these lyrics match them... Shinobu:"It's not your fault i ruined everything! And it's not your fault I can't be what you need!" .... Giyu:"Baby, Angles like you can't fly down hell with me. I'm everything they said I would be."... Shinobu:"I know that you're wrong for me, Gonna wish we never met on the day I leave! I brought you down to your knees!" Yeah those lyrics make me think of this and them so screw yall ima go sob
Imagine the controversy if giyus body fought off the toxin kocho gave him as well. *Shinobu attempting to make a story* *Giyuu shutting her down and knowing all of what had happened still*
But i agree with you for how sad this is even if i dont watch demon slayer and if this was the first vid i had watched on giyushino i would have believed it was actually canon
@@spearmint3Don't you dare spear... when I first read this one I thought everything was going to end well untill I read the part where Shinobu drugs him 🥲😪
I found you because of yabb shouting you out from the community post he made. How the hell did you make a story that made me feel more than most of the other stories I've spent the last ungodly amount of time reading from this style of story telling? Have the like have the sub, you're now one of my top story tellers just from this first story alone. I hope to see what more great work you make in the future and I'm thankful I went through with checking you out.
😭😭😭 omgg im so sorry, and ngl, the part 2 would be like…. the entertainment district, this whole story was made with the intent that it could fit into gotouge’s actual works
Hey I know you said this was a one-shot but I have what I think is a great continuation of this story. My idea was that giyuu would wake up the next day not remembering last night like planned but(here comes my idea) since I the first story we learned giyuu had a naturally very good immune system, his immune system would naturally fight the toxin shinobu gave him to forget the night before. It would not just immediately give him his memory back but whenever he’s around shinobu he gets a headache and eventually goes to check it out at the butterfly estate but when he enters he sees the place he and shinobu sat at and it felt special, like it was something he wanted to remember but can’t, so he for reasons he doesn’t really know lays down there for a while. Shinobu later walks out of her estate and sees him there, she is of course confused and asked what he’s doing there. He says that he doesn’t really know but that it felt familiar and weirdly special, this makes shinobu panic thinking he’s getting his memory back so she again asks what he’s doing at the butterfly estate, he says he originally came here to ask if he can get his head checked up on since it has hurt quite a lot the latest week. shinobu sees this as a opportunity to check how her toxin is working on him, she asks him if she could get some blood to see if hes sick, giyuu doesn't see anything wrong with that since he doesn't know a lot about medicine, she checks his blood and to her dismay she sees that her toxin is getting fought back by his immune system. she panics and comes up with a plan, she takes some more of the toxin in a bottle and comes out saying that she has prescribed him some medicine and gives him the bottle and tells him to mix like a spoonful into some water every morning for the next week, he excepts and goes home. but if you want to make it extra dramaful then say in her panic she chose the wrong toxin cuz she was not careful enough and accidentally just gave him som dangerous poison instead. giyuu in bed in the morning wakes up with more then a headache he leans forward and coughs up a lot of blood, his crow sees this and fly as fast as he can to shinobu to tell her that she need to come and save giyuu. shinobu hurrys to giyuu as her crow goes to get the kakushi(i think that was there name) when she gets to giyuu she sees him laying in bed looking very pale and a pool of blood next to his bed, she is horrified and freezes for a second before trying to help giyuu, later at the butterfly estate, giyuu lays in bed as shinobu tries to figure out what happened so she can save him, his condition worsens and shinobu gets a theory, she tells her crow to fly to giyuu's house and see if she can find his medicine she gave him, her crow flys of and comes back later with the medicine and gives it to shinobu, shinobu looks at it in horror as she realises she gave him one of her deadly poisons as medicine. One she ran out of a cure for too. now you can either try to make this one sad to and have giyuu die because of shinobus carelessness and as giyuu lays on his death bed he could also start remembering that one night to make it extra sad or you could have her remake the cure in time and save him. And if you want to make some relationship drama you could say that mitsuri heard about giyuu's sickness and have her come visit him periodically because she feels bad for him and as they talk maybe they somewhat fall in love too (since giyuu doesn't remember that one night with shinobu) which of course will make shinobu angry and maybe confess everything. thats it, hope you see this.
WOAAAH IM ONLY 23 MINS IN BUT SO FAR THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT! ITS SO CUTE AND WHOLESOME I LOVE TEXTING STORIES LIKE THIS! NOT TOO SPICY AND MORE WHOLESOME, KEEP IT UP!✨
... I jusst finished watching.. And oh my God you are so evil.. (Pls don't take offense it's a joke) I'm actually tearing up rn- why did it end like THIS-😭😭😭 there has to be a part 2 or a bonus part where he wakes up and the injection doesn't work on him and failed and he remembers shinobu and they both stay alive and become happy together forever until they die and become happy in heaven aswell I can't take this ending😭😭😭
@@0_K1ttyGen_0😭😭😭😭 im so sorryyy 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 the story has to end sad so that it can be a realistic headcanonnn, but Dw, I have a Halloween series coming out soon (which is sad as well), but later on i have a super wholesome story that i wrote a while ago and can’t wait to share it on youtube!
wait is it because she's gonna go sacrifice to douma for her revenge or like just automatically kill her self with the wisteria (Prolly not what happen because i hear wisteria only affects demons) but can someone explain what happen at the end with the wisteria poison
i am crying my eyes out over here. i hate that shinobu dies in the real series too leaving tomiaka alone. i love the story but im depressed by the fact that she dies. it hit me hard after reading this😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
😭😭😭 SAMEEEE I hate that the ship doesn’t fully sail in gotogue’s story, but I wanted to write this so it can be like a headcanon part of what really happens 🥹. im glad that it was able to touch you emotionally though! tysmmm for reading 🥹🥹🥹
Near the end I was like bro shining just say I love you do say isn’t the moon lovely In Japanese the moon is lovely isn’t it means that your saying I love you in a secretive way
thanks for the feedback! it’s pretty hard to pace the video to everyone’s reading speed, but if it helps, try and slow the video down and maybe that could work too (that’s what i do for other stories i read cause like im a super slow reader lol)
![Just A Cold Pt.1/2 - Giyushino Oneshot [Sick Giyu] (Check out the description for more info)](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/NQp0CiMk0ws/mqdefault.jpg)
these lyrics match them... Shinobu:"It's not your fault i ruined everything! And it's not your fault I can't be what you need!" .... Giyu:"Baby, Angles like you can't fly down hell with me. I'm everything they said I would be."... Shinobu:"I know that you're wrong for me, Gonna wish we never met on the day I leave! I brought you down to your knees!" Yeah those lyrics make me think of this and them so screw yall ima go sob
🥹🥹🥹 everything about this ship is just pain… and I love it
Song?
Imagine the controversy if giyus body fought off the toxin kocho gave him as well.
*Shinobu attempting to make a story*
*Giyuu shutting her down and knowing all of what had happened still*
But i agree with you for how sad this is even if i dont watch demon slayer and if this was the first vid i had watched on giyushino i would have believed it was actually canon
I didn’t understand the ending well can someone PLS EXPLAIN
This is definitely the most sad story I ever read on wit haha. Because it could actually be canon 😢
🥹🥹 I remember trying my best to write is so that it could be a side story to gotouge’s universe
made me cry fr
@@spearmint3 It was so good to read and so sad at the same time.
And yeah almost made me drop a tear lol, I held a bit to not tear up
@@AkazaUpper33 gonna have to make the next one even sadder so we get some tears 😤😫😉
@@spearmint3Don't you dare spear... when I first read this one I thought everything was going to end well untill I read the part where Shinobu drugs him 🥲😪
I found you because of yabb shouting you out from the community post he made. How the hell did you make a story that made me feel more than most of the other stories I've spent the last ungodly amount of time reading from this style of story telling? Have the like have the sub, you're now one of my top story tellers just from this first story alone. I hope to see what more great work you make in the future and I'm thankful I went through with checking you out.
omgggg thank you so much for your kind words 🥹🥹 serisouly im so grateful for you and yabb so ty!! ill try to have new content out shortly!
THIS IS SO UNDERRATED, I LOVE CHANNEL SO MUCH ALREADY 😭
thank you so much!!! that’s so sweet of you 🥹🥹☺️
Me too
I love how focused I was to the point that I could hear myself blinking 💀
New sub! I really loved this story great job!!! It's always the people who write the best stories that are underrated...
awww thank you so much!! 🥹🥹 that’s such a sweet thing to say, it means so much to me ☺️
@@spearmint3 Np! ☺💖
This is so beautifully written I’m crying thank you for this masterpiece 😭
The plush in the thumbnail is so cute 🥺
Thia is so sad 😭😭😢 you got a new sub 😢😢
thank you so muchhh!!!! im happy you enjoyed to story 🥹🥹 your support means so freakin much to me
The End is so sad😭😭😭
Omg this was the best story I have ever read. You need to make a part 2 of this, like seriously, not even joking. I loved it so so so much❤❤❤❤❤
tyyy! im so happy you enjoyed it! part is was never meant to happen tbh, but maybeeee ill make something for it 😉
@spearmint3 thank you 😊
Want more of it (taisho era au) this a masterpiece you're a legend bro 🔥
aww thank you!! ill hopefully have more taisho based stories out some time in the future!
Yabb pointed me in your direction... Love the story! 😁
THANK YOUUUU, and fr I can’t thank yabb enough he’s so sweet 🥹🥹
How you got me tearing like that, i need a part 2 or i wont be able to sleep at night😭😭😭
😭😭😭 omgg im so sorry, and ngl, the part 2 would be like…. the entertainment district, this whole story was made with the intent that it could fit into gotouge’s actual works
so in other words: bad ending 😞😞😞😞
FUCKKKKk😭😭😭
i refuse to belive this ending. Idc that is a oneshot i neeeeed a pt. 2 it can't just end like this plllllllsssss
Overall good story, subscribed
I already saw this on wit. Not seeing it again because it’s so heartbreaking, still giving it a like
well tysm for the like! ☺️☺️ and it’s good to see you again now on RUclips!
i wasn't expecting a sad ending... i was hoping they live happily together... so sad...
You earned the new sub. I hope to see you grow man
thank you so much for your subscription and support! ill do my best to continue to provide content ☺️
I'm crying so much rn, this is the best and saddest thing I watched in a while
Hey I know you said this was a one-shot but I have what I think is a great continuation of this story.
My idea was that giyuu would wake up the next day not remembering last night like planned but(here comes my idea) since I the first story we learned giyuu had a naturally very good immune system, his immune system would naturally fight the toxin shinobu gave him to forget the night before. It would not just immediately give him his memory back but whenever he’s around shinobu he gets a headache and eventually goes to check it out at the butterfly estate but when he enters he sees the place he and shinobu sat at and it felt special, like it was something he wanted to remember but can’t, so he for reasons he doesn’t really know lays down there for a while. Shinobu later walks out of her estate and sees him there, she is of course confused and asked what he’s doing there. He says that he doesn’t really know but that it felt familiar and weirdly special, this makes shinobu panic thinking he’s getting his memory back so she again asks what he’s doing at the butterfly estate, he says he originally came here to ask if he can get his head checked up on since it has hurt quite a lot the latest week. shinobu sees this as a opportunity to check how her toxin is working on him, she asks him if she could get some blood to see if hes sick, giyuu doesn't see anything wrong with that since he doesn't know a lot about medicine, she checks his blood and to her dismay she sees that her toxin is getting fought back by his immune system. she panics and comes up with a plan, she takes some more of the toxin in a bottle and comes out saying that she has prescribed him some medicine and gives him the bottle and tells him to mix like a spoonful into some water every morning for the next week, he excepts and goes home. but if you want to make it extra dramaful then say in her panic she chose the wrong toxin cuz she was not careful enough and accidentally just gave him som dangerous poison instead. giyuu in bed in the morning wakes up with more then a headache he leans forward and coughs up a lot of blood, his crow sees this and fly as fast as he can to shinobu to tell her that she need to come and save giyuu. shinobu hurrys to giyuu as her crow goes to get the kakushi(i think that was there name) when she gets to giyuu she sees him laying in bed looking very pale and a pool of blood next to his bed, she is horrified and freezes for a second before trying to help giyuu, later at the butterfly estate, giyuu lays in bed as shinobu tries to figure out what happened so she can save him, his condition worsens and shinobu gets a theory, she tells her crow to fly to giyuu's house and see if she can find his medicine she gave him, her crow flys of and comes back later with the medicine and gives it to shinobu, shinobu looks at it in horror as she realises she gave him one of her deadly poisons as medicine. One she ran out of a cure for too.
now you can either try to make this one sad to and have giyuu die because of shinobus carelessness and as giyuu lays on his death bed he could also start remembering that one night to make it extra sad or you could have her remake the cure in time and save him. And if you want to make some relationship drama you could say that mitsuri heard about giyuu's sickness and have her come visit him periodically because she feels bad for him and as they talk maybe they somewhat fall in love too (since giyuu doesn't remember that one night with shinobu) which of course will make shinobu angry and maybe confess everything.
thats it, hope you see this.
It touched my empty of emotions heart
GASPPPP CGGG ON 1000 SPEARYYYY🎉🎉🎉❤
OMGGGG TYSM YURIIIII IM SO FREAKIN LUCKY TO HAVE PEOPLE LIEK YOU SUPPORTING ME SO TY FR 🥹🥹🥹🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
@@spearmint3 YWWW SPEARYYYY I WILL SUPPORT YOU FOREVERRRR
@@okyuriiee AHHH THANK YOUUUU
WOAAAH IM ONLY 23 MINS IN BUT SO FAR THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT! ITS SO CUTE AND WHOLESOME I LOVE TEXTING STORIES LIKE THIS! NOT TOO SPICY AND MORE WHOLESOME, KEEP IT UP!✨
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I jusst finished watching..
And oh my God you are so evil.. (Pls don't take offense it's a joke)
I'm actually tearing up rn- why did it end like THIS-😭😭😭 there has to be a part 2 or a bonus part where he wakes up and the injection doesn't work on him and failed and he remembers shinobu and they both stay alive and become happy together forever until they die and become happy in heaven aswell I can't take this ending😭😭😭
@@0_K1ttyGen_0😭😭😭😭 im so sorryyy 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 the story has to end sad so that it can be a realistic headcanonnn, but Dw, I have a Halloween series coming out soon (which is sad as well), but later on i have a super wholesome story that i wrote a while ago and can’t wait to share it on youtube!
@@spearmint3 Yaaay:]
Why do I want to be able to be there and say DON'T FUCKING DO THIS. JUST LET HIM BE THERE FOR YOU AND LOVE YOU UNTIL THE END
#giyushino
Your good with words :)
wait is it because she's gonna go sacrifice to douma for her revenge or like just automatically kill her self with the wisteria (Prolly not what happen because i hear wisteria only affects demons) but can someone explain what happen at the end with the wisteria poison
Please do some more giyushino texting stories they’re my favorite ship
dw Giyushino is legit my fave ship of all time, I promise more content with them will be out soon! 😉😉
😳😳 Spear on RUclips
yabb in my comments 😳😍
@@spearmint3 spearmint replying to my comment😲🥰
Omg friends 😱
It's Yachi here btw :')
@@Yabb__ anything for u 😘
@@kenmaspsp AHHH HELLO!! 🤩
It’s sooooo sadddddddddddddd can u make an after story to this? 😢
Why did she kill herself I was so focused it made me cry😢
(New sub)
She didn't kill herself. She just erase giyu's memories and inject herself poison to kill the demon who kill her sister.
i am crying my eyes out over here. i hate that shinobu dies in the real series too leaving tomiaka alone. i love the story but im depressed by the fact that she dies. it hit me hard after reading this😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
😭😭😭 SAMEEEE I hate that the ship doesn’t fully sail in gotogue’s story, but I wanted to write this so it can be like a headcanon part of what really happens 🥹. im glad that it was able to touch you emotionally though! tysmmm for reading 🥹🥹🥹
Sorry im commenting alot, but im still here barley holding my tears💀👍
no it’s okkkk!! i love reading y’all’s comments so dw at all 🥹🥹
Ok i know this is a oneshot but is it possible to do a pt2
Im the new demon in demon slayer
Nice knife there slayer 🗿
Near the end I was like bro shining just say I love you do say isn’t the moon lovely
In Japanese the moon is lovely isn’t it means that your saying I love you in a secretive way
I’d also like to say during their kiss I’m like dam I’m bricked up:)
25:58
I don't think you're small..
I mean yes, you are small, very small
Why was that funny to me😭 i shouldnt laugh-
giyu a menace frr 😭😭
I think Oyakata sama should sat NO DEMONS TO BIG NO HASHIRA IS TO SMALL
Did shinobi just kill her self
No
REWATCHING THIS FOR THE 5TH TIME AND STILL NOT BORED EEK !!!!! ALSO FORGET TO SUB SO I JUST DID LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE STORIES ^^
PLUS IT RLLY NEED PART TWO BTW DON'T STRESS OUT GET SOME REST TOO KAY !
ahhh ty for your kind words! I really wasn’t considering doing a part two, but i might just do it if the ideas come 😉😉
I dont get the ending someone explain please?
I dont get why she injected herself
Bro that ending was just…… uhhhh let’s say… fReAkY😅
This broke me
Why... The ending? That syringe? Explain the ending please 😭
Spoiler: she inject poison to sacrifice herself to douma.
Did shinobu kill herself?
No
That was my welcome to texting stories
so... size does matter then....
Didn't expect the ending...
(༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ)
The Title 💀💀
Spear made a good story???
didn’t you give it a dislike when it first came out 😭😭
28:29 answer a mother
Ayoo 21:12 is sus
😢😢😢😢
Good story but maybe go a little slower I could barley keep up
thanks for the feedback! it’s pretty hard to pace the video to everyone’s reading speed, but if it helps, try and slow the video down and maybe that could work too (that’s what i do for other stories i read cause like im a super slow reader lol)
I-l😊
Paw patrol ahh tittle
NOOOOOOOOOOO
I don't care