not, its fun!😁
Oh my.. You wrote wll this
I think it's a great story tbh
Girls I just wanna say ...ur bootiful how you are don’t say ur ugly and things like that . ur pretty ❤️✨
People are just jealous of you just wanna say that 😌 and one more thing bye beautiful,s ✨❤️✨❤️✨
Im always scared of showing other people my real face on the internet thanks for motivating me,it really helps!
Awe this mini movie was both sad and cute! I loved it so much! ❤️🥺
amazing, the cuteness, the colours, the characters, the ships, the details, i can see you put lots of effort. Rating this 1-10, it would be 100000, I mean it. And why did you have to make it so cuteeee, its like so cute- TwT
"I feel jealous,the way all my friends love you,the way he protected you....i know im just a brat,but..im jealous..i always wish i were you...im sorry..:)"
I really like this GCMM. It has a good plot! No magic powers, no alpha wolves. And I think her being bullied for being so beautiful is a great and original concept
Gotta say, she is extremely pretty
It's nice :O better then my , i lose my motivation Always 😂😂💖
the mum's hair is so frigging adorable
Absolutely amazing. You are an amazing gachatuber I love you so much AHHH
Now I know why mono wear a carton bag in little nightmares 😂
Your best! THIS IS AMAZING 🤩 🤩
Amazing job :D
😭😭this is too good♡your amazing!!
The story is really good. I love the characters are so cute!! Also I love your tast in music. Melanie Martine has good songs. I listen to here a lot. Anywas keep up the great work!!
THIS WAS AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL
unique story love it
God shows his love for us in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. - Romans 5:8
stop forcing
This is beautiful :D ♡♡♡
"Wathca reading?"
"DAD I CAN EXPLAIN"
THIS WAS SO CUTE 😩🛐
my first time ever shipping 2 girls😂
So it's not just me??
@@ashlani9599 Yep
@@ashlani9599 yep
@@ashlani9599 *its just you. Wake up, wake up, WAKE UP! WAKE UP*
@@sunny_sketches oh dam, disliking much?
Perfection 🛐🛐🛐🛐🛐💖💖💖💖💖
THIS STORY WAS SO WELL PORTRAYED!! I understood the storyline, remembered the characters, and was entertained the whole time. this is AMAZING!! 🤩
ngl it feels like a 1 hour movie and the movie idea it's just prefect
PLEASE TELLL ME THERES GONNA BE A PART 2
This is LIFE!😰
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Absolutely beautiful
The girl or the vid
@@TTS440 Well shes/hes/they are commenting on the vid so the vid
The bag looks so cute on her
Awesome story! Good job, i loved it!
Almost all the characters like her lol- anyway this was as amazing as always, I ship her with the "best friend girl "? I forgot her name lol- have a nice day to whoever is reading this
the maid is literally a mood-
Awe the designs are so cute and beautiful!!
The way Josie's plans kept backfireing thooo
I love how is these relationships, THERE IS NO HEAT😁😁
"People gonna steal you from me"
That's what I like to hear in my best friends, OOPS I remember I don't have hahahaha😂😅
AAAAA THIS IS GOOD!
This video was amazing you did a great job on it! :3
This can also be found in TikTok, I saw it there first.
Edit: UGH I CAN'T GET OVER THE DESIGNS AND HOW SHE IS JUST PERFECTTTT
This GCMM looks so familiar to me lol.. I already saw this on TikTok😩 BTW great job!
THE END WHERE THE GUY JUST STAYS DEAD ON THE FLOOR CRACKS ME UP!!!
THAT WAS SO CUTE!!! I LOVE IT!!!
mono's gender swap lol this was so good i loved it
when she has the paper bag she looks like mono lol
Eeeeeeee the song!!!!!! My fav!!!!
I also love the story it’s ✨AMAZING✨. I am a fan now congratulations 🎉 you won a new subscriber✌🏼✌🏼
wait..i saw ur vid at tiktok! it was rrl good tho! its fine if theres no part2.Take ur time :D dont force urself.Ur vid are awesome gurl!! >w
I love the story line and all the details!
Its a really good concept!
And the girl with the bag on her head gives me city of blank vibes
Please make a part 2 it will make my day :)
This makes me think of some sort of thing I watched once..
a sort of show about someone who also had a paper bag over there head XD
Please Do a Part 2!
Idea:The Masked Girl And Her Friends From Her School Have a Sleepover And They Play Truth Or Dare And Then At The End One Of Her Friend's Ask Her To Be Their Girlfriend!
IM SCREAMING OF HOW CUTE THIS AAAAAAAHAAHAH
This is now my new fav glam I’ve ever seen uwu
the bag on her head is adorable!! :DD Can you do a tutorial?? :DD You don't need too!
PLS PLS PART TWOOOOOO IT WAS AMAZING!!!!! 🥺🙏🏼✨
The paper bag is very well made!
I just wanna take a moment to appreciate the songs- also beautifully made honestly I'm liking B]
Wow, thing I’ve ever seen!!!! Part two please ❤️✨ it was no cringe and original!!! I loved it so much!!!!!!
The animation in ur video is so cool and perfect
i love this so much its so adorable
Saw this on tiktok-
Awesome job👏
I love the character designs!!!!!!
This is Awesome! I love it! The school uniforms are designed so unique 🤩💞
this is so original and it isn't cringe, THANK YOU. also how do we not see her hair under the mask? she might've tied it in a bun, but it would surely slightly fall apart, and at the party her hair was part down
OMG!!! I SEEN THIS MASK GIRL IN ONE OF THE TIKTOK COMPS!!!
Ngl good movie
OMG I LOVE THE KID!! SHES SO FREAKING GORGEOUS!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😭😭😭😭😭😭
I actually watched a show on yt like this. It’s called the ugly duckling and she wore a box over her head. I like this version of it so much ❤️
The girl under the mask is so CUTE.
omhgg I LOVE how you made the girl w the blonde hair!!! So pretttyyyy AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
The girl with the bag reminds me of Rashta for some reason🤔
Finally some wholesome gacha video!
btw it was really cute i liked it :D
I don’t really watch gacha club mini movies but this is something I’m gonna watch every Friday