I'm not saying this to shit on your (suposedly) hard work. This is just my opinion and wheather or not you consider it (or even read it) is totaly up to you. I'll cut right to the point: I don't like this AMV. I like both the music and the "anime" (they're both one of my favourites), but I don't like the AMV. Why? It has nothing that I want from an AMV. Which are: - The rythm matches with the tempo of the fight and/or the hits land with the beats. - The lyrics can be connected to the particular scene during which they are played. You did neither of these in this one. You just play the scenes in the background, (seemingly) not caring about either. When the pace of the fight, the scene,or the music changes seems comletly random. (I won't say anything about the lyrics part because you can't really match theis one with RWBY.) You have "[RUSHED]" in the title so I thought that maybe that's the cause (although I have no Idea why would you upload a video that you're not satisfied with yourself), so I quickly checked an other one of your videos (RWBY - monster) and while it was certainly better (especially on the tempo and the theme part) but it still has most of the "flavs" that I mentioned. I hope you will find this criticism usefull to making your future AMVs.
waszner That’s great that you’re mature enough to give constructive criticism instead of just being immature. I know I didn’t make this but I’m glad people like you still exist on the internet that can make constructive criticisms instead of just shitting on something
Well I have been juggling accounts. Mine, school, and the account my mom never logged off on the phone she gave me lol. So I don’t always see the same list depending on the device I’m watching RUclips in.
This is really bad, monty got me addicted to rwby, then he died. And now its kind of like sniffing empty bags of used meth (not a drug addict i don't know how you smoke methanol). Dillon goo had all the special effects slash anime tropes rock solid, monty had that sick ass choreography and timing. Uhhh, must stop going back to old episodes and remembering monties work.
I'm not saying this to shit on your (suposedly) hard work. This is just my opinion and wheather or not you consider it (or even read it) is totaly up to you.
I'll cut right to the point: I don't like this AMV. I like both the music and the "anime" (they're both one of my favourites), but I don't like the AMV. Why?
It has nothing that I want from an AMV. Which are:
- The rythm matches with the tempo of the fight and/or the hits land with the beats.
- The lyrics can be connected to the particular scene during which they are played.
You did neither of these in this one. You just play the scenes in the background, (seemingly) not caring about either. When the pace of the fight, the scene,or the music changes seems comletly random. (I won't say anything about the lyrics part because you can't really match theis one with RWBY.)
You have "[RUSHED]" in the title so I thought that maybe that's the cause (although I have no Idea why would you upload a video that you're not satisfied with yourself), so I quickly checked an other one of your videos (RWBY - monster) and while it was certainly better (especially on the tempo and the theme part) but it still has most of the "flavs" that I mentioned.
I hope you will find this criticism usefull to making your future AMVs.
waszner That’s great that you’re mature enough to give constructive criticism instead of just being immature. I know I didn’t make this but I’m glad people like you still exist on the internet that can make constructive criticisms instead of just shitting on something
PIN OF SHAME
Instead of hearing “Despite the lies that you’re makin’,” I heard “Despite the lies that Jamaican. ”
I’ma just go now....
neos fight against yang was wonderful
HEHEHEHEH..... CEMN
YUP
what is so funny about CEMeNt?
*CMEN
I'm calling this team (CEMN) team cinnamon from now on
Too too awesome love it and the song is fire
Subed cuz of neo
0:20 WENT FROM A 2 TO A 11 VEEEERRRRYY QUICKLY.
This is really good
TEAM CEMN!!!
Of course the team with my Waifu would be pronounced as "semen." It's wonderful.
DudeWithAnAfro witch one is your waifu if is neo than we are sharing
Nice! I love the villains!
Shouldn't it technically CMENT (cement), because of Roman Torchwick?
Sorry, meant to spell it CEMNT.
Well, of course. I'm just referring to their criminal team name (fan-thought up of, obviously).
Cool!
I just joined in
yup
Okay, i got to ask...
Why is it called CEMN?
I mean I don't want to be that guy but it does sound a little like a certain bodily fluid.
***** Okay now i get it XD
bud do I'm awake I'm alive by skillet
Ahhhh Kingy found a friend
my phone's about to die so I'm gonna play ps4 but you need to get it I watched your cod bo2 vid of Leroy
wow nobody whatched this wow
well as in ps4
I'm gonna make a vid later
Sorry, meant to spell it CEMNT.
This new template RUclips is using is a joke. One wrong touch and you end up commenting to a post you weren't aiming for.
HEHEHEH... CEMN
Or CMEN
Now I remember why I subscribed... did you change your name?
Well I have been juggling accounts. Mine, school, and the account my mom never logged off on the phone she gave me lol. So I don’t always see the same list depending on the device I’m watching RUclips in.
Well...how the turntables...some account mess later and now it's permanently "no"
ok
where did you get the clip at the beginning?
+The Cookie King (AMVs) thanks. I ask because i've never seen that scene before.
do you play games?
Team CMEN
nah I'm sticking to CEMN
@@thecookiekingamvs5190 cmen is funnier lmao
was that lady a maiden
+The Cookie King (AMVs) the lady who got the black stuff on her face
I play steam
I changed my name
*Team CMEN
The Cookie King I am aware but it’s funnier if you put CMEN
The Cookie King Yet it would be a word. Think about it
The Cookie King Fair enough. I guess it all just really boils down to personal preference in which alternative you prefer but either work
This is really bad, monty got me addicted to rwby, then he died. And now its kind of like sniffing empty bags of used meth (not a drug addict i don't know how you smoke methanol). Dillon goo had all the special effects slash anime tropes rock solid, monty had that sick ass choreography and timing. Uhhh, must stop going back to old episodes and remembering monties work.
The song is a Christian song and the anime isn't it doesn't match at all
put into consideration, thank you for the feedback
:)
Personally I'd say that the song fits Adam better than these four.