The Free Story Series #4: Netflix & Kill: Use This Plot For Paper 1 Q5

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  • Опубликовано: 31 дек 2024

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  • @needlespoon4734
    @needlespoon4734 Год назад +82

    i did my gcses in 2022. i am now doing a levels.Thanks to you i got a grade 8 in language and literature.Just want to thank you again for your hard work

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  Год назад +23

      Thank you

    • @pampoone623
      @pampoone623 Год назад +3

      Bro can you help me give me some advice on how u approached all of the questions and how many paragraphs have you written for each question

  • @pandaplaysroblox1244
    @pandaplaysroblox1244 Год назад +15

    I thank and respect your efforts in helping this generation and many others. I got a grade 8 in lit, because of you :)

  • @idk-hb6eu
    @idk-hb6eu Год назад +4

    You are teaching us more than our teachers

  • @kounolol
    @kounolol Год назад +16

    this guy got me a 6 and a 4 in 2022 so i recommend listening to him.

    • @josh4625
      @josh4625 Год назад +6

      Bro stop acting like that's good

    • @kounolol
      @kounolol Год назад +5

      @@josh4625 fym

    • @sebastianmirea3370
      @sebastianmirea3370 Год назад +9

      @@josh4625 bro that is good

    • @oligarland8191
      @oligarland8191 Год назад

      bro those are both passes, anything above a pass is a bonus
      and this is coming from a grade 9 student, don't bash on others because they don't get as high grades.@@josh4625

  • @Motivator.342
    @Motivator.342 Год назад +21

    I will test this story out on my language paper 1 mock on Friday.
    this man got me from a grade 2 to 5 in literature in my mocks so i fully trust this guy and his story

    • @nev_ant
      @nev_ant Год назад +1

      Could you please tell me how it goes and good luck!

    • @Motivator.342
      @Motivator.342 Год назад

      @@nev_ant sure

    • @khanum159
      @khanum159 Год назад

      Please let us know how it goes plz

    • @habiba6039
      @habiba6039 Год назад

      Good luck, I got mine tomorrow

    • @habiba6039
      @habiba6039 Год назад

      @@adamkhattab what is the Amazon one ? Pls tell me

  • @pampoone623
    @pampoone623 Год назад +10

    Sir why don’t you go live and do a q5 for us i really need to see a proper work from an examsaver like you this will help many alot - those like me who is a foreigner

  • @chubz1568
    @chubz1568 Год назад +13

    never disapoints💯💯🔥🔥

  • @Neelab-g7j
    @Neelab-g7j 11 месяцев назад +1

    I wish I could give your videos 10000 likes Mr. Everything English: you are amazing.

  • @tombha23
    @tombha23 Год назад +3

    imo this is the best one, but theyre all amazing!! thanks sir

  • @kyle_--
    @kyle_-- 10 месяцев назад +2

    are you sure only adapting one paragraph at the end is enough to fully fit the brief of the question and not lose marks

  • @philipmensah2
    @philipmensah2 Год назад +9

    Priest story 1 is too coldd

    • @adam9ezzedine
      @adam9ezzedine Год назад +2

      Did u use it? What grade did u get?

    • @hibs321
      @hibs321 Год назад +1

      I used it for my mocks got 30/40 but that was year 10

  • @nawazkhan6998
    @nawazkhan6998 Год назад +5

    Keep making videos like this plzz ❤❤❤

  • @LeroySinclair69
    @LeroySinclair69 Год назад +1

    Honestly this story is good but nothing beats the priest story, the priest one is god tier

  • @nawazkhan6998
    @nawazkhan6998 Год назад +3

    You are so helpful Thanks alot ❤

  • @waheedyousaf5971
    @waheedyousaf5971 7 месяцев назад +1

    good sir keep it up thanks

  • @CapSunKid
    @CapSunKid Год назад

    This is a good story, you have inspired me to do a story with suspense, in english language q5 thank you

  • @13KDhillon
    @13KDhillon Год назад +7

    I Cba for anything else , I’m using this plot tomorrow and will apply it to whatever the Q5 is . Good luck to everyone

    • @chefpeepeeinc2896
      @chefpeepeeinc2896 Год назад +1

      How did it go?

    • @13KDhillon
      @13KDhillon Год назад +5

      @@chefpeepeeinc2896 good i used this plot and said she met a mysterious Orange animal when opening the door

    • @frostfnbr
      @frostfnbr 11 месяцев назад

      score?@@13KDhillon

  • @asmaa1853
    @asmaa1853 Год назад

    thank you a lot
    This is really helpful
    I hope you do more

  • @monkey_buu
    @monkey_buu Год назад +1

    OMG TYYY GONNA TRY THIS TMRRR

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад +1

      all the best bro doing mine tmrw aswell

    • @monkey_buu
      @monkey_buu Год назад

      @@Splaron2546 U TOOO??? DAMNNN GOOD LUCKK 😭😭

    • @SuccessfulYouth.
      @SuccessfulYouth. Год назад +1

      @@monkey_buu same here ^^

    • @monkey_buu
      @monkey_buu Год назад +1

      @@SuccessfulYouth. GOOD LUCK TO YOU TOO 💪🌟

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад

      how was the paper?

  • @36OZ
    @36OZ Год назад +1

    im using this inshallah i get at least 40/40

  • @HasanAhmed-zw4tv
    @HasanAhmed-zw4tv Год назад +7

    salaam bro, this series has been amazing but i find it difficult to start the stories. whats the best way to start these stories??

  • @kawthartayeh5944
    @kawthartayeh5944 Год назад

    thank you
    this is really helpful

  • @rijakarim9762
    @rijakarim9762 Год назад

    Amazing plot!!

  • @armaanfarooq
    @armaanfarooq Год назад +1

    make a video on lord of the flies

  • @farhanafzal4483
    @farhanafzal4483 Год назад +4

    How much would u recommend writing for this Q?

  • @muhammedkhan-gx9ew
    @muhammedkhan-gx9ew Год назад +1

    love the vids

  • @b.n.j.l7888
    @b.n.j.l7888 8 месяцев назад

    how can this be adapt for the new beginning question

  • @zainhaneef2440
    @zainhaneef2440 Год назад +1

    You are a genius 🤩🤩🤩

  • @farhanafzal4483
    @farhanafzal4483 Год назад

    @Mr Everything English much would you recomend writing for this question?

  • @SuccessfulYouth.
    @SuccessfulYouth. Год назад

    This is gonna be very funny but I said when she opened the door 🚪 *it was a baby kitten*! At the end I ended by making the reader curious and interested by using a rhetorical question and asking: was the noise really made by the kitten? Who could it have been? I don't remember alot tho haha...

  • @Zamasu-rx6zo
    @Zamasu-rx6zo Год назад

    Sir could post a video on answering an unseen poetry question pls?

    • @Z_k829
      @Z_k829 Год назад +1

      He has in the past, I reccomend it highly !

    • @Zamasu-rx6zo
      @Zamasu-rx6zo Год назад +1

      @@Z_k829 thanks 👍

  • @hassaalfadzli6305
    @hassaalfadzli6305 Год назад

    Hi, sir please can you explain about functional skills.

    • @Selfcare_vlogs2
      @Selfcare_vlogs2 Год назад

      Asalamulakum If you search on RUclips theres loads of vidios on people doing and explaining

  • @ibadmanbr0522
    @ibadmanbr0522 Год назад +3

    Cant wait

  • @tvlogs9299
    @tvlogs9299 Год назад

    Sir could you link this story to adventure e.g write a story about adventure

  • @aayanmuhammed6898
    @aayanmuhammed6898 Год назад +3

    How will this link to a question? I’m nervous as to wether I should memorise a story for Q5.

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад +2

      memorise description+some weather(lol its to late to do this anyway)

    • @SuccessfulYouth.
      @SuccessfulYouth. Год назад +3

      @@Splaron2546 it's never too late

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад +1

      @@SuccessfulYouth. i mean it is late to memorise an entire description hours before the exam

    • @SuccessfulYouth.
      @SuccessfulYouth. Год назад +2

      @@Splaron2546 not if you do an all nighter

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад +1

      @@SuccessfulYouth. yep you could do that i guess, i'll probably go to sleep in an hour what bout you?

  • @lucasmarks8008
    @lucasmarks8008 Год назад +1

    Would this be 1st person ?

  • @Incognito-bj8xf
    @Incognito-bj8xf Год назад

    Yarra ill just say that she does some next kung fu panda moves and get kidnapped

  • @Divijcool
    @Divijcool Год назад

    I have a mock tomorrow with the question of write a new beginning how can i change the video story to implement the question

    • @Divijcool
      @Divijcool Год назад

      2021 papast paper question 5 ok

  • @Incognito-bj8xf
    @Incognito-bj8xf Год назад +1

    Done it and used this. I did it that instead of robbers there was a bear

    • @13KDhillon
      @13KDhillon Год назад +1

      Same I did whole same plot but when she opens door a orange creature came

    • @Incognito-bj8xf
      @Incognito-bj8xf Год назад

      @@13KDhillon nice man

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад +1

      i did it with hwer opening the door to find sort of a portal and as she steps throught shw enter into a savana

    • @Incognito-bj8xf
      @Incognito-bj8xf Год назад

      @@Splaron2546 go on man

    • @christhehun2887
      @christhehun2887 Год назад

      I did it so she was watching thr movie of the animal and the man on netflix

  • @ray-lo2xb
    @ray-lo2xb Год назад

    How can i start the story

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад

      start with a crisis (does not have to somthing big), make sure to refelct the ending back
      eg: start with someone fighting with the mother and then end with somting happenting to the mother or the child grows and refelts back on how she treated her mother compared to her own child in present

    • @SuccessfulYouth.
      @SuccessfulYouth. Год назад

      @@Splaron2546 you got that from mr salles haha^^

  • @zuhahassan7850
    @zuhahassan7850 Год назад

    2nd

  • @zeguy1234yt
    @zeguy1234yt Год назад

    isnt this plagarism

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад

      no its not as it just the backbone and you will be filling in the flesh

  • @masterninja7195
    @masterninja7195 Год назад +6

    Watching Wednesday for Jenna Ortega before! It counts because she's a hero.

  • @ray-lo2xb
    @ray-lo2xb Год назад

    This isnt plagiarism right.

    • @adam9ezzedine
      @adam9ezzedine Год назад +1

      NO!

    • @Splaron2546
      @Splaron2546 Год назад +1

      no its not as it just the backbone and you will be filling in the flesh

    • @frostfnbr
      @frostfnbr 11 месяцев назад

      ​@Splaron2shs7546

  • @mrdan3863
    @mrdan3863 Год назад +2

    my friend got in trouble for using your plot of the priest. will using these plots, even the new oneslike this, be risky??

    • @mrdan3863
      @mrdan3863 Год назад

      @@harleen8802 thanks a lot. ill do that and thanks again

    • @janna7762
      @janna7762 Год назад +1

      wait who did they get in trouble from

    • @frostfnbr
      @frostfnbr 11 месяцев назад

      Why are teachers so annoying