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aster melt
Добавлен 30 июн 2022
I am documenting my improvement
all japanese covers have english subtitles
all japanese covers have english subtitles
a mysterious phone call cover - [asteria]
original - r-906 ruclips.net/video/zh7ihYKaqYs/видео.html
english translation by Somedogs with corrections by Violet
english translation by Somedogs with corrections by Violet
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Видео
ruler of my heart english cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 63310 месяцев назад
original - vivinos ruclips.net/video/VgPo3q01kbg/видео.html happy new year lyrics (feel free to use them :) ) You can run from the light Sun that can brighten the night, you are shinning my star You're a perfect subject You capture the world of sorrow, weeping love of the wrecked My saviour, with a beautiful soul I don't believe, you're a liar From the moment our shadows began to eclipse I'll b...
daisan no shinzou cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 9310 месяцев назад
original - はるまきごはん ruclips.net/video/uSuyiF9SYrM/видео.html 第三の心臓
poems of a machine cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 53410 месяцев назад
original - mili ruclips.net/video/UqUH7LHMj50/видео.html
your new girlfriend (your new boyfriend but lesbian) cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 14211 месяцев назад
original - wilbur soot ruclips.net/video/Xa0Swz3X1cQ/видео.html
the mind electric cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 272Год назад
original - miracle musical ruclips.net/video/0vfZjdK8Ktw/видео.html
aishiteitanoni cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 129Год назад
original - maretu ruclips.net/video/R_g0M5Zmqhg/видео.html there are english subtitles i made, i hope the translation is okay (i tried my best)
iron lotus cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 284Год назад
original - mili ruclips.net/video/0r2GNWvkd4U/видео.html
world.execute(me) cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 812 года назад
orginial - mili ruclips.net/video/ESx_hy1n7HA/видео.html
string theocracy cover - [asteria]
Просмотров 1372 года назад
orginial - mili ruclips.net/video/nOj_A3aZxGs/видео.html
Holy, what happened to to your voice :3 You sound so much better then you usaly does!! You still have some problems with keeping a tone for a prolonged amount of time. Still you sound really good. Keep it up🎉❤
AAA THANK YOU SO MUCH !!! i tried to incorporate the advice I got on my other videos ! i still have a long way to go but i spent a lot more time trying to improve quality on this one . to hear that it's working means so much to me !!!!! thank you !!!!
finally a real cover. tired of all the ai. you're great!
thank you so much !!!!!
Splendid. Keep on making covers, my friend. And I like the theme you have with the channel!
thank you so much !!!! that means a lot to me !!! i will keep trying my best !!
Just wanted to leave a comment because I saw some people being nasty. You don't have anything to apologize for. You're just singing for fun, and that's completely fine. All those people want to do is bring you down and be rude. I noticed that you wanted critique, so I hope this might help a little (I'm by no means a professional). - The lyrics are nice, however, they don't flow as well because of the language difference. Try to count the syllables of the original lyrics and it might be easier to form lyrics that way. - Timing. Some parts that you sing can be too early/late/drawn out/etc. You can line up your singing with the original audio to see what parts to improve on (in future covers). - Audio balance. It's important to balance the vocals with the music. You don't want either part to overpower each other, because it makes it sound a little off. I hope you have a great day! With practice, you'll definitely improve :)
AAAAA THANK YOU !!! this is really helpful !!!!!! i was worried a little about the lyrics not fitting but i wanted the meaning to be more important , i think it will be much better if i balance meaning and syllables in the future a little better , thank you !!!! i do have trouble lining up the timing , i think i will add the original vocals into audacity and line it up that way , then take them out after . listening to my voice over and over can make it hard to notice the timing is off , this helped me realize that and come up with a solution , thank you !!! i do have some problems with balancing the volume , i think it was because i added so many layers of vocals that it became louder than the music and i didn’t notice , i think i will add less layers in the future and double check it is balanced ! your feedback is very helpful !!!! i was feeling a bit disheartened by those other comments but your comment made me feel much much better ! thank you !!!!!!
it's terrible, and i rlly hope this is just a troll
i’m sorry !!! i’m mostly just having fun , i will try to do better in the future … my apologies that it was really that terrible ….
@@asteria_melt thanks
@@asteria_meltdon't apologise and don't listen to them, improve on your own time and show them 👍👍👍
@@flowerperson4285 thank you !! i will try my best :D !!!!
How can people lie wih such clean words like that? That cover lacks vocal ability, pairing vocals, lyrics adaptations, rythm....
i’m sorry !!!! do you have any advice for me ? i’m only using audacity and i’m not very good yet , but i’m only starting ! i would really appreciate some critique of how i can do better in the future ! i took a lot of creative liberties with the lyrics ! i’m sorry if you don’t like them :( i wanted to capture the feeling of this round more than a direct translation . i would love more detailed feedback though , thank you !
What a great cover! The english lyrics are clever! Keep up the good work.
thank you so much , it means so much to me that you liked the lyrics !!! thank you !!!
Great cover, from my point of view you have potential!! ৻( •̀ ᗜ •́ ৻)
thank you !!! i will do my best to do better ! your comment means a lot to me !!!!!
quisiera aprender ah escribir japones pero lamentablemente no se pero te quedo genial el cover :D
gracias !!!!! también estoy aprendiendo ! puedes hacerlo !!!!!
Imposter 0:53
Sus
:OOOOO me when the imposter is sus
Just randomly got you recomended. As some Pretentious fuck. I have somethings to say 1. Talk up. It sounds as your wispering Half the time. Looked thrue your other songs abot. While good yhe same problems arise. You dont seem very Confident while singing. You Either sing quietly or you sound like your speaking. 2. While this may be a nitpick. Try to do your "s" sound a bit softer. They come of really hard. 3. Try to fix a bit with your breath. While breathing is good. Try to do it a bit quieter. may just be dumb so take my Advice with a grain of salt. Ps. English is my second Language so sorry if i write Incoherently, or badly at all.
okay !!! to address some stuff !! i am using audacity to record - i am very bad at using audacity and it makes it hard to mix, my apologies !!! , this makes the s sound be so harsh as well. i have other people in my house across the hall from me !!! i dont want to bother them so i sing more quietly , sorry !!! i keep forgetting to take out the breathing noises !!!! i miss a lot of them sorry !!! i run out of breath very easily !!! your english is fine, i understand everything you said !!! thanks for your comment, i am trying my best to get better !!
@@asteria_melt time to answer your answers like the self proclaimed musician that I am. 1. The "s" sounds cant really be dealt with. So nothing i can say there. 2. BUT I can say something about your volume. You could ask the others if you could make noise at certain times. You could also try having your recording Session when nobodys there. 3. The breathing noises could be dealt with in other ways. One way could be to exercise. While horrible in the moment it could help with not losing your breath as easy. One thing you could also do is breathing to the music. Try to map out breathing points in the song. And adding a little flair to it. For example. If its a sad moment. Try adding a sigh disguising your breath. Even if it isn't in the original you're doing an cover after all. Sorry if this came of as pretentious im Just a person passionate in music trying to help :3.
okay !!!! you are very very helpful !!!! i live with a lot of people and i dont always feel like recording when they are gone (the whole house is empty like once a month lol) . but you gave me the courage to tell them i might be recording some times , thank you !!! your advice about the breathing is really good !!! i will try to pace it out better in the future thank you !!!!
nice work! could use some improvement on pitch control, but overall i admire the talent and passion! you'll make waves!
that means so much to me, thank you !!!!!!!
well said
The end credits in the episode Xiao reads Lowell's dead.
I was looking for an Iron Lotus cover by a not-AI, and this is a pretty good one! I can tell you aren't use to drawing those really high soft notes out, but you did a good job nonetheless. Lovely voice!
that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!!
While your singing does need more practice, this sounds like a very beautiful beginning. Please keep singing! ^^ 👍