@MonkiesMakingMisplays it's a great attempt. I'd suggestion slowing down on the ready to add more weight to the presentation. You sound more reading from a textbook more than " telling a story" if that make sence. BUT its still great bro.
@MonkiesMakingMisplays it takes practice. the more you work on your craft, the more you learn. Even try to look up some story telling skill videos and develop your craft. You'll do great I just subscribe to see you grow.
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My boi burner ant. He has joined the council of the Smooth Brain. Also, that tree has a wicked arm, cant wait till he gets drafted in the NFL
Olivi has real potential, man hit the perfect spiral
Thank you this is great
Thanks for the support, I've never done this type of content so I wasn't sure how it would turn out but I'm glad you liked it
Thank you for this!
Im thinking of remaking this with some better drawings but Im still not very confident in my skills
@MonkiesMakingMisplays it's a great attempt. I'd suggestion slowing down on the ready to add more weight to the presentation. You sound more reading from a textbook more than " telling a story" if that make sence. BUT its still great bro.
Yeah I love the glitter story but im not a great conveyor of emotions if that makes sense
@MonkiesMakingMisplays it takes practice. the more you work on your craft, the more you learn. Even try to look up some story telling skill videos and develop your craft. You'll do great I just subscribe to see you grow.
Thank you for the support and I will be trying to do the story again
Where can i read these lore
The Wiki has up to chapter 9 then after that you have to translate from japanese bushiroad site