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The black ship

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HAH!!??!! Crappy story. Pretty sneaky.

The BULLSHIT version of the black ship.

Wrong Story

The black ship

What the f,.!? Is this

Stolen.

Thumbs down for your clickbait BS

clickbait

take this story down this is a none space ship

This isn't a continuation of the the black ship sage. Seems to the beginning of a new writing.

stop stealing

Whom ever wrote the words should check the English spelling of many of them.

Krill. Creel. Grael. Nah, when you can't keep the name straight you lose my attention.

nothing to do with the black ship a truly bad bot printing the text and reading it without emotion

Wtf is this...?

Unfortunately I know of 4 different "The Black Ship" stories that originated around the same time. Just a bit of a problem that 2 different versions have come to the Chapter number of 39. Still. Really do need another way to make them as different stories.. IE: Author's Name with the title.

ai or theft

this has nothing to do with the black ship at least not the story ive been following titled the black ship

This seems like an AI attempt at HFY...

yawn

Another story full of useless buzzwords, they sound all the same, AI has no imagination.

Narrator sounds like a Russian AI with a lidp. Story has potential but isn't part of the Black Ship story

Click bait…not “Black ship”

you're a title thief. this is not The Black Ship - Chapter 39 - NOT FOR CHILDREN from SciFi Stories. stop stealing other peoples material. Grow an imagination of your own!

HEY EDITOR !!!! Your visuals don't match the narrative ! Your on-screen text doesn't match the story line , OR the story teller's words ! Is this your 1st attempt at a video?

I don't care who or what wrote it, its stupid! Conventional weapons in a war against beings of pure energy and thought? What are you shooting at? And why would humanity even take notice of what the empire is thinking or doing? And attacking humanities core worlds? To accomplish what? To hurt who? To interact with what? Stupid story! Star trek the next generation Does a story Of an empire trying to stop some people from ascending. That's story makes sense, The government Is afraid they'll lose control of their people If they ascend to a higher plane of consciousness So they try to stop them. This story is just dumb

I was going to ask what a chainsaw was doing in the middle of a desert but then realized that if you’re in the middle of a desert with a chainsaw, you might as well just drop it.

AI for sure. The story repeats itself on some level. Not bad but a little janky.

This has to be AI generated. At least rewrite some parts.

It was a Good story until the end when again this constant Repeating, in most of these stories!🤔👎

Well, I was expecting a Solomon Solution!

Anothervretelling of thevsame cliched story. You should be embarrassed for posting this dreck

These aliens should learn to scan an object BEFORE pushing buttons and pulling pins. 💣

And it makes no sense for raiders from a dying planet to outnumber the colonists unless they are using drones.

Story is kind of boring, no fluid progression even for an hfy story.

Hoe could they be called alien on their own planet

Hold on... cats infiltrating enemy spaces? That's a new one. Please post the method used to get a cat to do something you want, when you want it to. That is real fiction. Cat's have a better sense of smell than dogs, good luck waving he jacket of a missing person under a Cat's nose and expecting it to do anything but scratch itself. Cat's do what they want, god bless them.

This story has NO CONTINUITY AT ALL. It jumps around & doesn’t allow the listener to follow the characters, story plot, and any semblance of dialogue. 1) They are on rooftop, but get attacked in apartment? 2) After attack then they are leading the resistance? 3) Attack on throne room, but its stated Liara attacks the bad guy while Hiroshi is fighting others, but they both attack bad guy? 4) Hiroshi goes back home & then he’s back in the thick of fighting??? Good story plot, but work on the flow of story & continuity.