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This is so cute! Using it for a short story!

Thanks....this really helped me ❤

This is actually so good for my short story!

This is really good for my story! It's a winter themed fantasy so adding some flames would be great!

We had to do this for english homework in 9th grade. Not cool lmao

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Beautiful

My prologue is a teaser adding a taste to this murder mystery

This kinda helped!

This video is exactly what I needed today

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I'm makng a show don't tell with the practice, here it goes! Practice 1#: Mark's head lowered with a tired grief look, expressing a very long and exausting day. Practice 2#: The cake glimmered by the light, his cold and delicious coverage taking all the place by it's smell. I tried to write something, but i'm only 10 years old, so hope you like it!

Hello,when creting the summry of the setting does it hve to be just one plce?

"endless horizon of ice" bro the ocean is right there😭😭💀

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All clear to me now this show don't tell writing tip. Thanks so much.

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I like it

You're still telling in your showing examples. One example is when you say don't tell us Sarah is angry and then immediately tell us Sarah's voice is trembling with anger instead of letting the reader infer on their own that she's angry based on what you show. Don't tell the reader a characters emotional state, let them see it in their behavior.

I just finished this book and your video has made the chips fall into place. Thank You.

I needed a quick, clear way to reenforce this teaching with my 5th graders. This is PERFECT. Thank you!

really needed this in order to become an alicorn

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Ooh, I have just found your channel and can I just say that it's AWESOME!!! Thank you very very much. Will definitely be using these ideas in my classroom :)

This is very helpful I like the idea of going from a small simple idea and expanding that in more detail.

im in middle school rn lol

this was very helpful!

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Now it makes sense.

Good vid

This is a really cool concept. Very useful and intuitive

can we get a better generator? Lafaias Aleanathem sounds stupid and unwieldy.

That's a clever way to drive engagement at the end. I'm Vonam Bannitlithar

Thanks for this technique

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I'm re-reading my final draft for approval with this playlist!

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Woah!! Omg these prompts were so creative!

Very usefull