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Cringe. 😬

The production is top notch.

Where is she ?????

Awful from the camera to the delivery

Great camwork!

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She is "famous", let her change everything she wants 😂😂😂 You are shameless

Ok the cream sauce got me

Hey there! Well done, sounds like you really meant what you read and the theme of blue throughout the poem was lovely. For reading out loud, I'd like to make a few suggestions: first, slow down. I know there's a rhythm to it, but the rhythm can be expressed in a slower tempo. I'd recommend finding a metronome or music that you can time yourself against. I'm asking you to slow down bc it is hard for me to make out some of your schemes when you run words together, and I think they're worth hearing. Second, talk your poem out conversationally and record it. What ideas would be important if it didn't have to rhyme? How much can you convince your audience that you do have this hope? There is an element of stage performance with slam poetry. Watch videos of actors reading letters or books excerpts. Finally, if you want to really evolve your delivery, memorize the poem. It will get your eyes up and mouth on the mic. You can play with it more when you know what's coming. Set ups can have punchlines in a sense, funny/dramatic/sad/ironic. You've written your words, but finding your true voice will take time. Good luck to you, I hope you continue doing this.

I talk too much 🤯

Great job!! I like your vest too:)

still one of my favorite poems and i cant wait for the day the world know it. Sanaa, if you see this, I hope you still writing bangers off wherever you went!! stivers still loves you !!💝

GRAAH STOP RAMBLING AND READ THE POEM (this is me)

Gentry Heflin for Poet Lauret 2024

it was iight

I adore this piece and the presentation. Excellent!

I can't believe this doesn't have any comments, Edd, you are true wordsmith. I am doing spoken word with my grade 9s and I showed them this video. Their faces when you said the line about Oscar the Grouch... Your poem is impactful.

Ohiooo

A really good poem that captivated the room and those who watch this youtube! Bravo Ayesha!

WOW!

Das my frend!!!

'Promo SM' 😇

Timestamps for the best moments, please!

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I will stand for you, comment for you, Like for you-even as the first, more is yet to come. Blessed be L,d

Love it, Byron! Spoke to me on a spiritual level. The rhymes, the phrasing, the analogies and habits. Thank you for sharing this! It made me able to look forward today.

Amazing! She did really well and spoke so passionately. She's very gorgeous aswell! Bravo!

Good poem

Are yall still doing shows through the winter? I can never find any info on the website, wanted to come out again :)

this person sounds like she can tell me her life story

You're gifted ! I love it

What powerful message, keep sharing your story :)

have they judge her voice or it could be something wrong

this is Christmas 🤶 time i can tell

she did well

Fabulous Jimmy…penultimate!

Great debut. Raw and real, connecting the dots through time into the modern day.

This awesome poem will be featured on Conrad's Corner on WYSO in December

This wonderful poem will be featured on Conrad's Corner in December!

Dayton!howdy?. Yeah~ awesome sharing!

Damn me too 👏👏👏

BILL! good shit

thus child 🧒 looks very young

TIM!

her voice is so powerful, it's not just a great poem but i felt so captivated by her performance

Megan is so freaking epic!

I remember doing this poem on Navy Pier in Chicago at the 2003 national poetry slam!

Awesome

This was her first time reading and she absolutely hits it out of the park! Great reading!