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I think we can start the video from "where did you guys meet" because the first question about her knowing where he's from is not necessary. I also think John spent a lot of time explaining that one so there's no need to have it anymore

A few errors in the subtitle love

I'm not sure if it's just me but from about 03:00 minutes I think the audio and visual is not in sync. I'm also thinking of making taking out that question about what he kept from him and the gift he brought for the sister because his response is redundant.

Then 2:11, "because they can't manage"...lets remember to add that y

So just with a semantics at 1:15-1:20, let's try to keep the thing to "people who are visually impaired" and not "visually impaired people". As advocates of people with disabilities we try to make the person come before their disability because the disability doesn't define them. So hence it's more respectful to refer to that as "people with..." as opposed to "...lly impaired people". That's why we refer to them as "people living with disabilities" and not "disabled people". I hope this makes sense love ❤

This is really cool. I'll give your more detailed feedback over our call. But I love the flow😊