Unnie my suggestion is that the background pic is not match because it is an mafia FF so you must give a dark colour room or living room ok and give some music 😊😊😊😊 love u ❤❤
Unnie It’s a great story but why did u use in 0:33 a Islamic room bc look at the left side there is a Islamic paint and I think it’s actually disrespectful for the religion 🙂
If you have problem with her voice don't watch ff's or mute but tell to her like this Imagine if someone tells you that your voice is uncomfortable how you will feel
!!!Plzz PIN THIS👇!!! You are doing a great job keep it up 🥳👏 but I feel that there is too much over acting in this fanfiction, so I would like to ask you to improve the script a little more and also improve your spoken language a little. This is looking so dramatic that people will get bored of reading. If you want more views then improve it.I would like to say that improve everything in the background, the way you talk, and add music in the background and not your voice because people can read fanfiction and some people feel uncomfortable when you read and let them listen your voice Make your story line strong too.I hope you took my words seriously and will work on it.I don't want to hurt anyone's heart, I just want to tell you to do something that will benefit you, not me.If you still feel bad with my Words then I am really really sorry and I am saying this from my heart so that you don't feel bad. My intention is not to hurt you. I am sorry if you feel bad.But please mark my words I want to see you successful🥰😘
His sister's name was another level😂😂😂😂😂😂 kissy😂😂
😂😂😂yeah
Yeah I was thinking the same I was like wait kissy??I was jungshocked😂😂
Yeah 😂😂😂
Yaaa
Plot twist : her chanel name "missy" 😂😂😂
Can you just put a music you don't have to do voice over it's uncomfortable
Ikr
real
Yes itz quite correct
I'm with that
Yes 👌
I just remember poopy playtime character by kissy name
Nice
ARMY needs a mental hospital lmao 😂🤣
Not just one❤
@@ranaosman6031 i know right?
Dear! Plzz watch my jk ff story its really interesting.
Bro skipped kiss word and used ki.
But kept Jungkook's sister's name kissy💀🤌🏻
Dear! plz watch my jk ff story its really interesting.
I keep watching these and remember how single I am. Pure torture fr-
Me too
WTF i just watched 💀
Started doing his ACTIONS seriously 🥹😂
The ff was so quick it goes like this 📈📉📈, love it, BTW what is jungkook hidding in his phone? 🌚
@@Jeonyn28 You didn't have to be this straightforward 🌚
I'm wondering the same, what is he hiding on his phone? Anyone PLeaseee tell me
He is hiding his needyness
Ye sab baate bataye nahi jate😅🌚🌚
Thank you for not saying the bad words. There's someone with me. Like your voice❤❤
Unnie my suggestion is that the background pic is not match because it is an mafia FF so you must give a dark colour room or living room ok and give some music 😊😊😊😊 love u ❤❤
Ok 👍🏻 love you more ❤️
💜💜💜❤️
Unnie It’s a great story but why did u use in 0:33 a Islamic room bc look at the left side there is a Islamic paint and I think it’s actually disrespectful for the religion 🙂
Bro but all religions are same for me ❤️❤️ and i didn't know that it was Islamic room
It’s ok ❤️ and I know all religions are same for u bc for me too
Just zoom and look at the mirror 4:42😂😂😅
Can you make (WHEN YOUR MAFIA KING HUSBAND COMES TO YOUR COLLEGE AS YOUR PROFESSOR AFTER A ARGUMENT) PLEASE 😢😢😢
1st btw amazing
💖💖💖💖
Thank you so much 😊
can I get a pin 💖💖💖💖💖💖@@Jeonyn28
Which mental hospital we need😂😂😂
Dear! Plz watch my jk ff story its really interesting.
Beautiful story
Yes your voice is uncomfortable 😣
Ap log please mute kr diya kro please because I am doing my job
@@Jeonyn28 per jaruri thodi na hai ki aap voice nikalogi
If you have problem with her voice don't watch ff's or mute but tell to her like this
Imagine if someone tells you that your voice is uncomfortable how you will feel
Which app do you use
You take to long to put another lines
Sorry I'll try to put Closer
@@Jeonyn28 i did mean to be rude i was on my period because of mood swings I shout at I am so sorry 😭👏
@@Tshepiso649 it's ok my girl ❤️
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Can you please make fall in love with sister brother in law jk ff
Okay 👍🏻
I love this ff show much 😍
Thankuuu ❤️
2th love you ❤stay ❤stay safety
Love you more 💕😘
2nd 😅
@@partypartyyeah-kookie5648 thankuuu
@@Jeonyn28 I was just correcting her... Btw I'm 4th
@@partypartyyeah-kookie5648 aweee 💜😽
!!!Plzz PIN THIS👇!!!
You are doing a great job keep it up 🥳👏 but I feel that there is too much over acting in this fanfiction, so I would like to ask you to improve the script a little more and also improve your spoken language a little. This is looking so dramatic that people will get bored of reading. If you want more views then improve it.I would like to say that improve everything in the background, the way you talk, and add music in the background and not your voice because people can read fanfiction and some people feel uncomfortable when you read and let them listen your voice Make your story line strong too.I hope you took my words seriously and will work on it.I don't want to hurt anyone's heart, I just want to tell you to do something that will benefit you, not me.If you still feel bad with my Words then I am really really sorry and I am saying this from my heart so that you don't feel bad. My intention is not to hurt you. I am sorry if you feel bad.But please mark my words I want to see you successful🥰😘
Omo😭🫡
cringee yukkk
Omo😭🫡
Dear! Plz watch my jk ff story its really interesting.
@@ot7_Armygirl656 ok unnie💜