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  • Опубликовано: 3 сен 2023
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  • @asha..xoxo1
    @asha..xoxo1 4 месяца назад +43

    part 2.
    context.
    • your name is ria routledge
    • john b is your older brother but treats you more like a friend
    • kie, pope and sarah are just your friends, but you are the closest with kie
    • jj is your crush but he doesnt realise it
    • your dad is called paul and he is usually drunk so you dont go round his house often since he hurts you sometimes
    • you only really open up to jj, no one else knows about your dad (not even john b since he doesnt really talk about or to him)
    • { } means thinking
    jb: im sure it means nothing, dont sweat it
    ria: but it could mean something though and anyways kie knows ive liked him for so long
    jb: well maybe she is talking to him about you
    ria: i might go ask her what is going on
    jb: i wouldnt if i were you
    ria: well you're not me
    *i start walking to the other room and see jj and kie getting closer, i just had to go in and stop them. i aggressively knock on the door*
    ria: excuse me. kie?
    *they quickly move away from eachother as they notice me. but i already saw what happened*
    kie: ria! we were just speaking about you
    jj: yeah, about how you love- erm cats!
    ria: { i dont love cats? maybe jj doesnt love me that much }
    ria: oh yeah! kie, i need to speak with you
    kie: okay... be right back jayj
    *i walk out of the room with kie following me. john b watches our conversation*
    kie: what is it ria? i was busy you know
    ria: wtf what that! with jj? my crush you know about!
    kie: it was just a chat, we didnt kiss or anything. and anyways he isnt yours, you dont own him
    ria: yeah right "we didnt kiss", dont lie. i saw the whole thing kiara.
    kie: it didnt mean anything thought!
    ria: right, well if it didnt mean anything then go tell jj that you don't love him or want to talk to him anymore
    kie: i cant do that
    ria: i guess i have my answer then
    *i turn around and look at john b with tears in my eyes, he doesnt really care so i walk out of the chateau*
    kie: ria wait! let me explain!
    *jj walks in*
    jj: just leave it babe, she isnt worth your time
    kie: but-
    jj: no buts. cmon
    *jj picks kie up by the waist and starts kissing her again, they go back into the bedroom*
    *ria's pov*
    ria: { what the fuck even just happened. why jj? she knew he was my crush }
    *in the distance i see sarah at a kook party, so i start to walk over*
    sarah: ria? is that you?
    *she seems drunk*
    ria: yes sarah, it's me
    sarah: where is john b? is he being a dick again because if he is ill go over there and smack the shit out of him
    ria: no! no! definitely not. and if he was i would have smacked him already
    sarah: well who was it then?
    ria: kie actually. well kie and jj, kissing and then lying to cover it up
    sarah: omg! that shit is messed up! well cmon let's get you a drink. i think you need one
    *i follow sarah over to the bar, i get a beer but it isnt enough so i just drink straight from the taps*
    rafe: ria? you okay?
    ria: yeah, yea im fine just a bit thirsty ya know
    rafe: been there. well if you want to come and hang with me just come over, i think topper needs a different girl to obsess over instead of sarah
    ria: okay, for sure! ill pop round there in a bit
    rafe: looking forward to it
    *he walks off and i continue drinking from the taps. i need something more to distract me so i take out the w€€d that i stole from my dad. i see rafe staring still so i decide to go over there*
    rafe: ria! thanks for joining us.
    topper: hi ria, sarah has told me alot about you.
    ria: hi topper
    *i see john b running over, i assume that sarah has told him to come so i stay there with rafe and topper*
    rafe: who let that dirty pogue in here?
    topper: ill have a word with the security
    ria: ha, literally
    topper: ill go tell him to leave
    jb: RIA! CMON WE NEED TO GET HOME NOW!
    ria: what? why?
    jb: DAD NEEDS US HOME FOR THE MEETING WIH SOCIAL SERVICES, REMEMBER?
    rafe: dad? home? ria are you related to this piece of shit
    ria: yes rafe, i am. now let's go
    rafe: dont bother speaking to me again
    *i begin to walk off and i flip rafe off*
    jb: are you even sober? dad wont like you being drunk at this meeting
    ria: well actually im high so itll be fine!
    jb: are you having a laugh? lets just hope dad doesnt notice or he might shout at you
    ria: yeah, he will probably shout { and beat me up }
    *john b and i get in the twinkie and head home*
    ria: it's so.. clean in here. this doesnt happen often
    jb: whenever i come its clean. but i think he has higher standards for me
    ria: { you literally never come that's why }
    ria: is he even here? i dont think he is
    jb: ofc he will be! DAD! DAD!
    paul: YES? oh john b, ria! thank you for coming!
    ria: i wouldn't miss it!
    *my dad stares me straight in the eyes and then continues to smile at john b*
    paul: cmon let's get sat down.
    *i reluctantly sit down and listen what social services have to say*
    ss woman: right. well we do know you have been having some complaints from the neighbours for screaming? is that true?
    paul: yes, but its just because ria here gets a bit too excited sometimes
    ria: just too excited!!! like right now!!
    *i think my dad knows im high so he kicks my leg under the table*
    paul: yep!
    *i try to whisper to john b but i am a bit loud*
    ria: psstt, john b! i think dad knows im high. dont you think?
    jb: yes, ria i think so
    paul: I KNEW IT! YOU LITTLE RAT CANT EVEN STAY SOBER FOR ONE SMALL CHAT. GET THE FUCK UP TO YOUR ROOM NOW!
    ria: make me.
    paul: what did you just say?
    ria: literally make me. you dont want social services to know, or john b. right?
    ss woman and jb: know what?
    paul: it's nothing! lets just get on.
    *the meeting finishes and the social services leave so i get up to leave too*
    paul: stop right there young lady, dont think you are going out after what just happened.
    ria: oh dad please! dont make me call her up and tell her
    jb: TELL HER WHAT?
    paul and ria: nothing.
    *jj and kies pov*
    kie: jj, what are we doing?
    jj: what do you think kie? we are having sex.
    kie: that's it right? no feelings?
    jj: not unless you want them.
    kie: i can't do this anymore jj! i love pope alright! ria loves you move than i ever will and she actually wants you
    jj: w-what? she loves me?
    kie: yes jj. yes
    *back to ria's pov*
    *i begin to make my way back to the chateau to speak to jj. once i arrive i see john b taking to jj probably about what happened with dad. i just head straight to my room*
    jj: oh ria! can we talk?
    ria: no.
    jj: please ria!
    ria: okay, fine cmon.
    *i go into my room with jj following behind. i see john b watching us so i close the door*
    jj: im sorry ria. i didnt mean that to happen with kie but it is completely done now do you don't need to worry about that
    ria: who said i worried about that? because i didnt okay?
    jj: that isnt what kie said but okay. john b also said something about your dad. you know you can talk to me about it
    ria: there is nothing to talk about
    jj: i think there is
    ria: no jj there isn't
    jj: did he hit you again? was he high?
    ria: no, i am high. but what he did doesnt really matter because its not like anyone cares
    jj: i care! ria i love you so much you realise that right?
    ria: no, you cant love me
    jj: why not?
    ria: because ill break your heart
    jj: maybe ill break yours
    ria: nobody breaks my heart. and anyways, why would i want that?
    jj: i didnt mean it li-
    ria: save it jj. are you done talking or do i have to pretend to be interested for another hour?
    *jj stands up and walks away, i get up to shut the door behind him and then sit back down on the floor. i stare at the wall for a while until i remember about the p!lls i stole from my dad a few weeks ago*
    ria: { ooh! these could be fun }
    *i pick up the bottles of p!lls and down the whole thing, i leave my room and head over to the hammocks outside. jj sees me go outside and follows me*
    jj: ria wait up! im sorry about earlier, i didnt mean it
    ria: it's fine. it doesnt matter
    *i decide to lay on the grass instead so jj lays next to me*
    jj: do you forgive me?
    ria: yes i do jj
    jj: good. are you going to talk to kie?
    ria: oh fuck no
    jj: i love you ria.
    ria: yes, but you really love kiara!
    *i boop jj on the nose*
    jj: ria what is going on?
    ria: i took a shit tonne of p!lls
    jj: p!lls? ria? what kind of p!lls?
    ria: oh you know ... p!lls.
    *i start to shut my eyes for a nap but jj takes it the wrong way*
    jj: ria? RIA WAKE UP! JOHN B COME HERE RIGHT NOW!
    jb: what happened now?
    jj: ITS RIA, SHE IS PASSED OUT! i think she oded.
    jb: oh fuck. fuck fuckety fucking fuck! the stupid fucker
    jj: right well stop calling her a fucker and get help?
    jb: we will give drive her in the twinkie
    jj: okay, cmon hurry!
    *john b carries me to the twinkie and lays me down, john b drives to the hospital while jj sat with me and we stop in the car park once we get there*
    jj: erm, john b.
    jb: yea?
    jj: shes awake
    jb: oh
    ria: oh wow
    jj: what?
    ria: you care!
    jj: of course i care!
    jb: well then, let's get going
    i think this is a pretty shit part 2 but if u want to next part just lmk

    • @Aster-vi8sh
      @Aster-vi8sh 3 месяца назад +2

      pls make a new part it’s so good

    • @Aeduv
      @Aeduv 3 месяца назад +2

      Tag😊

    • @Jacii.Luvss.Jesuss
      @Jacii.Luvss.Jesuss 2 месяца назад +1

      Next part pls tag can’t wait

    • @Samantha-nx2my
      @Samantha-nx2my Месяц назад

      Taggggg❤❤❤❤

    • @FlorenciaMartinez-hx8zm
      @FlorenciaMartinez-hx8zm Месяц назад

      Pls make another part ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️

  • @izzzzzzyyyyyy
    @izzzzzzyyyyyy 2 месяца назад +15

    pt2!!!
    context-
    -john b is your brother
    -jj has been giving you mixed signals
    -u and kie used to be best friends until one day you dec to tell her you like jj, she all of a sudden turned mean towards you and made liking jj a "competition"
    -sarah and you have been best friends since john and her have been seeing eachother
    -rafe is OBSESSED with you
    -pope will always be like a brother to you
    -cleo aint here yet.
    -USING ABBREVIATIONS!!-
    jb looks back at what you were looking at, "hes an idiot dont worry about it."
    jj and kie started dancing together to the music that was playing and jj looked at her like he was in love. y/n felt her stomach physically hurt from this and got up.
    "i just think i drank too much or something..." y/n said mumbling
    jb didn't believe you for a second but let you go since he knew you needed time.
    before going inside y/n took a glance back at jj and kie before going inside.
    lmk if you want a pt3?
    ‼️PART 3‼️
    *the next morning*
    y/n was up early, surprisingly, she decided she was gonna clear her mind from the night before. she shouldnt be jealous… jj wasnt even hers! She was about to roll a morning joint when jj came out.
    “morning weed eh?” he said perky.
    “yeah. tough…night.” y/n managed to get out.
    “oh?” jj questioned raising an eyebrow.
    y/ns smile cracked through and she looked away.
    “it’s really nothing-“ before she could finish kie barged the door open making y/n flinch.
    “jayg. the boys are sending us to get breakfast.” kie rolled her eyes at the sight of y/n.
    “oh ok.” jj got up giving you a hopeful look, “see ya later y-n.”

  • @_weirdo24
    @_weirdo24 6 месяцев назад +341

    Part two
    You are friends with the pogues. Kie is your best friend and JJ is your crush.
    John B: you ok y/n?
    Y/n: it’s sad because it just hurts…
    Y/n runs off
    John B: Y/n…
    Y/n: no John B it’s fine I knew he liked her I always did… it just hurts because I’ve liked him basically since I met him and I spend every day knowing he doesn’t like me back… plus Kie deserves him after what she’s been through
    John B: you’ve been through a lot to tho!
    Y/n: I know that!… but nobody else seems to care about what happens to me so I decided if they don’t I won’t either… I’ve decided that maybe I’m just not worth it so I’ll be happy for Kie as long as I live
    John B: Y/n you don’t ha-
    Y/n: it’s fine ok! I’ll be fine eventually cause even if it wasn’t I can’t have him anyway… so somehow I’ll have to learn to be ok, it’s just the way life is… I’m used to people not liking me anyway…
    Y/n walks off
    Back at the hot tub
    John B: JJ you really know how to break someone…
    JJ: what do you mean by that?
    John B: are you really that oblivious!? She likes you and you can’t even tell!?
    JJ: who likes me?
    John B: you know what I don’t even wanna tell you, you would just try to apologise and make it worse!
    JJ: I don’t understand what’s going on!?
    John B: you never do
    John B walks off
    Part three at 3 likes

    • @_weirdo24
      @_weirdo24 6 месяцев назад +121

      Part three (even tho I didn’t get three likes… yay)
      JJ goes after John B
      JJ: John B tell me what’s going on!
      John B: I seriously can’t believe you don’t know what’s going on
      JJ: tell me then!
      John B: are you and Kie a thing?
      JJ: no god no!
      John B: well that makes things a lot different
      JJ: can you tell me what’s going on now
      John B: I can’t believe you haven’t noticed but y/n likes you!
      JJ: great I like her too what’s wrong with that?
      John B: no JJ she loves you
      JJ: oh
      John: yeah oh! You flirting with Kie doesn’t help
      JJ: but I like her back
      John B: well that’s sad for you because she believes she doesn’t have a single chance with you and she had this almost speech about how she always knew you liked Kie and how she’ll try to be happy for Kie after she’s “been through a lot” and she’s used to people not liking her
      JJ: shoot I’ve really messed up havent I?
      John B: yeah you’ve very much messed up and now she’s going back to her abusive fathers house
      JJ: hold on hold on ABUSIVE FATHER!?
      John B: yeah
      JJ: ok I messed up right but you DIDNT EVEN THINK to stop her!?
      John B: oh shoot for once your right
      JJ: get the Twinkie we’re going to her house rn
      John B: right right let’s go
      They run to the Twinkie and drive to yns house

    • @Thabombbbbb
      @Thabombbbbb 6 месяцев назад +4

      Next part plz

    • @_weirdo24
      @_weirdo24 6 месяцев назад +122

      @@Thabombbbbb
      Part three
      JJ and John B get to the house just as you go to get inside when they hear another voice
      Y/d: what are you doing back here!?
      Y/n: I had no where else to go
      Y/d: I told you if you stayed around the boy you weren’t coming home
      Y/n: JJ is a good person dad I swear I love him…
      JJ and John B overhear this
      Y/d: WHAT DID YOU SAY!? You’re a brat you know this I will not have an idiot for a daughter that loves a homeless pogue!!
      Y/n: dad I’m sorry
      Y/d walk up to you and smashes your head on the glass making JJ and John B jump a little in fear
      Y/d: YOU ARE NOT WELCOME HERE
      y/d says punching y/n a lot then chucking her of the porch and onto the glass then shuts the door going inside
      JJ: y/n!
      JJ says as soon as y/d is gone
      Y/n: JJ?
      JJ: I’m so sorry
      Y/n faints
      John B: quick lets get her out of here before y/d comes back I think we need to get her to a hospital
      JJ: right right right

    • @Country525
      @Country525 6 месяцев назад +7

      Pls make another part❤ love this!😊

    • @_weirdo24
      @_weirdo24 5 месяцев назад +106

      @@Addy668
      Part 4
      JJ and John B are racing y/n to a hospital when she starts to wake up
      Y/n: JJ?
      JJ: y/n you’re awake!!!
      Y/n: JJ why am I in your lap
      JJ blushes
      JJ: I uh… wanted you to be comfortable
      John B smirks in the front
      Y/n: oh thanks
      John B: I think there’s more to it-
      JJ: John B! I uh… sorry about him he’s being an idiot
      John B: but it’d be a funny way to tell her!!
      JJ: I swear John B ima-
      Y/n: what are you guys on about??
      JJ: nothing let’s just focus on getting you to a hospital
      John B: oh yeah almost forgot about that
      JJ shakes his head in disappointment at John B
      Y/n: do you two ever get along
      John B: yeah!
      JJ: eh
      John B: WHAT DO YOU MEAN EH!?
      JJ: I mean eh
      Y/n: am I even getting to a hospital at this point you know what just take me home! I’m literally fine!
      John B: you sure
      Y/n: yeah
      Y/n says sitting up from JJs lap but makes JJ frown a bit
      JJ: you sure y/n you passed out
      Y/n: yeah but I think I’m good now
      JJ: alright then
      … silence
      Y/n: why did it get awkward so suddenly?
      John B: no idea
      JJ: just focus on driving John B we don’t wanna crash into a stop sign like last time
      John B: I thought you said we would never speak of that
      JJ: I didn’t say it was a promise…
      Y/n laughs
      Y/n: how did you run into a stop sign
      John B glares at JJ
      JJ: come on it’s funny
      John B: I wasn’t paying attention I was trying to dry my wet clothes after JJ made me snort water at a joke he made then a plastic bag was on the road amd I thought it was a snake… it wasn’t but I swerved around it and hit the stop sign
      JJ laughs
      JJ: it was kinda funny
      John B: was not!
      JJ: you thought a plastic bag was a snake yeah it is!
      We finally get back to the Château
      Y/n: I’m telling everyone that John B!
      John B: JJ I hate you
      Part 5?
      (Btw I know this is a silly one for what y/n just experienced but the ones I made before was when I wasn’t in a good mood I’m in a good mood today so, so was my writing😁)

  • @khy97
    @khy97 5 месяцев назад +31

    part two
    background: you’re great friends with the pogues, you’re also really close with Sarah, you and you’ve always felt something for JJ, and lastly John B is your older brother
    *You sit there as tears fall down your face, as John B tries to comfort you, you stand up and hug him*
    Y/N: it hurts John b..i had a feeling he didn’t like me
    JB: hey, i know it hurts, but i promise it will get better
    Y/N: i hope so, and thank you JB
    JB: for what?
    Y/N: just being here, it means a lot
    JB: anytime sis, love you
    Y/N: love you two
    *You two walk away and JJ and Kie are still talking and having fun, eventually everyone’s at the chateau and talking, you’re in your room and Sarah goes to knock on your door*
    S: y/n? are you in there?
    Y/N: yeah, come in
    *Sarah comes in to see your crying*
    S: hey, what’s wrong?!
    Y/N: it’s nothing a promise
    S: please tell me y/n..
    Y/N: ….i saw JJ and Kie talking and having fun, but then they kissed..it hurt Sarah, it felt like someone punched me in my chest, i’ve never felt this way, i never really knew i like JJ..
    S: i’m so sorry y/n..that stuff does hurt, but things get better, and maybe you should talk to JJ? if you don’t want to don’t, but i’d recommend it
    Y/N: maybe, but idk, i might, but thank you Sarah, you’re always so helpful
    S: anytime, i’m gonna go back out, text me if you need anything, ok?
    *you nod and Sarah leaves, eventually you walk out of your room and walk to the dock, as you leave JJ watches you walk out with a slightly worried face*
    JJ: i’m gonna talk to her
    S: wouldn’t recommend that
    JJ: what? why?
    S: you hurt her JJ
    JJ: what’d i do??
    *Sarah looks at Kie*
    K: what-?
    JJ: oh.. SHIT! *he runs after you*
    *you jump as you hear footsteps*
    Y/N: JJ? what are you doing? *you can already feel tears forming*
    JJ: i’m so sorry y/n, i wasn’t thinking, i’m so so sorry, i understand i hurt you
    Y/N: slow down JJ, what are you talking about?
    JJ: Sarah kind of told me i hurt you and now i understand, and please, can i explain to you that whole situation.?
    Y/N: go ahead
    *you both make it to the dock and sit down* (keep in mind, it’s dark out)
    JJ: so, me and kie were just hanging out, and having fun, but then she got close to me, and kissed me, i saw you run off, but after you ran off, i shoved her off because she was still kissing me, i promise..y/n i don’t like kie like that..
    Y/N: so basically she kissed you without consent from you?
    JJ: yeah
    Y/N: that’s messed up
    JJ: it really is, but can i tell you something else?
    Y/N: sure go ahead
    *JJ slowly moves closer to you and gently kisses you, he backs off, waiting for what you’re gonna say*
    Y/N: i- *you turn slightly red and can’t help but smile, JJ is also smiling*
    JJ: i’ve liked you for so long y/n, i didn’t really know how to tell you
    *you laughed and smiled*
    Y/N: i’ve liked you for a long time too
    *you ruffle his hair gently*
    Y/N: can we just stay out here? it’s so pretty outside, the stars, just you and i
    JJ: of course we can
    let me know if you want more

  • @𝖫𝗂𝗅𝗒ᵗʰᵉ𝐛𝐞𝐞bug

    POV: You and JJ broke up bc of Kie, and now he’s acting like nothing happened and making moves on Kie.

  • @cctv650
    @cctv650 6 месяцев назад +36

    part 2!
    JJ: ur crush obvs 😍
    JB: ur big bro 😮‍💨
    K(kiara): ur ex friend🤥
    S(sarah): ur pookie (bff) 🤭
    P(pope): ur rlly close friend 😘
    y/n: *”it’s sad because it just hurts..”*
    JB: *”hey it’s okay.. i’m sure there’s more people for you..!”*
    *you nod before getting up and begin walking to the cheatue (idk how to spell it btw..!) and sit down before texting on your phone*
    *texting S: “hey sarah do you think you could come round to the cheatue for me..? i need to see u rn.”*
    *S sends you back a ‘👍’ and you soon see her walking towards you and she sits next to you and sighs*
    S: *”what’s up y/n?”*
    y/n: *”i really thought JJ liked me.. Kie knew i liked him..”*
    S: *”you know some friends aren’t always the best but i’m sure JJ will see what he’s missing out on..”*
    *back at the fire*
    JJ: *”yo JB where’s y/n?”*
    JB: *”her and sarah are at the cheatue she seemed a bit upset.”*
    *JJ nods before rushing towards the cheatue realising his mistake.*
    /part 3??/
    part 3
    *JJ can feel the breeze whacking against his face his hair blowing backwards and a feeling of discourage in his mind..*
    y/n: *”let’s just enjoy the night..”*
    *you suddenly hear JJ’s footsteps and feel his hand grab yours he kisses you deeply whilst the rest of the pouges watch from afar..*
    JJ: *”oh I love you so much.. so much..”*
    *you were about to smile before the recent events play out in your heads… your probably just other thinking it all so you try to snap yourself back to reality.. you turn to JJ and brush the hair out of his face. You could feel yourself drawing your body closer to his whilst your lips almost reach his. JJ retreats and picks you up kissing your hand and placing his hands on your thighs whilst he carries you to your room in the cheatue*
    y/n: *”JJ what the f*ck!?”*
    JJ: *”don’t be so feisty cupcake!”*
    *once you reach the room you notice a notification appear on JJ’s phone. It’s from Pope. The text clearly saying something about you and you slightly notice it’s obvious.*
    ?part 4?

    • @Jennifer-Rose98
      @Jennifer-Rose98 5 месяцев назад +1

      Tag me plsss❤❤❤❤❤

    • @Aeduv
      @Aeduv 5 месяцев назад +1

      Next parttttt

    • @charlieab20
      @charlieab20 5 месяцев назад +1

      Part 33333333333!!!!!! plz?

    • @dendacz4477
      @dendacz4477 4 месяца назад

      Tag meeee❤❤

    • @Anna_Ley1865
      @Anna_Ley1865 2 месяца назад

      Tag me

  • @Pretty_Little_Lies
    @Pretty_Little_Lies 5 месяцев назад +20

    Part two bcz y not 🌊🤙💕🏝️
    Context: JB= John b. K = Kiera. Kiera is your best friend and John b is your brother, you have a crush on JJ and pope is ur boy bsf.
    Y/n: “it’s sad bcz it js hurts..”
    JB: “ *hugs you *
    Y/n: “I- ima go..”
    JB: * lets you go and nods*
    * you go inside and JJ watches you*
    K: “you good JJ?”
    Jj:” yeah I’ll be back..” *he walks after y/n*
    *you go upstairs and slam your door and cry in ur pillow*
    Jj:” *knocks on ur door* Housekeeping” (yes I did js pull that)
    Y/n:”go away!”
    Jj:”aww man party pooper!!” *he hears u sniffle*
    Jj:” open the d@mn door.”
    *he opens the door himself*
    Jj:” oh cupcake what’s wrong?”
    Y/n:”y-you! And Kie! A-and..”
    jj:” Cupcake there’s nothing between me and Kie, look Y/n I love you.”
    Y/n:” Jj I love you too..”
    * jj kisses you*
    * you hug JJ and JB walks in*
    JB: “ Yo, Jj wtf?!”
    Y/n: “JB, not now..”
    JB: “fine..fine..”
    JJ:”let’s go back out there”
    Y/n:” okay.”
    Jj: *gets up and puts out his hand* “milady?”
    Y/n: *laughs* •u take his hand•
    *yall walk out side and sit down, u sit on his lap and he holds ur waist*
    - like for part 3 its gets juicy I need 3 likes for it-
    Part 3:
    Kie:”WTF JJ I THOUGHT WE HAD SOMETHING?!”
    JJ:”uh yeah a friend ship?”
    *everyone ooo’s*
    Kie:”I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU Y/N I LIKE JJ!”
    Y/n:”WELL TAKE A LOOK HONEY CLEARLY HE LIKES *ME*!”
    *Kie i shocked and runs away*
    JB:”okay, y/n that.was.badass.”
    Y/n:”tyyy!”
    Pope:”erm ima go check on her..”
    Sarah:”yea go do that pope. Anyway y’all wanna go boating?”
    JJ:”when have I ever said no to that?”
    Y/n:”fr”
    JB:”I’m down, Y/n and Jj go get drinks, me and Sarah will get games to play!”
    Y/n & JJ:”Mkay.”
    *you get up and Jj gets up and y’all hold hands to go get drinks*
    Y/n:”yk, you’ve never ACTUALLY asked me to be your gf.”
    JJ:”oh my bad. Let me do that.”
    *jj look at her*
    JJ:”Y/n will you be my gf?”
    Y/n:”ofc dummy!”
    *y’all grab the drinks and head out*
    John b:” yo!”
    Sarah:”besties!”
    JJ:”wsg?”
    Y/n:”heyyy!”
    *they boat out and Officer Perkins I think it was comes out*
    Officer:”Hey, you guys know that this is closed right?”
    Y/n:”uh..no ma’am I’m sorry ma’am..”
    Officer:”it’s fine. I won’t tell. You guys can stay just stay down.”
    *they all smile and say ty*
    -LIKE FOR PT 4!!-
    Pt. 4 💗
    *sarah laughs and sits down*.
    John b:” IS KIE K!SS!NG POPE?!”
    JJ:”OH HELL YA!”
    Y/n:”that’s a cute couple right there.”
    *Rafe comes out and see you talking while drinking a beer he dosent see the others bc there sitting down*
    Rafe:”Y/N!”
    Y/n:”y’all stay down and listen, YEA?!”
    Rafe:”WHY ARE YOU OUT THERE ALONE? WHILE THERES A MASKED KILLER?!”
    Y/n:”bc? Why not? And also..no there’s not..wait..F*CK GO DRIVE THE BOAT!”
    *JJ hops up and speeds to the officer*
    Officer:”Yea kids?”
    Y/n:”so, we were out in the l-lake a-and R-Rafe Cameron came up and said “Y/n? What a-are you doing out here alone when there’s a masked killer” and there isn’t one so I believe Rafe k!lled Rg/n!”
    ( rg/n is random girls name.)
    Officer:”that.is.smart. Holy sh*t uh okay! I will call him down do you guys wanna sit?”
    JJ:”yea guys let’s go sit..do you have somewhere that Rafe won’t see?”
    Officer:”yes, uh it’s in the back. Come with me.”
    *she brings them to the back and calls Rafe down*
    Y/n:”d-do y-you t-thing h-he’s g-gonna h-hurt u-us..?”
    JJ:”y/n what’s wrong? You’re stuttering like crazy!”
    Sarah:”yea..and also he won’t hurt me. Not even if it’s pretend.”
    John b:”yea, what’s wrong?”
    Y/n:”if you guys weren’t there I would have been DEAD, he has a gun yk.”
    Sarah:”yea but it broke.”
    Y/n:”doesn’t mean it can’t shoot a bullet.”
    JJ:”true. My guns broke and it can still shoot lol.”
    *you look at JJ and daydream abt him*
    JJ:”you alr love? You’re staring into my soul.”
    Y/n:”yeah I’m fine, just admiring how handsome my bf is.”
    -3 hrs later-
    JJ:”we have been in here FOREVER”
    Officer:”you guys are getting an award. You guys caught a killer.”
    Y/n:”omg..what’s the reward?”
    Officer:”well you guys get to decide!”
    Y/n:”holy..no we can’t! Not without Kie and Pope.”
    JJ:”there prob macking soooo”
    Y/n:”idgaf! There a pougue!”
    JJ:”fine. John b go get them.”
    John b:”alr”
    Y/n:”I’ll come!”
    *they go get them and come back*
    Rafe:”Y/N THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! ALL.YOUR.FAULT!”
    +Rafe grabs her+
    Y/n:”JAYG!”
    *JJ runs out and pulls her outta his arms and hugs her like how John b did to Sarah when Ward tried to take her*
    JJ:”OFFICER!”
    Officer:”hmm?”
    Y/n:”h-h-he-“
    JJ:”shhh I got it, Rafe grabbed her.”
    Officer:”Your going to a different cell.”
    *the officer brings him to a different cell and they get they’re reward, John b, got to stay in the house, Luke got arrested, Kie got to be a Pougue, Pope got a degree in education, Sarah’s dad got arrested, And Y/n got a puppy.*
    -LIKE FOR PT.5!”

  • @Dxisy_.p
    @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад +283

    Part 2
    Btw John B is your twin brother and Kie likes JJ
    Jb: its going to be ok
    Y/n: its not, Kiara knew I liked him
    Jb: One sec i will be having words with her
    Before he can go you grab his wrist
    Y/n: no its fine they look happy together…
    You start to tear up and you run to the ct (the cheatue i think is how you spell it but I’m going to use ct for short)
    You run up to your room and slam your door.
    Y/n: why me? Why me?!
    You listen to music and fall asleep
    The next morning
    JB: Guess you decided to wake up
    Y/n: shut up
    Jb: love u 2
    You grin at him but it fades away as you see kie and JJ kissing.
    JJ: hey y/n whats up?
    You roll your eyes at him go up to Kie and slap her.
    Kie: OW! What was that for?
    Y/n: for kissing the guy you knew I liked!
    JJ: woah woah woah! You liked me?
    Y/n: yes but so what it doesn’t matter now you have Kie
    jJ: Y/n I-
    Kie: JJ just ignore that pick me b**ch
    Jj: 1. She is NOT a pick me
    2. I didn’t want to be with you you FORCED me
    You run of to your room with JJ behind you
    Part 3
    You slam the door shut and start crying.
    Y/n: *in mind* what did i do? What did i do for this?
    The door opens, its JJ.
    Jj: hey cupcake, I’m sorry
    He gives you a hug and you hold tight
    Y/n: its ok you didn’t know
    He smiles at you and then leaves the room
    In the morning
    JB: Y/N WAKE UP WE HAVE 10 MINUTES
    Y/n: 5 mire minutes
    John b barges into your room and pulls you out of your bed
    John b: hurry up or we will leave you behind
    You get dressed into some cargos and a black crop top and grey jacket (if you want you can wear smth else)
    Jj: Well hello cupcake
    Y/n: hey blondie
    John B gives you both that look but you just laugh
    At school
    Jb: we had a test?
    Y/n: you didn’t know
    Jb: no but did you study
    Y/n: no ask pope
    Jb: pope do you know anything
    P: shut up
    Jb: jeez
    Lunch
    Mia: well well well look who it is
    Y/n: well well well guess I’ve came across the insecure b**ch again
    The other bullies laugh
    Mia: Shut up you sh*t bags
    Holly: yeah shut up!
    You roll your eyes and walk away
    Mia: FIGHT AFTER SCHOOL
    You turn back
    Y/n: ok
    You shrug you shoulders and go
    Megan: ugh she is so annoying
    Mia: tell me about it
    Jb: i hear everything
    Y/n: you were eavesdropping on me?
    Jb: uhh no
    Y/n mhm suree
    Kie pushes you
    Y/n: b**ch
    JJ: just ignore her she’s not worth it
    Part 4? Btw part 4 would have the fight

    • @oliviakotrba9638
      @oliviakotrba9638 11 месяцев назад +2

      Yess pleas make a part 3

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад +1

      @@oliviakotrba9638 tyyy i might make it tomorrow since its almost midnight for me

    • @bella-te7sb
      @bella-te7sb 11 месяцев назад +1

      Tag me when it's out

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад

      @@bella-te7sb kk

    • @Edits_102
      @Edits_102 11 месяцев назад +1

      Part three please

  • @KirstynMorace11
    @KirstynMorace11 23 дня назад +3

    Bro that's me watching outer banks and seeing them. My brother: what's wrong. Me: it's sad because it just hurts

  • @OBX.povsedits
    @OBX.povsedits 11 месяцев назад +192

    Part 2
    *john B hugs you*
    JB: it’s ok.
    Yn: no. It’s not. I broke his heart and now he’s breaking mine…
    JB: why did you break up with him.
    *you start crying a little*
    Yn: um my dad said if I don’t he would hurt me and-and JJ. And idc if he hurts me but I really can’t have him hurting JJ.
    JB: im so sorry
    Yn: I still love him JB. But he’s happy with Kie now. So I-I guess that makes me happy too?
    *you force a smile*
    *jj and Kie walk over. You quickly wipe your tears*
    JJ:y’all good?
    Yn: uh yeah j-I mean JJ. We’re-we’re fine.
    JJ: oh ok. But I wanted to tell y’all something.
    JB and yn:ok?
    K: me and JJ are dating!!
    Yn: oh con-congrats guys! I’m so h-happy for you.
    *you get up*
    Yn: um I need to go.
    JJ: wait where are you going?
    Yn:home.
    JJ:oh ok
    *BTW JJ DOESN’T KNOW ABT UR HOME LIFFFEEEE*
    *you start walking away. When you get far enough from the pogues you start crying*
    Sorry it’s so short. Im really tired. But more should be out tomorrow morning. Also this is my first time

    • @OBX.povsedits
      @OBX.povsedits 11 месяцев назад +78

      Part 3
      Nobody asked for it but idc!!!
      *you start walking home*
      JOHN BS POV
      JB:shit.
      JJ:what?
      JB:um yn can’t go home.
      JJ:wdym?
      JB:just come on!
      JJ:ok ok!
      K:im coming with
      JB:ok get in the Twinkie
      *we all get into the twinkie*
      YNS POV
      *you step onto your porch. You slowly open the door*
      Yn:d-dad. I’m back
      Yd:what do you want? Money??
      Yn:no? I wanted to come home
      Yd:well I don’t want you here
      *the pogues pull up and quietly listen to your convo from outside the door*
      Yd: im glad you broke up with that JJ Maybank.
      *you scoff*
      Yn:you made me. I didn’t want to. But hey! He’s found someone better. So I guess I’m happy. No thanks to you
      Yd: watch your tone young lady/man
      Yn:not. Over. My. dead. Body.
      *your dad slaps you across the face*
      Yn:that all you got old man? You’ve done a loooot worse.
      *your dad punches you. He throws you onto a wall and you hit a glass picture that your dad put up for some reason. It shatters on top of you. Glass falls onto you and your face*
      JOHN BS POV
      JB: we need to get them now!
      *we open the door and look at yn’s dad*
      Yd: Wth are you kids doing here?!
      JB:getting yn back.
      Yd: well she’s my daughter/son. So no I’ll be keeping her.
      JJ:give her back to us. Now.
      Yd: ah your JJ Maybank aren’t cha?
      JJ:yes.
      *yn’s dad drops yn. He slowly steps closer to JJ*
      Yn:dad s-stay away from him.
      Yd: SHUT YOUR ASS UP!
      *yn flinches*
      Yn: STAY AWAY FROM HIM PLS! Pls don’t hurt him he has done nothing!
      Yd: your right. I’ll just let out my anger onto you.
      Yn:no no no no no I didn’t mean it like that.
      JJ: get away from them. Now.
      *jj punches yn’s dad across the face*
      JJ: come on yn!
      *yn stands up and limps to jj. Jj wraps her arm around his shoulders. They walk outside. Jj puts yn into the twinkie*
      K:omg are you ok yn?
      Yn:im fine. Y’all didn’t need to do that. I can handle him myself.
      JJ: we’ll obviously not when you just got your ass beat
      Yn: I did not. He could’ve done worse. Believe me.
      K: we’ll let’s get back. Sarah is at the chateau.
      JJ: we can get into the cats ass
      Jb: sure
      Part 4 should be out either later today or tomorrow at some point😝

    • @rizzard_of_ozzz
      @rizzard_of_ozzz 11 месяцев назад +2

      @@OBX.povseditsnext part plsssss this is so good

    • @keltsey-wr8bq
      @keltsey-wr8bq 11 месяцев назад +1

      Love it!!

    • @lilyvilga8212
      @lilyvilga8212 11 месяцев назад +2

      ​@@OBX.povseditspls tag me for the next part! It's so good!💕❤

    • @MrsRiddle87
      @MrsRiddle87 11 месяцев назад +1

      Next part ❤

  • @lilalowell6836
    @lilalowell6836 8 месяцев назад +45

    Part 2
    Jb: are you ok?
    y/n: i didn't want to break his heart
    Jb: but you broke up with him?
    y/n: my dad threatened to kill him.
    y/n: he doesn't know about my home life...
    JJ and Kie walk towards you and Jb.
    JJ: y/n are you okay?
    y/n: uhm, yeah, I'm fine.
    Kie: guess what Jb!
    Jb: What?
    Kie: JJ and I are going to start dating again!!!
    *Jb glances at you*
    Jb: that's great!
    y/n: yeah,
    *JJ looks at you confused*
    y/n: I have to go.
    *You turn away before they see you cry*
    Jb: do you want me to walk you home?
    y/n: no, i-i'm okay
    *You start running*
    Kie: why is she acting like this? She is such a pick me.
    Jb: shut up Kie,
    Kie: what? She is.
    *JJ runs after you*
    *You turn away because you have never let the pouges see you cry*
    JJ: are you crying?!
    y/n: go away.
    JJ: what's wrong?
    *You sit down and tell him everything*
    Part 3?
    you walk back to the pouges, Kie looks jealous but doesn't say anything
    Jb: are you okay y/n?
    y/n: yeah
    k: JJ and I are going to bed.
    *JJ looks at you before following Kie*
    The next day
    *You are hanging out with the Pouge's at the marsh*
    Jb: y/n, truth or dare.
    y/n: dare
    Jb: I dare you to kiss JJ.
    *You walk over and kiss him*
    K: what the heck?
    *She walks over and pushes you, you hit your head on the side of the boat as you fall into the water*
    Jb: y/n are you okay?
    *You don't answer*
    JJ: she is not coming back up
    k: she's fine.
    p: she shouldn't be under for that long.
    JJ: Y/n!!!!
    Jb: something's wrong.
    *JJ jumps in to save you*
    JJ: Y/n answer me!
    *JJ holding your limp head above the water*
    Jb: hold on!
    *They pull you onto the boat*
    JJ: why isn't she waking up!
    Jb: we have to take her to the hospital!
    *JJ takes his hand away from your head and it's covered in blood*
    Part 4?
    *They arrive at the hospital*
    JJ: please don't leave me y/n!
    *You get out of surgery*
    y/n: where am I?
    JJ: your awake!
    y/n: sorry, do I know you?
    *JJ stares at you*
    JJ: it's me JJ!
    y/n: I don't know you.
    *He reaches for your hand*
    y/n: don't touch me!!
    *JJ calls for a nurse*
    N: sorry young man, I am going to need you to leave.
    *JJ goes and finds the others*
    Jb: is she okay?
    *JJ is crying*
    JJ: she doesn't remember me
    S: what?!
    JJ: this is your fault Kie!
    K: What? she kissed you!
    JJ: you pushed her!
    Jb: hey calm down man.
    S: she doesn't remember any of us?
    JJ: I - I don't know
    *Nurse comes out*
    N: are you here for Y/n
    Jb: yes?
    N: she is ready to be discharged.
    Her memory should return in a couple of days.
    Jb: okay
    *You go home with Jb*
    *You get your memory back a few days later*
    y/n: I remember you.
    JJ: really?!
    y/n: yeah! Wait Kie pushed me?
    JJ: yeah...
    JJ: I broke up with her
    y/n: oh
    *Jb walks in*
    Jb: you guys want to go surfing?
    JJ: yes
    P: yeah
    S: sure
    y/n: yep
    K: sure
    *You spend the week at Jb's house*
    *After a while you go home to check on your dad*
    y/d: where have you been?!
    y/n: sorry, I spent the week at Jb's.
    *He punches you*
    Part 5?
    y/n: dad please!
    y/d: shut up.
    *He punches you till you can't breathe*
    y/n: s-stop
    y/d: I told you not to hang out with him. He is a useless piece of trash y/n.
    y/n: n-no he's m-my friend.
    *Your dad punches you across the face*
    *You run away to Jb's house*
    S: what happened?!
    y/n: I fell of the pier.
    *She looks skeptical but agrees*
    y/n: can you cover it up before the boys get back?
    S: I guess? why?
    y/n: I don't want them to worry.
    S: okay
    *She spends the next hour covering your bruises with makeup*
    y/n: thanks Sarah
    S: anytime
    *The boys get back*
    JJ: want to go in the hot tub?
    S: yeah
    P: sure
    *Later*
    JJ: y/n want to get in?
    y/n: *the makeup might smudge*
    y/n: no thanks
    P: come on y/n!
    Jb: you love going in the hot tub.
    *JJ gently pulls you in*
    y/n: *oh no*
    *You stand up revealing all your bruises*
    JJ: What happened y/n!?
    y/n: I fell off the pier,
    JJ: why didn't you tell us?
    y/n: I didn't want you to worry J.
    *He hugs you gently*
    P: truth or dare?
    S: sure
    P: Jb truth or dare?
    Jb: dare
    P: do 20 pushups with Sarah on your back
    Jb: easy
    *He does the push-ups*
    Jb: y/n truth or dare?
    y/n: truth
    Jb: how did you actually get those bruises?
    y/n: my uhm
    *You start crying*
    y/n: dad
    Part 6?
    JJ: I'm going to kill him!
    y/n: no! please!
    JJ: *scoffs* after everything he did to you, you're still defending him?!
    y/n: he didn't mean it! He loves me JJ!
    JJ: someone who loves you wouldn't do this.
    y/n: I love him!
    Jb: JJ's right y/n
    y/n: no
    JJ: please
    y/n: you know what it's like JJ.
    *JJ looks down*
    y/n: I-I'm sorry JJ.
    JJ: it's fine
    S: He should go to jail for this y/n...
    K: Sarah's got a point
    All: Shut up Kiara
    *You start to stumble*
    y/n: g-guys
    JJ: what?
    *You collapse*
    JJ: y/n?!
    Part 7?
    Jb: y/n!
    Jb: what happened?
    S: I-I don't know
    *You start having a seizure*
    JJ: Call 911!
    *Sarah dials 911*
    JJ: stay with me y/n!
    *An ambulance arrives*
    JJ: Is she okay?!
    Jb: what's wrong with her
    *Paramedic load you into the ambulance*
    P: you're her boyfriend?
    JJ: yes
    P: you can ride
    *JJ holds your hand*
    JJ: please y/n!
    JJ: I can't lose you
    P: step back kid
    JJ: I love you, y/n
    *He starts sobbing*
    *You arrive at the hospital*
    P: prep the operating room!
    *After surgery a doctor comes out*
    JJ: is she okay?
    D: it's too early to tell
    JJ: what happened?
    D: she was internally bleeding
    JJ: what?
    *Suddenly a nurse comes out*
    N: Doctor? She's flatlining!
    Part 8?
    JJ: no! y/n!
    D: excuse me
    *He starts doing CPR on you*
    D: come on!
    D: get the young man out
    *A nurse escorts JJ out*
    JJ: please no
    *He buries his head in his hands*
    *After a while the doctor comes out*
    D: Shes okay
    JJ: really! Can I see her?
    D: not yet she will be ready for visitors in a couple days.
    JJ: okay
    *He goes back to Jb's house*
    Jb: how is she?
    JJ: okay
    S: Can we see her?!
    JJ: not for a couple days but she is going to be okay
    K: that's good
    P: What was wrong?
    JJ: she was bleeding inside
    P: oh
    *A few days later*
    JJ: can I see her now?
    D: yes, she is in room 208
    JJ: thank you,
    *JJ goes to your room*
    *You are still drugged up*
    JJ: y/n?!
    y/n: JJ?
    JJ: I'm right here!
    y/n: JJ. is the baby, okay?
    Part 9? 🌊
    JJ: What?
    JJ: y/n?!
    *You fall asleep*
    JJ: y/n!
    N: she needs to rest
    JJ: wait no, please!
    *Nurse escorts JJ out*
    *9 hours later*
    y/n: JJ?
    y/n: JJ!
    N: get JJ Maybank
    y/n: JJ where am I?!
    *You start to sit up*
    N: you need to sit down
    *You struggle*
    y/n: no!
    *JJ rushes in*
    *He gently pushes you down*
    JJ: shh, it's okay cupcake.
    *You are crying*
    y/n: JJ what about the baby!?
    y/n: is the baby, okay?!
    JJ: I-I don't know
    N: Are you, pregnant y/n?
    *You nod*
    JJ: why didn't you tell me y/n?
    y/n: I was...
    y/n: scared
    N: we need an ultrasound
    *The nurse runs some tests and get you an ultrasound*
    N: the baby is alive.
    *JJ exhales in relief*
    y/n: JJ?
    JJ: yeah?
    y/n: are you mad?
    JJ: no y/n
    *He hugs you*
    JJ: why would I be mad?
    JJ: I love you y/n.
    y/n: I love you too JJ.
    *A few months pass, and you start to show*
    y/n: JJ look!
    *JJ puts his hand on your stomach*
    JJ: It's defiantly a girl
    y/n: Boy
    JJ: I'm going to name her, Ellie.
    y/n: no, his name is Caleb.
    *JJ laughs*
    JJ: not a chance
    y/n: we have to tell everyone,
    JJ: I know
    y/n: I can't hide it forever,
    JJ: I will tell them today
    y/n: JJ I am 5 months, if you don't tell them now, they will find out themselves.
    JJ: I promise
    y/n: good.
    y/n: bye JJ
    JJ: love you, cupcake.
    *He kisses you before walking out the door*
    *You have an ultrasound today*
    N: Do you want to know the gender?
    y/n: yes!
    D: you are having a...
    *She tells you the gender*
    D: everything else looks good,
    y/n: thank you,
    N: you are good to go!
    *You call JJ*
    *He doesn't pick up the phone*
    y/n: his phone must be dead.
    *You get to Jb's house*
    y/n: JJ?
    *You walk upstairs to find JJ and Kiara kissing in your bed*
    y/n: JJ?!
    Part 10? 🌊
    *You sink to your knees*
    y/n: J-JJ?
    JJ: y/n!
    *He moves toward you*
    y/n: n-no!
    JJ: y/n wait!
    *You run out the door crying*
    y/n: w-why w-would h-he d-do that?!
    JJ: y/n! Please! Let's talk about this!
    y/n: g-go away!
    *You see Topper walking towards you*
    y/n: go away JJ!
    JJ: no! I want to talk!
    T: She said go away.
    JJ: stay out of this Topper!
    y/n: please just leave me alone JJ.
    JJ: y/n I don't even like her!
    y/n: then why did you kiss her!?
    *JJ moves toward you*
    T: back up!
    *JJ shoves Topper*
    *you scream*
    y/n: stop JJ!
    *They look at you shocked*
    y/n: You cheated on me JJ!
    y/n: you cannot! Act! Protective!
    y/n: we are done!
    *You run to the pier*
    *Topper follows you*
    T: are you okay?
    y/n: yeah
    T: he cheated on you?
    y/n: go away Topper, you did the same thing to me with Sarah
    y/n:every boy I have everbeen with has cheated on me!
    y/n: Pope with Cleo! You with Sarah! Rafe with some random girl from a party! I thought JJ was diffrent! I was wrong.
    *Topper hugs you*
    * you flinch*
    T: What's wrong?
    y/n: nothing
    T: y/n?!
    *He pulls up your sleve to reveal bruises*
    y/n: I went to get my stuff from my dad's yesterday
    T: oh y/n
    *he hugs you gently*
    y/n: thanks Topper
    Part 11? 🌊
    Part 11 in comments! Like for part 12! 🌊🌊🌊

    • @notlivia
      @notlivia 7 месяцев назад +3

      OMG TAG ME❤ part 3 needed 😭

    • @lilalowell6836
      @lilalowell6836 7 месяцев назад +1

      @@notlivia thank you! Part 3 out!

    • @lilalowell6836
      @lilalowell6836 7 месяцев назад +1

      @HorseRoblox Thank you! Made part 4!

    • @AltAccount-qn5hs
      @AltAccount-qn5hs 7 месяцев назад +2

      I need a part 7!!!!!!!

    • @lilalowell6836
      @lilalowell6836 7 месяцев назад +1

      @@AltAccount-qn5hs Thank you so much!
      I made part 7!

  • @cinzialuca5530
    @cinzialuca5530 6 месяцев назад +13

    Part two 🌊💕🫶🏻🏝️
    Character:
    Kie/kiara bestie✨
    Pope friend✌🏻
    John B brother 🤪
    Sarah bestie ✨
    Jj crush 🫶🏻❤️
    Y-I think I’m going to leave
    Jb-no please stay!
    Y-fine!
    Jb-yay!
    Jj-oh hey y/n
    Y-hi…
    Jj-what’s wrong?
    Y-nothing
    Kie-girl I can see it
    Y-fine you wanna know?!
    Kie-ehm yes!
    Jb-sis you don’t have to say it
    Y-I do!
    Jj-tell us
    Y-I like you Jj since 3th grade but your dating Kie so I guess you don’t like me back!
    Part 3?
    Part 3!🫶🏻
    Jj-I do like you back
    Y-really no you don’t
    Kie-no he doesn’t
    Jj-I do Kie I do!
    Y-I love you
    Jj-I love you too
    *he kisses you*
    Part 4?

  • @Theyluvgabb
    @Theyluvgabb Месяц назад +14

    PART 2
    Backstory-your dad is abusive your mom isn’t but doesn’t do anything because she is barley even there
    Your name is livi but the pogues call you liv and no one else does. You live at the chateau and jj is your crush but he is dating kie you used to date topper but he was abusive so you finally got the courage to break up with him
    Kiara-kie
    Jj-jj obvi
    John b-jb
    Cleo-Cleo
    Sarah-sarah
    Pope-pope
    Rafe-rafe
    Topper-topper
    Your dad-yd
    Your mom-ym
    Yn- it’s sad because it just hurts.
    Jb- Ik im sorry but you know they are dating.
    Jj and kie come over to them
    Jj-hey y’all what are y’all talking about.
    Jb-oh yk just talking about what we are going to do with the gold.
    Yn-yup definitely just talking about the gold.
    Kie- whatever come on jj.
    Jj-oh ok coming.
    It ends up being night and everyone goes to bed, yn wakes up around 2 am and hears a weird noice from popes room and she goes to investigate.
    Yn-omg (quietly)
    She takes a picture or pope and kie kissing (yall that’s it nothing more)
    Yn- I have to show jj this.
    Yn goes to bed finally
    Morning rises and goes to find jj to show him what she had on her phone but she couldn’t find him, she decided she would show him later and go to the store to past time
    At store
    Yn-(huh which should I get) thinking
    ??? I think this one is good maybe you will like it to.
    Yn-oh ok I will try it, um what’s your name.
    ??? Oh sorry my name is Nik.
    Yn- oh very nice to meet you Nik my name is livi but you can call me Liv.
    Nik-nice to meet you to, would you mind if I have your phone number.
    Yn-oh uhm.
    Nik-sorry I shouldn’t have asked you that.
    Yn- no it’s ok my number is (615 /////////////)
    Nik-thanks I will text you later.
    Yn- ok bye ttyl.
    Did yall like it
    Should I make a part two???
    Part 2
    Later at chateau
    Yn- hey kie.
    Kie- oh hi ig
    Yn- uhm do you know where jj is-
    Kie- no why do you need to talk to him
    Yn- oh no reason I just needed to know smth
    Kie- why are you always trying to get jj to like you
    Jj is coming in the house but hears yall talking so he hides
    Yn-wdym
    Kie- it’s obvious you like him, he’s mine and always will be he doesn’t like you, how does anyone like you your so annoying and a attention seeker, you know one day your going to grow up and be like you dad!
    Kie was the only one who new about him
    Yn- why would you say that to me?!?!?
    Jj walks in but pretends he didn’t hear anything
    Jj- hey yall what’s up?
    Kie- oh nothing babe just talking with Yn my bff
    Yns mind- yea sure bff…
    Jj- hey Yn wanna go outside so we can talk a little bit we haven’t talked in a long time.
    Yn- yea ok
    You can tell kie is giving you a death stare and your a little scared
    You walk outside with jj
    Yn- hey jj I need to show you smth
    Jj- yea what is it
    You show him the photo and he stares at it with tears in his eyes until you see him walk inside and yell at kie for cheating on him.
    Yns mind-oh no what have I done.
    Then you see a message come up and it’s Nik a smile immediately rises up on your face
    Text messages
    Nik- hey it’s Nik wyd
    Yn- oh nothing much, wanna go surfing 🏄‍♀️
    Nik- yea sure but I’m not that good you will have to teach me
    Yn- alright bet see you there in 10 mins
    Do yall wanna part 3???
    PART 3
    Yn- hmmm what should I wear
    Jj- hey can I come in
    Yn- oh sure
    Jj- we should talk
    Yn- yea but maybe later I need to go meet up with someone
    Jj oh ok
    Yn yea ttyl bye
    NIKS POV
    Nik- rafe are you sure this is going to work
    Rafe obviously I just have to get with topper and then we can have her
    Nik alright then let’s go to the beach
    YNS POV
    Yn finally in at the beach that took forever
    Rafe sees Yn
    Rafe oh hey how are you
    Yn what do you want
    Rafe nothing just wondering if you wanted to hang with me and topper
    Yn no thanks I’m meeting up with someone
    Rafe who??
    Yn you don’t need to know but his name is Nik
    Rafe oh him he is hanging with us he was waiting for you so we invited him to hang with me and topper
    Yn oh ok so he is with yall
    Rafe yup you can come hang with us if you want
    Yn only since Nik is there
    Yall get to whet they were hanging out
    Yn hey Nik how are you
    Nik I’m good hru Yn I’m good
    Topper- would you like a drink
    Yn sure
    WHEN YOU WEARNT LOOKING TOPPER PUT SOMETHING
    IN YOUR DRINK
    Topper here you go Yn
    DO YALL WANT A PART 4

  • @Not_me45
    @Not_me45 4 месяца назад +9

    Part two ur john B little sister by like a year
    John B - u ok?
    Y/n - yep alg ( tears in eyes) im tired imma go to back up to the chateu . ( Walks away)
    Jj - ( pulls away turns to john b ) she ok?
    Ki- yeah she alg?
    John b- yeah just tired
    *Back in y/n room *
    Y/n - *doesnt know what to do tries to sit with no showing emotion on her face *
    Jj - walks in " hey you ok ( stabding at the door with that cutie patootie grin of his )
    Y/n- yeah ofx why ( avoids eye contact)
    Jj- you just seemed off ... If this is about me an ki ill shut things down
    Y/n - no ofc not im just tired
    Jj- leaves
    *in the morning down in the main kitchen area*
    Y/n -*walks in*
    John b- hey sleepie head we have to leave in five min hurry up!
    Y/n - yh whatever thanks for waking me up btw
    John. B - luv you 2
    Y/n (grins sarcastically turn to see kiara and jj cuddling grin fades)
    Kiara- (notices) whats yr problem
    Y/n - you want me to list them
    Ki- go for your life
    Y/n - idk just the fact someone you thought was your bsf got with the gy you liked
    Jj- wait what y/n??
    Ki- looks at him* ignore her she thinks she is all that
    John b - guys we hav things to do no need for this
    Y/n - fave goes red after relisation* looks at jj sees he is staring at her wuickly turns away and walks out the front door like nothing happened
    Jj- gets up follows y/n * grabs her hand to stop her * Y/n lets just talk about this
    Y/n - talk about what? There is nothing to talk about ok? It was a crush
    Jj- y/n please ...
    IF YOU WANT ME TO DO A PART TWO LET ME KNOW ALSO IGNORE MY SPELLING 😂❤

  • @C70VYR.S4DD3R
    @C70VYR.S4DD3R Месяц назад +6

    PT 2>>>
    (You have a kook mom but all she does is drink and get h!gh so you are barely there but you always hang out with the pouges)
    Yn: I’m gonna go for a little walk
    JB: ok be safe I get it
    *you start to walk to the beach and you sit on the shore crying*
    R: hey yn
    Yn: rafe what are you doing here
    R: going for a walk why are you here
    Yn: same reason *you sigh*
    R: what’s wrong tell me everything
    Yn: *tells what happened*
    R: I’m sorry he’s so blind
    Yn: oh it’s fine happens a lot
    R: oh really well I mean I better get heading back home you can come if you want
    Yn: oh it’s fine
    R: suit yourself
    *rafe walks away and you continue to cry but Sarah and John b come*
    S: hey I heard what happened you ok
    Yn: not really but I’m sure I will be
    JB: I’m really sorry but kie and JJ left to go to kie’s house
    Yn: I’m not surprised
    S: you wanna come over to my house with me
    Yn: that would be nice
    *you three go to Sarah’s house and sleep over that night. You wake up and go surfing but you see kie and JJ kissing there so you start to leave*
    JJ: hey yn!
    *you ignore them and go to another beach and you start to surf*
    *pope and Cleo see you surfing and you hang out with them*
    P: I’m getting fed up with kie and JJ right now honestly their going full kook and JJ betrayed the once a pouge always a pouge
    Yn: I’m not surprised they seem very kook on the beach making out
    C: *shakes head in disgust with JJ and kie*
    Yn: I don’t know what happened to us
    *you start to tear up and Cleo and pipe hug you*
    PT 3?????

  • @user-ht4kw8uu4v
    @user-ht4kw8uu4v 6 месяцев назад +16

    Hiiiii, you inspired me to attempt in making my own! Ty! Here I go (it’s my first time)
    Jj=J
    Pope=P
    Kie=k
    Sarah=S
    John b=jb
    Rafe=r
    You=yn
    Background info: you just got to obx bc your mom died.
    Your sitting alone at school.
    With the pouges:
    J:who’s that (he points at you)
    P: her? She’s the new kid. I heard her mom just died and her dads missing .
    Jb: what’s her name?
    P: I think it’s yn
    K: we should go talk to her.
    P: idk kie…. (She doesn’t listen and walks up to you)
    You look up.
    Yn: hi?
    K: hi my names Kiara call me kie. Your new right?
    Yn: uhhhh yeah
    K: the pouges and I are having a party. You should come? It’s at 6
    Yn: Pouges?
    K: oh yeah this is John b
    Jb: hi
    Yn: hi
    K: this is pope
    P: hello
    Yn: hi
    K: and last but not least jj
    J: hi ;)
    Yn: hi
    Yn: ok I’ll be there. Thx
    K: np it’s gonna be fun!
    Time skip to the party.
    (You walk to the beach and see everyone)
    K: YOUR HERE!
    Yn: yea. I’m gonna go get a drink.
    K: ok
    (You walk over to get a drink)
    R: I’ve never seen you around.
    Yn: oh yeah I just got here the other day.
    R: what’s your name beautiful?
    Yn: oh Um yn. You?
    R: rafe.
    Yn: uhhh ok. Im gonna going. See you around?
    R: you sure will gorgeous.
    (You walk away and bump into jj)
    Yn: omg I’m so sry.
    (You look up)
    Yn: oh it’s you. Jj right?
    Jj: yep. Yn right?
    Yn: yea.
    Jj: you wanna go for I walk I don’t rly know you well.
    Yn: sure!
    (On your walk)
    Jj: so tell me a little bit abt yourself
    Yn: okay well my mom just died and my dads missing oh also I have nowhere to stay.
    Jj: oh I’m so sry
    Yn: it’s okay
    Jj: what happened to your dad?
    Yn:well apparently he got lost at sea and is dead I don’t believe that though.
    Jj: that’s weird
    Yn: what’s weird
    Jj: same thing happened to jbs dad.
    Yn: oh well we should head back.
    Jj: yeah
    Part 2??
    Part 2!
    (You all get to the chateau)
    P: hot tub party!
    K: yn do you need a bathing suit I have an extra.
    Yn: Yea! That would be great!
    K: okay come, will be right back guys.
    Jb, p, jj: ok
    K: try this one on
    Yn: okie thx!
    K: ofc!
    (You put on a blue triangle bathing suit)
    K:OMG you look amazing! That colour on your skin looks great!
    Yn: thx! Okay your turn.
    (Kie comes out in a orange triangle bathing suit)
    Yn: omg you look so good!
    K: thx! Okay let’s go before the boys get worried.
    Yn: yea
    (You walk outside to the boys all ready in the hot tub)
    P: kie you look great.
    K: (blushing) thx. U too
    Jb: okay lovebirds let’s play a game?
    (P.s. everyone’s in the Hot tub)
    P:ok
    K: we should play t or d
    Yn: YES
    Jb: jj you wanna play?
    J:(he was staring at you than when jb said that he quickly looks away) huh?
    K: we’re gonna play t or d
    J: oh yea okay let’s play
    Jb (whispering) quite staring jj
    P (whispering) yea your gonna scare her away
    J (whispering) okay sry
    K: okay who’s first?
    J: I’ll go
    K: okay t or d
    J: is that even a question dare obvi
    K: okay hmmm i dare you to take a lap around the chateau
    J: okay
    ( he does the dare)
    J: okay yn t or d
    Yn: truth
    J: did you know your dad?
    P: JJ!
    J: what?!
    Jb: dude!
    Yn: it’s fine guys. No I didn’t rly know him my mom said he went to live with my brother don’t know him either.
    J: ohh did you even know his name?
    K: jj!
    Yn: rly kie it’s fine.
    K: okay
    Yn: yea his name was big John Routledge (idk how to spell it lol)
    (Everyone’s jaw is wide)
    Yn: guys? Are y’all okay?
    Jb: are you sure that’s his name?
    Yn: positive why?
    P: ummm
    K: uhhhhh
    Yn: WHAT?
    Jj: that jbs dad!
    Yn:WHAT? Um I gtg see you later
    Jb,k,p,jj: wait don’t go
    (You don’t listen and run away)
    End of part 2!!
    Part 3??
    Part 3! Thank you for the love.
    (It’s been a week and you’ve been avoiding the pouges all week until kie comes to talk to you)
    K: hey yn are you okay?
    Yn: hey kie I’m okay why?
    K: you ran out the other night and I haven’t seen you since! The pouges are all super worried.
    Yn: I’m so sry I just got surprised and kind of scared but I think I’m ready to go see them
    K: okay come over wearing your bathing suit at 7
    Yn: okay thanks kie
    (At 6:30 you put on your bathing suit and leave arriving a couple minutes before 7)
    K: you look so good!
    Yn: thanks kie you look great as while
    K: the pogues are so excited to see you!
    (You go to see them)
    P: you made it!
    Jb: so uh yn we’re sorry we scared you
    Yn: it’s okay bro
    (He smiles when you say that knowing that he still has family left)
    Yn: where’s jj
    J: right here!
    K: we should play t or d again
    P: yeah cause that ended well last time
    Yn: it’s fine let’s play
    P: so jj truth or da-
    Jj: DARE baby
    P: okay hmmm I dare you to kiss yn
    (Jj grins clearly happy about this)
    Jb: seriously Pope and jj that’s my sister.
    Yn: a dares a dare jb ( you smile jj)
    Jj: walks up and kisses you
    (You start blushing a lot)
    Jj: your blushing
    End of part 3!
    Part 4?
    Part 4 finally I’ve been busy sry.
    Jb: ew
    Yn: uhhhh
    J: are you flustered cupcake 😉
    Yn: n n no well-uh
    (He doesn’t say anything he just sits back down)
    (Time skip to midsummers which was the next day. Your wearing a green dress)
    Yn: do I rly have to go?
    K: we’re going
    S: you have to suffer with us
    Yn: ugh fine
    S: kie and I are gonna go bc we have to go with our families but we’ll meet you there
    Yn: okay bye
    S & k: byeeee
    (They leave and your struggling to get your necklace on. Jj walks in)
    J:you need help cupcake?
    Yn: uh sure thx
    (He puts the necklace on and you move your hair. You feel his warm hands and cold metal from the rings as he puts it on)
    J: there you go cupcake see yin there
    Yn: wait your going jj?
    J: yea I’m a waiter ;)
    (At midsummers your looking for everyone when you see jj first)
    Yn: hey jj! Do you know where kie and Sarah are?
    Jj: hey you look beautiful oh and there right over there (he points to them)
    (You blush a little but look away so he doesn’t see)
    Yn: okay thx J
    (You walk towards them)
    Yn: heyyyyy you both look so beautiful
    S: so do youuu
    K: yesss you look gorgeous
    Yn: aw thx
    (Y’all just hang around and talk and drink and smoke ect.)
    (With jj: rafe and the other kooks are beating him up when a server comes over)
    Server: is their a promblem here?
    J: actually yea I’m a criminal I should be escorted
    Server: ugh come on
    (He walks with the server tbh I can’t remember if it was a server on the show but for this it is.)
    J: your looking spify too you powderpuff girls go have fun
    R: oh tell yn she looks pretty hot for a pouge!
    (Jj runs out of the servers grip and tries to attack rafe)
    Alright that’s the endddd
    Part 5???!!!

    • @Jennifer-Rose98
      @Jennifer-Rose98 6 месяцев назад +1

      Yes ❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • @user-ht4kw8uu4v
      @user-ht4kw8uu4v 6 месяцев назад

      @@Jennifer-Rose98 omg ty! Part 2 is out! Let me know if I should do a part 3.

    • @Yippee-Aviation
      @Yippee-Aviation 5 месяцев назад +1

      Next part please

    • @user-ht4kw8uu4v
      @user-ht4kw8uu4v 5 месяцев назад

      @@Yippee-Aviationokie tysm for the support! I’ll try to get it out tomorrow.

    • @user-ht4kw8uu4v
      @user-ht4kw8uu4v 5 месяцев назад

      @@Jennifer-Rose98 part 3 is out!

  • @leilahbowser
    @leilahbowser 4 месяца назад +6

    Pov:
    Jj is your ex and Kiara is your bff but u still miss jj

  • @user-ml4xk2tz8k
    @user-ml4xk2tz8k 5 месяцев назад +15

    I’ll make a pt2
    *JJ and Kiara walk over*
    JJ: Hey guys!
    John b: Uhm can me and Y/n be alone for I second-
    Y/n:-No we’re ok*with tears in ur eyes*
    Kiara: Do you guys wanna hop in the hot tub?
    *Everyone says ok*
    *JJ looks at you*
    JJ: Is everything ok Y/n?
    Y/n: Yea ofc
    *Everyone gets in the hot tub*
    JJ: Hey Yall wanna do something fun?
    John B: I’m down
    Kiara: ok
    Pope: Ofc
    Y/n: sure.
    JJ: Let’s play truth or dare.
    *everyone says ok*
    Kiara: Ok, John B, truth or dare?
    John B: Dare.
    Kiara: I dare you to put this on
    *Kiara pulls out bikini*
    *Everyone starts laughing*
    John B: Oh no.
    *John B puts it on and starts hula dancing*
    *He puts his shorts back on and gets in the pool*
    Pope: JJ truth or dare?
    JJ: Dare ofc!
    Pope: I dare you to kiss Kiara rn.
    *You start to get scared he’s gonna do it*
    John B:*looks at you* Now JJ I don’t think that’s a good idea-
    *JJ and Kiara kiss for about 6 seconds*
    *Your eyes fill up with tears and start crying, then you get out the hot tub and run away crying*
    ILL MAKE A PT3 TOMORROW YALL BC ITS GETTING LATE😭

    • @Aster-vi8sh
      @Aster-vi8sh 3 месяца назад +1

      pls make a part 2 this is so good🫶🫶

    • @dendacz4477
      @dendacz4477 3 месяца назад

      Where is part 3?

    • @user-ml4xk2tz8k
      @user-ml4xk2tz8k 3 месяца назад +5

      PT3!!!
      John B: Wait! Y/n! Come back!
      JJ: What did I do wrong!?
      Kiara: It’s ok I will get her.
      *John B gets a bad feeling*
      *Kiara walks into the house and sees you*
      Kiara: Y/n what happened? Why are you so upset?
      Y/n: Kiara go away! You know what you did.
      Kiara: I don’t?
      Y/n: You really wanna know what you did?
      Kiara: yes I do!
      Y/n: YOU KISSED JJ RIGHT IN FRONT OF ME WHEN YOU KNOW I LIKE HIM!
      Kiara: I’m sorry but…I-I like him too?
      Y/n: You were supposed to be my best friend.
      Kiara: I’m sorry.
      Y/n: don’t talk to me.
      *you go back out to the tub and sit next to JJ*
      JJ: oh hello there.
      Y/n: hey JJ.
      *Kiara sees you two flirting and gets mad*
      *you start to see Kiara getting mad and starts flirting more*
      Y/n: JJ kiss me.
      JJ: what?
      Y/n: it’s a dare. You never skip dares.
      JJ: bet
      *You guys kiss in front of Kiara*
      Kiara: that’s it.
      ILL MAKE PT4 TMWR!!

    • @user-ml4xk2tz8k
      @user-ml4xk2tz8k 3 месяца назад

      @@dendacz4477 I just made it

    • @User-hy5ln
      @User-hy5ln 3 месяца назад

      @@user-ml4xk2tz8ktag me pls

  • @obx_ed1tz
    @obx_ed1tz 6 месяцев назад +34

    Part 2
    Jb is your brother
    Sarah is your best friend
    Pope is like a brother
    Kiara was your best friend
    Jj you’ve known since 2nd grade you introduced him to Jb
    Y/n: it’s sad because it just hurts
    Jb: come here
    (He pulls you in for a hug)
    Y/n: thanks Jb
    Jb: did he say something to you? Why are you so sad
    Y/n: well he told me he had a crush on me and that he thinks he loves me but apparently not he’s been distant
    Jb: I’m sorry y/n/n(your nickname)
    Y/n: it’s not your fault
    (You get up and go into the chateau and go in your room)
    S: where did y/n go?
    Jb: to her room
    S: why is she ok?
    Jb: look
    (Sarah sees jj and Kiara)
    S: oh man y/n, I have to go check on her
    Jb: make sure she’s ok
    (She nods and knocks on your door)
    Y/n: who is it *sniffles*
    (Sarah opens the door)
    S: hey y/n/n how are you?
    Y/n: I’m fine
    S: oh come here y/n
    (She hugs you and you start sobbing in her arms)
    Y/n: I knew I shouldn’t have liked him he was just gonna toss me aside once he got what he wanted
    S: I’m so sorry I didn’t know kie would do that she knows you liked him
    Y/n: yes it’s fine I’m just gonna sleep it off
    S: ok tell me if you need anything ok?
    Y/n: yeah I will
    S: I mean it y/n
    Y/n: I know you’re the only one I can fully trust
    S: aww goodnight y/n/n
    Y/n: goodnight Sarah
    BACK TO POUGES POV
    kie and jj are still laughing and holding each other
    P: that’s messed up
    Jb: yea I knew y/n shouldn’t have liked him but I thought he was actually good for her
    P: poor y/n
    (Sarah walks up)
    Pope and Jb: how is she
    S: not good she’s really sad
    K: hey where did y/n go
    J: yea
    S: are you guys serious
    J: is she sad?
    S: yea dip shit
    K: shoot
    P: yea that was really messed up
    Jb: you said you weren’t going to hurt my sister jj
    J: I didn’t mean to….
    S: well you did, and so did you kie that’s wrong
    K: I know I shouldn’t have
    J: I have to check on her
    Jb: NO.. sorry I mean no you’ve done enough
    P: just give it up jj
    S: it’s what’s best
    J: but I have to
    S: no you don’t just leave her alone
    K: oh I messed up
    P: yea you did but it’s all in the past it’s a little late
    Jb: let’s just deal with this and go to bed
    Everyone: yea ok goodnight
    YOUR POV
    y/n: I can’t believe this, I’m over him there’s no way I’m going to cry over a stupid player
    J: can I crash here Jb
    Jb: yea but stay away from y/n, come on Sarah
    J: Sarah
    S: sorry jj you’re in the wrong stay away from her it’s what’s best
    (Jb and Sarah go to bed)
    J: shit I hurt her
    ( he lays on the couch and falls asleep)
    NEXT MORNING
    Y/n always makes breakfast today it’s waffle fruit and bacon
    (Y/n walks out to see Jb and Sarah out on the deck and jj asleep on couch shivering and curled up)
    Y/n: shit why is he here
    (She gets a blanket and covers him then goes outside to Jb and Sarah)
    Y/n: why is he here
    Jb: sorry he asked to crash I’m not sending him home just to get abused
    S: yea
    Y/n: alr I’m making breakfast
    Jb: ooh what is it
    Y/n: both of your favorites
    S: WAFFLES AND FRUIT
    JB: AND BACON!
    y/n: yea chill out guys it’ll be ready in ten-fifteen?
    S: alr
    Jb: yum
    IN THE CHATEAU
    Y/n gets the ingredients and makes breakfast while pope and Kiara arrive
    P: sup y/n
    Y/n: popey!
    (You hug him, him and Sarah are your favorites)
    K: hi y/n
    Y/n: oh hey kie
    K: I’m really sorry
    Y/n: no hard feelings right? It’s ok it’s not your fault and plus we’re Pouges
    (They do the handshake)
    Y/n: alright who wants breakfast
    ( jj wakes up)
    J: breakfast? *says sleepy*
    Y/n: yes if you want some then get your ass up
    J: ooh yes mamas mad
    Y/n: are you serious right now
    J: alr alr oooh it’s my favorite
    Y/n: I think it’s everyone’s favorite
    P and k: yea
    Y/n:JB AND SARAH BREAKFAST IS READY
    *they run inside and sit down*
    Jb: yummmm
    They all eat breakfast
    20 minutes later
    J: hey y/n can we talk
    Y/n: I guess
    They walk to her room…..
    PART 3 AT 3 LIKES SHOULD JJ AND HER MAKE UP ANDGET TOGETHER? SWEET OR SPICY
    J: I just wanted to say I’m sorry
    Y/n: that’s ok *you start to leave but he grabs you and kisses you*
    Y/n: you can’t say you love me get with my best friend and then kiss me pick me or her it’s not that hard
    J: y/n
    Y/n: I’m fine I would love to be friends again it’s ok if you choose her
    J: I’m sorry y/n, P4L?
    Y/n: P4L
    J: you coming out
    Y/n: yea be out after you
    POUGES POV
    jb: I hope they made up
    S and P: same
    (Jj walks up)
    J: Kiara Carrera will you be my gf?
    K: yes!
    15 minutes later
    Jb: I don’t think y/ns coming out
    P: yeah, sarah?
    S: yeah I’ll go check on her
    (She walks in to see you curled up blasting music
    S: oh man y/n are you ok
    Y/n: I’m fine I need to find a new guy
    S: you sure you’re ok
    Y/n: positive but I need to get over him I need someone new
    S: I know my brothers crazy but you could change him he really likes you
    Y/n: who rafe? He’s like a brother to me and no offense kinda psycho
    S: give him a chance
    Y/n: fine
    S: yay! I’ll text him
    Y/n: oh gosh Sarah
    S: he said and I quote tell her we can go on a date at 7:30
    Y/n: that’s in 3 hours
    S: so let’s pick a dress
    (Y’all find a dress then head out)
    Jb: you ok y/n?
    Y/n: yeah
    P: are you sure?
    Y/n: positive
    K: jj asked me to be his girlfriend!
    Y/n: congrats!
    (Y’all jump up)
    J: and you’re happy about this
    Y/n: yea
    Jb: how?
    S: she has a date in 3 hours
    P: what? With who
    S: don’t get mad it was my idea but with rafe
    Jb: fine
    P: he psycho
    Jb: she could change him
    S: exactly
    P: well let’s watch a movie
    Everyone: yes!
    2 hours later
    (You get changed and curl your hair you are wearing a tight green silk dress)
    S: you look gorgeous y/n
    Y/n: thanks I gtg tell everyone I said bye love you *you blow a kiss*
    S: love you too *blows you a kiss*
    (You go to get in your car but surprise rafe is waiting for you)
    R: hi y/n
    Y/n: hi rafe
    You go to open your door but he runs in front of you
    R: her let me get that
    He opens your door and buckles you in
    Y/n: I’m not a child
    R: yeah but you’re special to me so I’m gonna take care of you
    (He kisses your cheek)
    Y/n: uh-umm t-thanks *you blush a lot*
    (Y’all arrive and sit down at the restaurant)
    R: what are you getting
    Y/n: maybe just a salad
    R: what get more than that
    Y/n: I’m ok thanks
    R: you sure?
    Y/n: mhm
    (You order and the food arrives)
    R: here try this *he feeds you some of his steak*
    Y/n: good flavor
    R: want more
    Y/n: I’m ok rafe really
    R: ok
    (You guys laugh and have fun then the check arrives)
    Y/n: here I brought money
    R: you’re funny
    Y/n: what?
    R: I’m paying silly
    Y/n: are you sure I feel bad
    R: yes
    (You guys head out)
    R: alr we are here
    He runs to open your door and help you out
    Y/n: thanks rafe I had a really good time
    R: anything for you y/n
    (You kiss him)
    Y/n: sorry
    R: why are you sorry
    (He pins you on the car and kisses you)
    *he opens the car door sits down and brings you in his lap and continues to kiss you*
    Y/n: what are we doing
    R: whatever you are up to doing y/n
    Y/n: I should warn you that this is my first time
    R: I’ll be gentle
    IF YOU DONT LIKE SPICY STUFF SKIP AHEAD
    Y/n: ok
    You take his shirt off and he unzips your dress
    R:you sure you’re up for this?
    Y/n: positive
    He take you dress of completely and it leads to you guys doing it
    POUGES POV
    P: looks like y/ns back
    Jb: I hope she had a good time
    K: yea same
    10 minutes go by
    Jb: I wonder what’s taking them so long
    K and S: we can go check
    They walk to see you guys doing it
    S: well it looks like she had a good time
    K: clearly isn’t it her first time
    S: yeah
    K and S: eww *gags*
    They run back
    P: where’s y/n
    K: her and rafe are having sex *she blurts out*
    S: kie
    Jb: what
    S: when we went to check on her she was on top of him and they were having sex
    P: eww
    J: nasty
    K: at least you guys didn’t see it
    Jb: what’s that noise?
    *cars creaking and shaking*
    P: the car is shaking
    J: and creaking
    K: ew
    YOUR POV
    I’m embarrassed to moan but it feels so good my face starts turning red
    R: you ok y/n do we need to stop?
    Y/n: n-no *moans slightly* i-it feels g-good
    You end up letting a loud moan out by accident
    R: y/n don’t be embarrassed
    Y/n: o-ok mmm *moans really loud* sorry
    R: you have nothing to be embarrassed of
    He goes faster and you can’t hold it in so you let them all out
    Y/n: *high pitch moans* oh rafe *loud moans* rafe!
    You start grinding on him making him go deeper then he was before
    R: oh y/n mmm *he moans*
    Y/n: do you like it *you go faster*
    R: mhmmm y/n you feel so good *he moans again*
    I make him go in all the way and he ends up moaning
    R: gosh y/n your handling it well for your first time
    Y/n: you feel so good *you let out a moan and scream his name*
    R: yea y/n *he moans*
    Y/n: do you like this position?
    R: oh yea do you like this position?
    Y/n: yea I d- *he goes deeper and faster than before making you do you loudest moan yet*
    R: I can tell
    15 minutes later
    Your getting dressed and so is he
    R: gosh y/n I love you
    (He kisses you)
    Y/n: I love you too rafe
    R: so if you love me so much would you wanna be my girlfriend?
    Y/n: yes! I mean yea ofc
    R: your beautiful, want me to walk you to the door ?
    Y/n: I’m ok but thanks rafe and not to shabby your self
    You leave and see them in the cats ass so you walk towards them
    Y/n: hey guys
    P: so we could tell you had a great time
    Y/n: huh?
    S: Kiara and I saw you and rafe you know having sex
    Y/n: oh umm haha yeah
    J: y’all went at it we heard you through the car but we were all heading to be so goodnight
    Y/n: goodnight everyone
    PART 4 AT 3 LIKES

    • @Thabombbbbb
      @Thabombbbbb 6 месяцев назад +2

      Tag me for next part

    • @obx_ed1tz
      @obx_ed1tz 6 месяцев назад +16

      @@Thabombbbbb
      Part 4
      Your still sleeping when to wake up to a tap on the shoulder
      Jb: hey sis
      Y/n: hmm? *you say sleepy*
      Jb: there is breakfast on the counter if you want some
      Y/n: what is it
      Jb: your favorite
      You shoot up
      Y/n: ooh bacon
      Jb: yup
      Y/n: let’s go
      Y’all head out of your room and eat
      Y/n: thanks pope
      P: no problem
      There’s a knock at the front door
      S: I’ll get it
      She walks to open the door
      S: y/n!
      Y/n: what!
      S: your boyfriends here!
      Y/n: ooh ok sorry brb
      Pogues pov
      J: I’m glad she’s moved on
      K: yea I’m really happy that she found someone
      P: she’s totally in love with rafe
      Jb: ew
      Sarah runs back
      S: she’s definitely in love with my brother
      P: hey I just said that
      Y/ns pov
      I ran to the door to see rafe
      R: hey beautiful
      He kisses me and he feels so warm and gentle I really hope I can change him I wish everyone can see the gentleman I see
      Y/n: hi
      You hug him
      R: I missed you
      Y/n: I missed you too
      R: so I was thinking about seeing you again and I thought we could watch some movies and get your favorite snacks on Sunday, does that sound good for you?
      Sunday is in 3 days
      Y/n: yes! Sorry yes that sounds great
      R: that’s ok, oh I bought you these new earrings that Sarah said you liked when you guys were hanging out
      Y/n: omg rafe! These are really expensive are you sure? You can return them I don’t need these
      R: but you liked them and I want you to have them
      Y/n: aww thanks babe
      You kiss him and it just feels so right
      R: anything for you
      Y/n: bye
      R: one more kiss?
      Y/n: why just one?
      You guys start making out
      R: alr bye baby
      Y/n: bye rafe
      You run back to the others with the cute little present box with your earrings
      Jb: what’s that?
      Y/n: remember those earrings Sarah and I saw
      K: yea you really liked them
      P: weren’t they like super expensive?
      Y/n: yea but he got them for me
      S: aww
      Y/n: y’all wanna surf? Jayg?
      J: oh I’m gonna beat you
      Y/n: yea sure
      P: she’s gonna beat you
      Jb: yea sorry JJ
      Y’all surf
      Y/n: I beat you
      J: alr alr
      K: she beat you fair and square babe
      J: yea ik let’s get back to the chateau
      Jb and s: someone’s a sore loser
      Time skip to Sunday sorry I’m lazy and don’t feel like writing
      You wear a crop top and sweatpants with your new earrings
      Y/n: alr bye guys I’m going to rafe
      Everyone: bye y/n, don’t have too much fun
      Y/n: oh shut up
      You drive to rafes house
      R: hi baby
      Y/n: hi babe
      You kiss
      R: what movie do you wanna watch?
      Y/n: can we watch lion king?
      R: I guess anything for you y/n
      You are at the part when mufasa dies
      Y/n: I always get sad at this part Simba didn’t deserve that
      Rafe isn’t talking so you look to see him silently crying
      Y/n: are you crying
      R: n-no why would I be crying
      Y/n: oh come here
      You put his head on your chest and hug him
      R: you’re right he didn’t deserve that poor simba why did mufasa have to die *he says crying*
      Y/n: oh you poor baby
      You kiss his cheek and wipe his tears
      R: I love you so much y/n
      Y/n: I love you too
      Btw this is at 1:00 in the afternoon
      The movie finishes and you fall asleep spooning each other
      Y’all wake up at around 8:00
      Y/n: hi babe
      R: hi
      Y’all kiss
      Y/n: gosh it’s kinda hot
      R: yea we are under like 10 blankets thanks to you
      Y/n: oh yeah sorry
      You go to take of your sweater but forget your not wearing anything under
      R: woah
      Y/n: oh shut up do you have a shirt I can borrow
      R: here take mine
      He takes off his shirt and you just stare at his abs
      R: like what you see
      Y/n: um uh what
      He whispers in your ear: I know you like it
      You fight it but his dark raspy voice turns you on and you blush crazy
      R: want to see more?
      You fight it but now he got you in the mood
      Y/n: oh fuck it
      R: huh wh-
      You interrupt him by straddling him and kissing him
      Y/n: you made me like this, wait is wheezie here
      R: no one’s here not even the pogues so I can make you scream however much I want
      He gets on top of you and undresses you
      Y/n: oh fuck
      You take his pants off and push him in you and y’all do it
      Y/n: oh rafe *you moan*
      R: gosh y/n you make me crazy
      Y/n: and you make me crazy
      You push him down and start grinding on him
      R: oh y/n *he moans*
      Y’all finish
      Y/n: I love you rafe Cameron
      R: and I love you y/n y/l/n
      Part 5 whenever I can sorry if it’s short

    • @I_luv_Benson_Boone
      @I_luv_Benson_Boone 6 месяцев назад

      Tag me in part 5

    • @lpatt8
      @lpatt8 6 месяцев назад

      @@obx_ed1tz tag me in the next part pretty please

    • @Mallory-zi9ly
      @Mallory-zi9ly 6 месяцев назад

      Tag me in the next part please

  • @urfavafrican
    @urfavafrican 4 месяца назад +34

    IM BACK😤
    info💋
    -Your name is Aurelia L. Routledge
    -Nickname Auri (pronounced Ari)
    -John B is your older brother by a few months
    -You aren’t exactly a year younger than the rest of the pouges but you are 16 while they are 17
    -no cleo srry😔
    -You and Jj used to be in a little of a situation ship which ended in him taking your V card (ik drastic🤯) but then the day after Jj bluntly says he doesn’t want a relationship with you and he moves on within the next 3 weeks onto Kiara
    -No Kie is not the bad guy(i hate the ones that make her a bad person)
    -⚠️TW: SELF-HARM AND B0DY DISM0RPHIA⚠️ if this makes you uncomfortable i suggest you click off or skip parts that contain this👍
    WE BEGIN😁
    John B:y’know Auri, i told you that getting involved with Jj would only end in disappointment
    (what John B said had gotten to me, because ultimately, I knew he was right)
    Aurelia: you think i don’t know that John B? well i do and right now’s is not the time for a lecture okay??
    John B:okay Auri..
    Aurelia:y’know i think ima just head in for the night, goodnight John B
    John B:wait Auri, it’s 8:30, isn’t it a little early?
    Aurelia:yeah but i’m tired so
    John B:yeah goodnight sis
    Aurelia:Night Jb
    (i walked away from John B and Sarah, then walked past Pope, i said goodnight. then i walked past Jj and Kie)
    -AURELIAS POV ONLY-
    -i walked into my room and lately i had to admit i couldn’t feel myself spiraling back into all the anxiety i had gained when Big John first went missing, which also means i’d started cutțïng myself again-
    -i sat right infront of my door and i looked at my dresser, specifically at the drawer where i hid my blade, i thought about it, i know i should but i have to, it helps me contain everything i’m feeling, to me it’s a form of release, a way to let manage some of my pain-
    (i got up and approached the dresser then sighed and picked up the blade, i sat down infront of my door again and shimmied off my pants, then i looked at my inner thigh where the cuts laid, i held the blade at the right angle, then i cut, i watched the blood trickle down my leg withstanding the striking pain)
    (i cut for a few minutes each one going deeper that the one before,drawing more blood each time and eventually i had to force myslef to stop and go clean up, when i went to my bathroom i looked in the mirror and i just broke, silently cried as i looked at myself, all the scars and the fresh cuts that glistened with blood, i wondered why, why did i have to be like this)
    (i eventually pulled myself together and got into the shower, after i pulled on some sweat pants and a black tank top and i went to bed)
    🚨NEXT DAY🚨
    -JJS POVE-
    -i laid in my bed, right across from Auri’s room, i laid there with Kie in my arms. I thought about how i had just abandoned Auri after sleeping with her, after knowing that i was her first time, i knew i felt guilty but i had to do it because if i didn’t, i knew i would break her heart in the end and i couldn’t let myself do that to her, so i just left, and i decided to distract myself with Kie, and i know that’s also wrong, how could i do this to 2 of my most closest friends? And to be honest, I missed Auri, having her in my arms and running from John B whenever he caught us cuddling or kissing, i miss how exciting she made life, and now she just ignores me. Like last night, she walking right past me and Kie while we were playing monopoly, her favorite. I’d noticed that she went to bed a bit early and i wondered why but i’d just let the thought rest-
    -BACK TO REG POV-
    (aka Aurelia)
    (i woke up to John B obnoxiously stomping into my room demanding i cheer up, and who was i to deny him)
    John B: OHHH AURIII WAKEY WAKEYY TIME TO RISE N SHINEE!
    Aurelia:ughh dammit John B ima awake
    (i said with a long groan, then i thought about last night, what i did, and it all came back to me, then the cuts started to hurt, a lot.)
    John B:hey you alright you don’t look to good?
    Aurelia: Yeah no i’m fine just morning cramps
    John B : Yah no i got you those are the worsttttt
    (he said drawing out the t in worst, and that some how cracked a laugh out of me)
    John B: there she is
    (he looked at me with a smile on his face, one that i returned)
    Aurelia: so what the plan for today?
    (i said as i dragged myself out of bed)
    John B: good question idk cause Heyward has got Pope working day and night to make up for the 2 nights he spent here, Ward has got Sarah running all types of errands with wheezie is what she told me, and Kie’s parents have got her watching the Wreck while they’re outta town, so everyone’s busy. Except me, you and Jj
    Aurelia: right, so ima change then make some food for you cause i assume that the reason you came and oh ever so gracefully woke me up
    John b: you’d be correct!
    (he strolled out of my room with a wide smile on his face that some how transferred to mine, well who knew John B really could lighten the mood)
    (i got changed into a light grey tube top, with a red bandanna holding back my waist length wavy brown hair, paired with medium wash denim shorts, i’d made sure to pull them down enough so they still looked good but covered my scars)
    (i strolled out of my room with that smile still plastered on my face and say John B and Jj standing in the middle of the kitchen, arguing about something)
    John B: OKAY WELL ATLEAST IM FASTER AT RUNNNING
    JJ: WELL IM FASTER AT PULLING GIRLS
    John B: IM FASTER AT EATING
    JJ: NO WAY I AM
    John B: NAH YOU’RE TWEAKING I AM BRO
    JJ: YEAH SURE
    Aurelia:boys… what’re you guys arguing over now?
    (i noticed quiet Jj got as soon as he heard me speak, i wondered why that was)
    John B: well Jj thinks that he could eat pancakes faster than me, which is a total lie!
    (i looked at Jj but he remained quiet, and i decided break the silence)
    Aurelia: well let’s put is to the test as i make my pancakes, okay Jb?
    John B: ughh finee
    (John B playfully rolls his eyes as i get to mixing up the batter for pancakes)
    (after i was done John B won Jj in the “pancake eating contest” and then not so subtly made fun of Jj for losing)
    (suddenly someone asked me)
    JJ: Auri where’s your plate?
    (i was too stunned to even answer, because this was the first words he’d spoken to me in a few days, and partial reason of why i stayed quiet was because i didn’t have answer for him)
    John B: um Auri, you gonna answer Jj?
    Aurelia: yeah my bad, um i guess i just wasn’t hungry today
    (i gave a little shrug along with my answer, and John B and Jj both gave me weird looks)
    Aurelia: what?!
    (i asked them while a giggle escaped my lips)
    John B: Auri how are you not hungry you didn’t eat last night either?
    Aurelia: idk Jb maybe i’m just not hungry like i already said?
    (my tone got a little angrier and louder when i said it that time)
    (they both looked at me like i’d murdered someone)
    Aurelia: ok seriously what guys?
    (this time Jj spoke)
    JJ: Auri when was the last time you ate?
    Aurelia: why does that matter Jj?!?
    John B: because you haven’t eaten at all in the past few days and we worry about you Auri..
    Aurelia: well then don’t worry cause i’m fine, and Jj i don’t even know why you care like wasn’t it you who just out of the blue stopped talking to me?
    do you know what it feels like to be ghosted by someone you thought was your boyfriend?
    by someone who i thought cared?
    JJ: Auri i did care, i still do-
    Aurelia: no Jj, stop don’t do this
    JJ: don’t do what?
    Aurelia: don’t come and make me feel what i’ve been trying to avoid! just stop it!
    (then suddenly everyone stopped moving and i ran out of the chateau)
    THERES MY LIL PART 2😤
    30 LIKES FOR PART3💗💗

    • @urfavafrican
      @urfavafrican 4 месяца назад +14

      i got bored so here i am💋☺️👍👍🥰🥰🚨🚨💗🥰🥰
      ENJOY🤫🧏‍♀️
      -AURELIAS POV-
      -i ran, ran and ran til my legs were burning, i realized i wasn’t anywhere near the chateau, i was somewhere around the cut, so i decided to walk around, y’know i could go to the wreck, i though, but John B and Jj would most definitely find me there, it’s probably where they are at rn-
      -JJS POV-
      -fucking hell im an idiot, i thought i was doing the right thing by leaving her, what the fuck was going thru my brain? me and John B had gone all around the cut looking for Aurelia, no sign of her. We went to the Wreck, she’s not there, went to Popes place, not there, even when back to the chateau, surprise surprise, not there, where was she. This whole entire time John B has been yelling at me, telling me i’m a horrible friend, and i should never go near Aurelia again, which i don’t disagree with, but right now i just needed to know she’s okay-
      -BACK TO REG POV-
      (i keep thinking to myself, ‘i should probably go back, they’re worried’ but i can’t bring myself to go back to the chateau, i have no idea why. I continue strolling around the obx when i see the twinkie, yay.)
      John B: AURELIA GET IN RIGHT NOW! (John B shouts from the twinkie)
      (reluctantly i listen and get in the van, just for lecture after lecture from John B. Y’know who else is getting lectured, Jj. John B comes to the conclusion that when we get to the chateau me and Jj must ‘talk’ it out, what the fuck)
      (we pull up to the chateau)
      John B: come on inside now.
      Jj: okay man just calm down
      John B: i’ll calm down when my sister eats a full meal.
      (that one hit where it hurt, well played John B)
      (i was in the middle of storming off to my room when John B ever so casually interrupted my sulking)
      John B: no i don’t know where your going Auri cause you and Jj need to talk now.
      (i blankly started at him, so did Jj)
      John B: i’m going out, now talk.
      (John B exited the chateau and Jj was about to walk off when suddenly a bolt of courage rocked through me and)
      Aurelia: why’d you do it?
      JJ: huh?
      Aurelia: you know what i’m talking about Jj, why?
      (he breathed deeply)
      JJ: because i thought it would be for the best
      (he said calmly)
      Aurelis: You thought which part would be for the ‘best’ to be exact Jj? the part where you fuck me, then tell me you want nothing to do with me, or the part where you date my best friend?
      (my voice was progressively getting louder as words just spilled out)
      Aurelia: i’m really curious Jj, how’s it feel knowing you successfully played me?
      JJ: i did not want to play you Auri-
      Aurelia: then what did you expect to happen Jj!?
      (Jj grabbed me by my shoulders and held me still)
      JJ: i said what i did because i thought that if i stayed with you i would end up breaking your heart, but now i realize i broke your heart anyway, and i’m sorry, more sorry than you’ll ever know, and i want you to know Auri that i care, i’ve always cared, and i always will care, you are my favorite, you are the one i want, i choose you , i-
      (i cupped his cheeks and pulled him close, close enough that our lips almost touched)
      Aurelia: i love you
      (the words just poured out of me and i didn’t know that they were coming they just spilled, and now there’s no going back)
      -and then he kissed me, it was soft at first but then as it went on it became more passionate like he’d been waiting for this moment for eternity’s, and i gave in, i kissed him back with all of my strength, my arms found their way round his neck then into his hair, whilst his arms curved around my lower back pulling me into the kiss-
      -JJS POV-
      -i couldn’t take it anymore, i kissed her, i kissed her like it would be the last time i would ever see her. i broke from the kiss to do one thing, and one thing only, i whispered-
      JJ: i love you Aurelia, yesterday, tomorrow, and forever, i love you with every fiber of my being
      Aurelia: ugh i love you too Jj, now kiss me..
      -and i did just that, i kissed her with the type of passion that made a person physically ill. my hands swept under her, lifting her from the floor-
      -AURELIAS POV-
      -Jj picked me up in one swift movement, and i wrapped my legs around him not breaking the kiss. He carried me to my bedroom and placed me on my bed whilst he locked the door-
      Aurelia: Jj..
      (i breathed his name, i knew what he was going to do)
      JJ: yes princess
      -he said as he walked towards me, i was splayed on the bed then he climbed atop me and started to kiss his was down my neck to my collarbone, god i hope he didn’t leave a mark, one of his hands found their way round my waist, the other set right under my breast, i pulled his mouth up from my neck and kissed him. I could feel him grin against my lips, then his teeth caught onto my lower lip-
      -his hand that rested below my breast gently strayed to welcome themselves between my legs as Jj never broke the kiss-
      -his hands started to work at the same time to unbind my shorts. then a wicked moan left me mouth as he sucked onto my neck, who was this man, goddamn dracula?-
      -one of his hands slid between my thighs circling the very center of me, whilst my panties were still on-
      JJ: oh Auri, you’re already so wet for me?
      Aurelia: shut up Jj
      (my reply was fierce and caught him off guard so while he was off guard i took that chance to flip him over to where i was atop him)
      -he grabbed my hips as i shimmied my shorts off, completely forgetting about my scars for a brief moment, then one of his wild hands made their way onto a patch of scars-
      JJ: Auri what’re these scars?
      Aurelia: there nothing Jj, keep on going
      -i tried to divert the subject by kissing him, safe to say my plan failed-
      JJ: Auri..
      (Jj said my name so gently as he picks me up off his lap and back onto my bed)
      JJ: Auri, talk to me..
      Aurelia: there’s nothing really to say Jj
      (i try and no bring attention to my thighs, but his hands and eyes are already roaming)
      JJ: what happened princess?
      Aurelia: i’ll tell you Jj, but if i do you’re not allowed to get mad, okay?
      JJ: i promise i won’t get mad
      Aurelia: okay so i kinda did all that to myself, and before you say anything, i’ve been doing it for awhile and it’s sorta how i cope with stress, and please dont tell John B..
      (Jj just stared at me wide eyes, i knew this was a mistake)
      Aurelia: i’m sorry Jj this was a mistake
      JJ: no, what do you mean? nothing is a mistake i’m just wondering how could you do that to yourself?
      Aurelia: i told you Jj it’s how i cope..
      JJ: you should’ve told me, or anyone for that matter Auri
      Aurelia: i know and i’m sorry just please kept it a secrect form John B
      JJ: yeah ofc, but we’ll have to tell him sooner or later right?
      Aurelia: yeah right..
      JJ: cmon let’s get some sleep yeah?
      Aurelia: mhm
      (me and Jj cuddle up really close, my head is on his chest and his arm is round my waist drawing idle circles)
      Aurelia: goodnight Jj, i love you
      JJ: night Aurelia, i love you more
      Aurelia: no i love you the mostest
      (a giggle escaped my lips as i spoke)
      JJ: hmm nah it’s me
      Aurelia: yahhh sure
      (i gave him a quick peck on the lips before quickly drifting off, and his hand was still drawing idle circles down by my waist)
      FINISHED…. FOR NOW💋😻😢😢💋❤️☺️😠🥶😠😭🙏🏽😃🩷🐺😍💋💋😨😨🐺😨😁😁😁

    • @dendacz4477
      @dendacz4477 4 месяца назад +1

      I need another part nowww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • @haniyaxoxo
      @haniyaxoxo 4 месяца назад +2

      today tmrw and foreverrrr
      ginny and georgia refff

    • @urfavafrican
      @urfavafrican 4 месяца назад +1

      @@haniyaxoxo yesss😘

    • @haniyaxoxo
      @haniyaxoxo 4 месяца назад +1

      @@urfavafrican

  • @P4L_JaciMaybank_OBX
    @P4L_JaciMaybank_OBX 11 месяцев назад +7

    This is so good pls make a part two I love it!

  • @S.A.D.I.E
    @S.A.D.I.E 10 месяцев назад +60

    making part two even tho people alr have!! They’re kinda fun to make ngl💀
    pt 2!!
    (jb is your older brother your really good friends with sarah)
    jb: is it about jj..?
    yn: yea…
    *sarah hugs you*
    s: i’m so sorry. I know it hurts
    *you start to feel your eye’s tearing up*
    yn: i’m ok *you force a little smile before looking back over to jj and kie laughing*
    jb: group hugggg!
    *sarah elbows jb*
    s: not the time
    jb: i’m sorry idk what to do to help, im trying
    *you start to cry*
    s: let’s go inside yn
    yn: ok i guess *you wipe your tears*
    s: i’ll see you later jb
    jb: ok
    *sarah tightly before walking inside with you*
    pt 3!!!
    *JJ’S POV:*
    *jj laughs with kie*
    k: can i see your hoodie?
    jj: oh uh sure
    *jj catches eye contact with jb and looks over to see yn and sarah hugging*
    *jjs mind: what happened*
    jj: here… *jj hands kie his hoodie while his voice trails off*
    k: thanks jayj
    *jj looks back at kie and gives her a slight smile*
    “jayj” was the nickname yn all ways called jj when they had something.
    *jjs mind: that’s what yn called me…*
    pt3 whenever someone asks i guess lol!
    PT 333333
    *jj watches as sarah and john b walk you inside while you’re crying*
    k: jayj?
    *jj lost focus and could only think abt the possibilities of what had happened to you*
    k: jj!
    *kie pushes on jjs shoulder*
    jj: oh uh, yea?
    k: what were you looking at??
    jj: uhmmm.. oh nothing
    *kie rolls her eyes*
    *YOUR POV:*
    *sarah set up a movie night in attempt to make you happy*
    s: lay down, i’ll grab the ice cream!!
    *your face lights up*
    s: ahh there’s that smile!
    *sarah grabs spoons and the container of ice cream*
    yn: you didn’t have to do any of this
    *you sniffled*[
    s: oh but i did
    *you laugh*
    s: pick a movie
    *you browse for a movie until finding one*
    yn: ooo let’s watch this movie, it’s supposed to be good
    s: ok!
    jb: not to uhm interrupt, but is it cool if i go back outside?
    yn: yea
    jb: gotcha
    *the screen door slams shut behind jb, and you and Sarah continue y’all’s movie. Sarah barely makes it thru half the movie, but you stayed up to finish it. When it was over you turned off the tv and stared up at the ceiling*
    *JJS POV:*
    k: i should probably head home since it’s getting late
    jj: ok, i’ll see you tmr ig
    *jj had so obviously been bothered by something the entire time. He couldn’t stop thinking abt you*
    k: ok! bye
    *kie laughs and jj forces a laugh*
    *YOUR POV:* (sorry abt switching the pov a lot)
    *you roll over to your side, and get on your phone. You scroll through different apps till you came across a photo of jj. Quickly you laid you phone down a returned to staring at the ceiling. It wasn’t long until you began to hear laughing from outside. you sigh at the sound of jjs laugh*
    yn: ugh.
    *you get up to go outside*
    *jj turns around to see you walking of the back porch*
    jj: oh hey…
    yn: could y’all quiet down it’s obnoxious.
    jj: sorry
    *jj looked to the ground*
    jj: i thought you were asleep
    yn: tried to, i couldn’t.
    jj: welll… are you uh, are you ok?
    yn: yep
    *you smile briefly*
    jj: oh ok. i was gonna sit out here on the hammock for a little if you want you can too?
    *you sigh*
    yn: yea, ok.
    *you and jj sit down in the hammock*
    jj: can i ask you something
    yn: yea
    jj: why were you crying?
    yn: what are you talking about? i wasn’t
    *your face got red*
    jj: yn you don’t have to lie, if this is about everything that happened between me and you i’m really sorry. It was wrong of me.
    yn: jayj
    *you stopped yourself*
    yn: jj. you acted like you liked me and i stupidly fell for it. You were my bsf and now everything is awkward, and kie…
    jj: yn…i didn’t- i never meant to hurt you. and i don’t like kiara
    yn: she called you jayj! and she kept flirting with you and it’s really difficult for me to watch. i just don’t want thing to be awkward. i want-
    *tears start building in your eyes making your vision blurry*
    yn: i want my bsf back.
    *tears start rolling down your face*
    jj: yn!
    *jj pulls you into a hug without warning*
    jj: you’re not gonna lose me. ever.
    *jjs hug was warm and comforting. You could feel his hands on your bare waist*
    yn: i’m scared
    *jj hugs you tighter*
    jj: don’t be
    *jj finally let’s go when he’s sure you’ve stopped crying*
    jj: do you wanna go to sleep and tmr everything will be ok
    yn: mm ok
    *jj smiled cause he knew you were sleepy*
    jj: we’re going to the beach tmr i bet i could win a surfing contestttt
    yn: we’ll see, i’m going to sleep
    *jj laughs*
    jj: ok yn…
    PT 4!!!
    *jj stayed outside in the hammock even after yn left. He couldn’t stop thinking abt how he had hurt you. He didn’t mean too, but he did.*
    jj: shit.
    *jj goes inside to sleep*
    *NEXT MORNING*
    *almost everyone is sitting on the porch making plans for the day*
    jb: what do y’all want to do today?
    s: uhh i don’t care what we do
    *you rub your eyes trying to wake up*
    s: yn? anything you wanna do?
    yn: hm?
    *sarah laughs*
    s: how late were you up?
    *jj walks up the steps to the porch*
    yn: oh idk, not too la-
    jj: around 11:30.
    *sarah turns to look at jj*
    s: huh?
    jj: she went to sleep around 11:30
    *sarah give you THE look*
    yn: um yea
    *jb scoffs*
    jj: anyways, i set the boat up for today if y’all are interested?
    s: yea.. that sounds good
    *everyone agrees*
    s: come on yn, let’s go change
    jb: we’ll wait for y’all
    *YOU AND SARAH (only*
    *sarah sits on the floor of her room to look through swim suits*
    s: yn.
    yn: yesss…
    s: did u and jj…
    yn: do what?
    s: it…
    yn: omg no! not at all! wtf ew
    *you turn bright red*
    yn: why would you think that
    s: idk if you had read the room you would’ve known we all thought it… he knew when you went to sleep it just made it sound like y’all had
    yn: no! he knew because i sat outside with him cause we were both awake
    s: oh
    *sarah laughs*
    s: wait so y’all are ok?
    yn: yea i think so, i just regret ever trying to be more then friends.
    s: i’m sure he doesn’t
    yn: what are you talkin-
    s: ooo! this color would look good with your tan! you’re wearing this. no saying no
    yn: sarah… this is practically strings
    *sarah laughs*
    s: over exaggeration.
    *sarah rolls her eyes jokingly*
    yn: ok fine.
    s plus you can wear your tee shirt over it. go change in the bathroom i’ll change in here.
    *you and sarah both change, and you would admit the bathing suit sarah gave you wasn’t AS bad as you thought it would be, and she was right, it looked good with your tan. However you put your shirt over it anyway*
    *sarah knocks on the bathroom door rushing you to hurry*
    yn: ok!! hold on!
    s: come on!!
    *you walk out of the bathroom and y’all both head outside to start walking down to the boat*
    jb: finallyy
    *jj laughs*
    s: come on, we’re ready to go!
    *sarah starts walking towards the boat and everyone follows*
    jb: where is kie?
    jj: she’s not going
    *your shocked*
    yn: why not?
    *jj flashed his blue eyes at you*
    *yns mind: omg it’s for me*
    *your heart was instantly warmed as you were happy that there was hope you and jj would be okay*
    *everyone arrived to the boat and one by one got in*
    jj: you first.
    yn: thanks jayj
    *you smiled*
    jj: need help?
    yn: uh i’m ok
    *jj reached out and grabbed you hand to help you anyway*
    yn: thanks
    jj: anytime

  • @CalliYardley
    @CalliYardley 2 месяца назад +11

    Ik I’m a bit late but I’m bored and I have a whole plan in my head hehehehhe
    Your name is Olivia your a kook but hang out w the pogues cause ur dad isnt the greatest the pogues dont know a thing you have been through and they dont rly like you but you hang out w them for an escape from your dad John B was sometimes nice to you but most of the time was rude when you were born your parents were happy until your mom killed her self right in front of you when you were only 7 so your dad became an alcoholic and became very abusive towards you in this pov you guys r 15 the pogues don’t know you were r@ped when you were 13 and on your 15th birthday you had gotten r@ped again 2 different people who we’ll figure out later on sooooo let’s start this thing
    John B= Jb
    Jj= Jj
    Kiara= K
    Sarah= S
    Pope=P
    Cleo will not be in this pov tell me if you want her to be later on
    *All of a sudden your phone starts going off it’s your dad calling you*
    O- sh!t it’s my dad bye yall
    *No one responded as usual*
    I mean they allll hate me but what can a girl do I mean literally my only escape I had just gotten back to my dad drunk as always
    Y/D- WHERE TF WERE YOU
    You know how to fight back you started fighting back at 12
    O- out w friends *you say plainly with no expression on your face*
    *He goes to lunch you but you dodge and slide down on the floor and trip him he goes down as you go back up and you start walking away but your dad attacks you he gets on top of your body and starts punching you in the face and gut you freed your hands and punched him in the nose and started choking him he had kicked you in the ribs you flew back and hit the wall and blacked out you woke up after 2 days*
    O- Holy sh!t my head hurts
    Your dad had been out
    I took a good look at my self I the mirror I could cover most of it up with make up and if anyone asks I ran into a door I doubt they will ask since they hate me my nick name has become “little miss perfect” I hate ALOT but it’s fine me and Jj had dated but we broke up 2 weeks ago honestly he treated me horribly and then took 2 weeks to move on to Kie it made me mad kind of but it’s fine
    *you got to the chauteo or wtv idk how to spell it*
    I walked in they gave me dirty looks as jj asked very rudely
    Jj- what happened to your face
    O- my dumb a** ran into a door
    Jj- seems she not so perfect after all or maybe she’s just dumb who knows
    Everyone laughed I kinda just sat there annoyed then walked by them Kie shoulder checked me it was pretty normal I sat down and everyone moved to a different area then there was a knock at the door
    Jb- OLIVIA GO GET THE DOOR
    I opened the door and it was my father ofc it was just ofc
    Y/D- go get your sh!t we’re moving
    O- huh to where
    Y/D- New York so you can be an actor
    O- Dad I rly don’t- *he gave me a tight slap*
    Y/D- idc if you don’t want to let’s go
    O- fine
    I walked back as John B yelled
    Jb- WHO WAS IT
    O- MY DAD
    Jj- OOO IS YOUR RICH DADDY DROPPING YOU OFF SOME MONEY SO YOU CAN GO GET A PRETTY LIL DRESS
    O- NO ACTUALLY IM MOVING
    K- FINALLY NO ONE LIKES YOU
    I chuckled to my self and said quietly
    O- they won’t be soon
    Y/D- OLIVIA I DONT HAVE TIME FOR THIS BULL LETS GO
    O- IM COMING JEEZ
    Y/D- DONT GIVE ME ATTITUDE YA LITTLE SH!T
    the pogues heard all of this and didn’t care what’s so ever
    Tell me if I want another part

    • @bethnolin5606
      @bethnolin5606 2 месяца назад

      This is amazing if you could tag me if you ever make another part

    • @CalliYardley
      @CalliYardley 2 месяца назад +6

      Part 2
      We moved and I got a role in a show and I’m now best friends with everyone else on the show their names r Lily, Addison, Joshua, Noah, and Emily they care a lot more for me then the pogues ever will until one day Joshua walked into my house and saw me and my dad fighting
      J-OMFG LIV WTH
      O-oh hey
      Y/d-WHO TF IS THIS
      O-one of my friends
      J-IM CALLING 911 THIS ISNT OK
      Y/d-NO TF U ARENT
      *you grabbed a vase and knocked him out with it*
      O- yea tf he is
      J-liv r u ok
      O-yea I’m fine
      The pogues pov
      Jj was scrolling through tic tok and he found a fan edit of you your last name will be reichert it was one of the ones that’s like Olivia reichert being Olivia reichert ya know so one of the clips is you singing along to an Adele song and then a clip of one of your bloopers then you tripping and so on
      Jj-um John b
      Jb- what
      Jj-look
      *he shows John b the video*
      Jb-search her name up on Google
      Jj-holy sh!t she’s famous my god that b!tch
      TIME SKIP your now 17 so r the pogues and they haven’t rly checked up on ur fame but your now a singer like you have always wanted to be but you found love in acting too so the world now knows ur past and the pogues r friends w Sarah and we’re still in the pogues pov
      *one of your songs start playing on the radio we’re taking inspiration on Olivia Rodrigo’s songs see where I’m going and it’s trauter that’s playing*
      S-omg turn this up this is my favorite artist ever
      Jj-wait who is this
      S-Olivia reichert I’m going to her concert tomorrow I’m just trying to find someone else to go with me also I’m friends with her and I was wondering if she could come over here for a bit she said she might move back to outer banks
      K-wait is that little Ms perfect
      S-WAIT YOU GUYS WERE THE PEOPLE CALLING HER THAT
      jb-yea it was pretty funny
      S-no it’s not cause she’s not perfect *she explains everything and shows them your court cases*
      P- holy sh!t
      Jj-I never knew and and out of all people who should have understood her was me holy sh!t were horrible people
      K-omg..
      Jj-wait I’ll go with you to the concert
      Jb-she can come over
      S-so you guys switch up you do understand u hated her because she had money and she was “perfect” that’s so messed up
      K-WHY TF WERE WE SO MEAN TO HER
      S-news flash yall r horrible people
      Jb-no sh!t Sarah
      Your pov
      Joshua has become your best friend and you guys were saying goodbye cause this might be your last time in New York
      J-bye I love you so much
      *you guys aren’t dating you guys r just rly close*
      O-bye I love you so much toooo
      You were now back in box and you called Sarah
      O-hey I’m here
      S-omg yay I’m coming
      O-ok bye love youuu
      S-love you toooo
      Jj-who was that
      S-Olivia she’s at the airport
      Jb-she won’t be happy knowing she’s coming here
      S-yup but we gotta try w her
      *jj and Sarah got in the Twinkie to go pick you up*
      Your pov
      So I was sitting out side and some fans asked for pictures and ofc I said yes and then the Twinkie pulled up I almost screamed but ya know fans I hugged them and they walked away I started walking away from the Twinkie but Sarah walked out and said this
      S-listen Ik your going to hate me for this
      And then jj walked out
      O-seriously?!?
      S-come on let’s just get in the car
      O-omg fine
      Jj-listen Olivia I’m sorry I didn’t know about everything
      O-but that doesn’t give you an excuse for acting shitty to me
      Jj-yea idk why k acted like that either I was an a**hole and everyone is rly sorry trust me and I’m really sorry out of all people I should have been there for you because I should have understood you
      O-it’s ok
      Jj-your forgiving me
      O-nooo I just said it’s ok to say it’s ok what do you think *I say smiling and jj and Sarah laughed*
      Jj-since when did you become funny
      O- I always have been you were just to focused on little Ms perfect
      Jj-ouch well now your nickname will beeee hmmmmm Mae
      O-you remember my middle name
      Jj-maybe or or Liv yea liv or Mae those r cute
      S-I call her liv
      Jj-well if everyone calls her that I’m calling her Mae
      S-everyone calls her liv I mean her fans r called Livies
      Jj-then I’m calling her Mae
      O-cute
      Jj’s pov
      I feel so bad she’s so sweet and I didn’t even realize it she looked so sweet laughing and smiling her is so long and she looks like a goddess and she’s hilarious and sweet
      Next part soon

    • @CalliYardley
      @CalliYardley 2 месяца назад

      @@bethnolin5606 thank you the next part is out!

    • @Anna_Ley1865
      @Anna_Ley1865 Месяц назад

      Tag

    • @RainTheTherian242
      @RainTheTherian242 20 дней назад

      NEXT PART

  • @bigbackcentral15
    @bigbackcentral15 11 месяцев назад +5

    Your backkkkkk!!!!!!!

  • @Leah.gurlypops
    @Leah.gurlypops 4 месяца назад +6

    Part 2
    Jon b is ur brother jj is yo crush and Kiara is ur bsf and ur friends with all the poges
    Y/n: ima go take a shower
    Kiara: ok bye
    Jj:aw y/n don’t goooo
    Y/n: sorry jay I gotta take a shower
    U take a shower and put pjs on
    Hey yall wanna watch a movie
    Poges say ya
    Jj sits next to kie but he usually sits next to you
    Jj: what yall wanna watch
    Jon b: lord of the rings
    All: sure
    Order
    Jon b. Y/n. Pope
    Sarah. Jj. Kiara. Tv
    U fall asleep on pope then Jon b falls asleep on you
    Kiara went home bc of jj saying she doesn’t like her but you don’t know that and jj layed on you to
    Pope:y/n
    Y/n: ya pope
    Pope:ima get up but don’t move
    Y/n: ok you fall back asleep
    Jon b: y/n
    Y/n: ya
    Jon b: ima getup but don’t move
    Y/ n: ok you fall asleep
    And jj and you are cuddling
    You and jj wake up
    Jj: hey cupcake
    Y/n: hi jj
    Y/n: where’s Kiara
    Jj: she went home bc I said I don’t like her
    Y/n mind {YAS I LOVE YOU}
    Y/n: then who do you like
    Jj: you
    Y/n: you kiss jj on the lips
    Jj: I love you
    Y/n: I love you to WAIT what are we gonna tell Jon b he would kill you then me
    Jj: our little secret
    Y/n: just two abused kids
    J: huh what do you mean
    This is when big jon is here
    Y/n: my dad is abuses me jj
    Jj: I’m sorryy
    Y/n: it’s not ur fault
    You and jj make out
    Two months later
    Jj: y/n routlege we been dating for 3 months will you marry me
    Y/n:..
    Nice a cliffhanger
    Pt3
    Y/n: ofc I love u jj maybank
    Jj: I love you to y/n routlege
    Jj: what would you want it the future
    Y/n: hmm 5 kids and 2 dogs not a big house but not a small one I wanna have our back porch in front of the ocean for I can surf and I want my kids father to be jj maybank
    Jj: I’ll give you anything
    You and jj did the dirty and not safe so u know
    Y/n: [screams]
    Jj:what!?!?
    Y/n: jj I’m pregnant
    Jj: :0 u sure where did u get the test form dollar tree if so get one from the pharmacy
    Y/n: it’s from the pharmacy
    Jj: Jon bs gonna kill me!!
    Jon b: why
    Y/n: jj married me
    Jon b: bro your 16 and jjs 18
    Y/n: OK AND IM PREGNANT
    Jon b: YAS 👏
    Y/n: ur ok with it
    Jon b: ima be a uncle
    Jj: hehe
    19 months later
    Y/n: AHH JJ IM IN LABOR
    The baby arrives
    Y/n: hi baby
    Jj: what should we name her
    Y/n: Leah
    Ok u got to take the baby home
    Ik a lot of time skips
    Your feeding the baby
    Kiara: who missed me
    Y/n: that’s my line
    Kiara: sorry y/n aw you baby sitting
    Y/n: n-
    Kiara: idc where’s jj oh over there
    Jj: oh Wsp kie
    Kiara: you still single
    Jj: uh no I’m married with one kid
    Kiara: UH WITH WHO
    Y/n: me my name is y/n maybank now
    Next part soonnn

  • @esmegood9730
    @esmegood9730 4 месяца назад +9

    Im gonna make part two but this is my first time tho
    Little bit of background info jb is your brother pope is you friend sarah and kue are your best friends and jj is your crush but also friend
    Jb:yn why dose it hurt dont say you like jj
    Yn: What no i mean. Yeah, he is cute and all, but no, i dont like him
    Sarah just give you a weird look
    Yn:I'm getting tired I'm gonna head inside night
    Jb,Sarah,pope: night
    Kie,jj:night yn
    You ignor jj and kie
    Jj: what's up with her
    S:kie we need to talk
    Sarah and kie walk off
    Sarah and kies pov
    K: yeah what's up
    S: wth you know yn likes jj
    K: yeah ik but I like him tho
    The boys pov
    P:wth jj I thought you liked yn
    Jb:wait what you like my sister
    Jj: well yeah I like her but she doesn't like me but kie likes me and I kind if like kie
    The girls go back and they all decide to go inside
    Yns pov
    Yn:why am I like this why do I like jj he doesn't like me I alway mess thing up I made my dad leave
    Jb: wait listen is that yn crying
    S:let me go check on her
    Knock knock
    S: hey yn it me can I come in
    Yn: sure what's up
    S:are you OK I heard you crying
    Yn:yeah I'm fine why would I
    S:well jj went of having a blast with kie and you went inside looking upset
    Yn:yeah I'm fine let's go out to the other
    S:ok
    You go out to the others and they look at you
    P:yn are you OK you looking you have been crying
    Yn: I'm fine thx pope
    K: looks I'm sorry y-
    Yn: kie don't talk to me
    K:What just because you like jj I can't have a fun time with him or like him
    Yn: wth kie you just shout that out and no i never said that I was annoyed cuz you knew that I liked jj and you go off liking him and not even telling me
    Jj: wait what yn you like me
    S:jj did you not listen to anything that just went on
    Yn: I've had enough
    Walks off to her room

    • @Aster-vi8sh
      @Aster-vi8sh 3 месяца назад +1

      this is so good pls make more❤️🫶

    • @esmegood9730
      @esmegood9730 3 месяца назад

      @Aster-vi8sh Thank you. I will make another part now

    • @esmegood9730
      @esmegood9730 3 месяца назад +3

      Part 3
      Yn walks off to her room
      Jj: Well, that was something
      K: well jj can I talk to you quickly
      Jj: umm sure I guess what up
      K: I mean alone
      Jj : Oh sure
      Jb shoots jj a look like dont do it man
      S: I'm gonna go check on yn be back soon
      Yn and s pov Yn
      S: Hey, yn you OK
      Yn: Um, not really, but I will be soon. What up
      S: um well kie and jj went off talking. I thought I'd come and tell you
      Yn: Oh, ok, well, shall we go out and see what it's about
      S: yn, u sure you ok
      Yn: Yeah, I'm fine
      Jj and kies' pov
      Jj: So what up then
      K:jj, I really like you
      Kie kisses jj, but jj pulls away
      K: Oh, sorry
      Jj: it's fine, don't be sorry
      K: jj, I love you so much. Will you go out with me
      Jj: Umm, sure
      K: yay ok shall we head back before they all come looking for us then
      Jj: Yeah, and I suppose we could tell them about us
      Jj puts a fake smile on his face
      Kie graps jjs hand and squeezes it tight
      Jj and kie arrive back
      Jb: What took you two so long
      Everyone looks down at their hands, including yn
      Yn just scoffs and walks into the kitchen
      Jj: breaks the awkward silence and says well are we having a party in the cats a$$
      Everyone: Hell yes
      Yn: I'll make everyone dinner, I guess
      Sorry, it's not that good and short, but let me know if you want another part, and I will make it longer

    • @esmegood9730
      @esmegood9730 3 месяца назад

      @@Aster-vi8sh I made another part

    • @chrosant3544
      @chrosant3544 3 месяца назад +1

      @@Aster-vi8shikr❤

  • @kaecameron
    @kaecameron 3 месяца назад +2

    Me seeing thousands of part 2’s and being like which one?

  • @Dxisy_.p
    @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад +72

    💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎part 12?!
    (This continued from where i did the part 2!)
    (If you want to be tagged only say abt it once or it will be hard for me to know if i did or not

    • @nashatahmed8477
      @nashatahmed8477 11 месяцев назад +2

      MORE PLEASE UR SOO GOOD❤

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад +4

      @@nashatahmed8477 OFCC and btw i might not do a series i will jist carry on (but i will add cleo just in a diff wsy like she is 1 of yns childhood friends

    • @HaleyRobinson-ck4hh
      @HaleyRobinson-ck4hh 11 месяцев назад +1

      @@Dxisy_.pcan u tag me?? Btw I love this so far u are so talented!!

    • @brynn212
      @brynn212 11 месяцев назад +1

      @@Dxisy_.pITS SO GOOD PLS DO MORE I LOVE THESE SM

    • @a_random_volleyball_player
      @a_random_volleyball_player 11 месяцев назад +2

      @Pogues.4.life.x OOO I LOVE IT ❤️ I read this one and part 11, and they're both amazing! Kie really deserved all of that honestly. Could you please continue tagging me in these? I love em so much ❤️

  • @KristinaLemasters
    @KristinaLemasters 10 месяцев назад +10

    JJ is so hot 🔥 🥵

  • @halleeakins6730
    @halleeakins6730 10 месяцев назад +3

    The fact that this song hits a little to hard

  • @P4L_JaciMaybank_OBX
    @P4L_JaciMaybank_OBX 11 месяцев назад +2

    Pls make a part two of this love this!

  • @user-gh5ok1to6m
    @user-gh5ok1to6m 4 месяца назад +5

    Pt 2 bc im bored😮
    My first time so it might ne horrible 😢😊😊☺️☺️
    Background( jj is ur bf and kiara is ur bsf sarahs and pope are your bsfs aswell john b is ur older brother by 10 months)
    Jb:john b
    K:kiara
    S:sarah
    P:pope
    Jj:jj duhh
    Jb: are u ok y/n
    Y/n: its sad because it hurts
    {[Jj and Kiara see you]}
    {[ Y/n runs into the chateau crying]} {[jj and kiara run after you]}
    Jj: y/n come back
    Y/n: u know what? jj NO! I thought u loved me?
    Jj: i do y/n i really do love you i was high
    Y/n: and u kiara i fucking trusted you,then you yo behind my back snd kiss my bf
    K: listen y/n im sorry
    Y/n: sorrys not gonna cut it i trusted you both{[y/n cries and runs off to her room and locks the door]}
    Jb,sarah,and pope: kiara jj and jj thats just stupid
    Jj: SHUT UP! im gonna go fix this
    {[Jj runs to y/ns room]}
    Jj: please y/n unlock the dootbim sorry and i love you
    {[ Y/n grabs a pocket knife and cuts her arms and wrists}] {[ jj unlocks the door with a knife and sees y/ns bloood all over the floor]} {[ he grabs y/n by the waist and hugs her tight]}
    Jj: y/n why ? Why? Please dont ever hurt yourself i love u to much to lose you
    Y/n: jj im sorry i really am{[cries]}
    Jj: dont say sorry cupcake im sorry y/n i really am
    Jj: ima xlean up this blood
    Y/n: alright
    thinks(im sorry)
    {[Jj vleans up the blood then he picks y/n up and sits her on the bed to clean up y/nd cuts]} {[ but SUDDENLY y/n passes out]}
    Jj: y/n get up i cant lose you {[ jb runs in y/ns room}]
    Jb: WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?
    Jj: she passed out call the ambulance ({[ jb calls the ambulance and they arrive at the Chateau}] {and they load y/n up]}
    D=Doctor
    D: well take care of her mr. Routledge
    Jb: alright please make sure shes ok and call me and let me know if shes ok
    Jj: doc can i go?
    D: of course mr.maybank
    Jj: thanks doc
    D: ur w lcome mr.maybank{[ jj gets in]}{[ then suddenly y/ns eyes open]}
    Y/n: where am i? Jj john b?
    Jj: your awake
    🎉TIME SKIP🎉
    {[ THEY ARRIVE AT THE HOSPITAL}]
    let me know if i should make more????? Cause idk

    • @dendacz4477
      @dendacz4477 4 месяца назад +1

      I need more do another part!!!!!!!!!❤❤❤

    • @user-gh5ok1to6m
      @user-gh5ok1to6m 4 месяца назад +1

      @@dendacz4477 alr I'll do one tonight ❣️❣️❣️ tyyy for liking it

    • @user-gh5ok1to6m
      @user-gh5ok1to6m 4 месяца назад +2

      {[THEY ARRIVE AT THR HOSPITAL]}
      JJ:y/n I love u so much don't ever fucking leave me
      Y/n: JJ I'm sorry too I love you so much
      JJ: me-
      {[Y/n cuts JJ off]}
      Y/n: w-where are the others?! JJ are they ok??
      JJ: cupcake they are fine
      Y/n: are u sure? U promise?
      JJ: promise
      {[Doctor walks in]}
      D: mr.maybank well just have to do some tests on her then you guys are free to go home
      JJ: thank you so much I appreciate it
      D: your welcome
      {[Doctors finish the test]}
      D: you guys can leave now
      JJ,y/n:yayy
      {[JJ calls John b and the others pouges and tells them that y/n is ok and they need a ride back to the chateau]}
      Jb:get in losers
      Y/n:don't call me that but ok

    • @user-gh5ok1to6m
      @user-gh5ok1to6m 4 месяца назад

      @@dendacz4477 it's outttt ttyyty

    • @user-gh5ok1to6m
      @user-gh5ok1to6m 4 месяца назад

      @@dendacz4477 I'ma make another part tonight longer than pt 3

  • @lucy_998
    @lucy_998 11 месяцев назад +5

    waiting for someone to make a second part in the comments

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад +1

      Just done :)

  • @defnotivy11
    @defnotivy11 11 месяцев назад +8

    earlyyy someone tag me if they make a part 2

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад

      Made 1

    • @defnotivy11
      @defnotivy11 11 месяцев назад

      @@Dxisy_.p it's rlly good btw

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад

      @@defnotivy11 tyy

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад

      @@defnotivy11 tyyyyy

  • @LIV23686
    @LIV23686 5 месяцев назад

    Y/n. Need to be in the new series

  • @milkellie13
    @milkellie13 2 месяца назад +1

    dw I will just go to rafe, and if rafe doesn’t want me, topper is the last one to choose

  • @_Stranger_banks_
    @_Stranger_banks_ 11 месяцев назад +2

    Yep someone go run and make part two

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад +1

      I made 1

    • @_Stranger_banks_
      @_Stranger_banks_ 11 месяцев назад +1

      @@Dxisy_.p okay thanks I'll check it out

    • @Dxisy_.p
      @Dxisy_.p 11 месяцев назад

      @@_Stranger_banks_ tyy

  • @Miss_paige369
    @Miss_paige369 6 месяцев назад +1

    Wait I don’t mean to sound slow but what does Y/n stand for?

  • @Anyaiscarebear
    @Anyaiscarebear 4 месяца назад

    What song is this?

  • @user-dn3vw3rp1d
    @user-dn3vw3rp1d 11 месяцев назад

    Part two

  • @just_0n3call
    @just_0n3call 5 месяцев назад

    what is this song called

  • @hallebreon7729
    @hallebreon7729 11 месяцев назад +1

    Tag me in part 2

  • @liz_editzzzz
    @liz_editzzzz 11 месяцев назад +2

    can you make kie x yn, or sarah x yn. Dont start calling me fruity, because- yeah

  • @Kylliee567
    @Kylliee567 8 месяцев назад

    who’s Y/n????

  • @Girl11happy
    @Girl11happy 6 месяцев назад

    Guys who is y/n?