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Valerie Andi
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Добавлен 29 мар 2020
Hi! I'm Valerie, a student at the University of Pennsylvania studying business & film.
Email me: valerieandiw@gmail.com
Email me: valerieandiw@gmail.com
Reading the essay that got me into an Ivy League!
This is my common application essay that I used to apply to college! To the (few) people who have been asking me for this video, I'm sorry it took so long- I got a little too caught up in the visuals.
Please leave any questions you have in the comments & I'll answer them in my next video :)
Disclaimer: I am in no way saying this is the perfect or only example of a college application essay (because it definitely isn't) but it did "work" for me in that I think it played a decent role in helping me get into my dream schools. But, again, the college application process is so unpredictable you never know.
As promised, please check out these other amazing college essays if you're looking for mor...
Please leave any questions you have in the comments & I'll answer them in my next video :)
Disclaimer: I am in no way saying this is the perfect or only example of a college application essay (because it definitely isn't) but it did "work" for me in that I think it played a decent role in helping me get into my dream schools. But, again, the college application process is so unpredictable you never know.
As promised, please check out these other amazing college essays if you're looking for mor...
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How I Got Into UPenn Wharton! | My Stats, Extracurriculars & Advice
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The test scores, activities, and internships that got me into UPenn, USC, Georgetown, Stern & more! This is just my experience- honestly, each admissions officer has different reasons for accepting or rejecting every student. But I did remember these videos being helpful when I was applying to get a ballpark estimate on what schools I could be applying to. Here are the time stamps for the indiv...
can I get an essay reviewed
I am planning to apply to mechanical engineering at Upenn through ED considering I am an international student and already in grade 12 with no international,national level honours . Do I even have a chance?
My God youre drop dead
Can you give an example of the activity description you wrote on your CA? Thank you.
cute
Omg great essay that inspires mine.
❤❤❤❤
unrelated but girl you're so pretty?? i love your hair!
That was so beautiful and wholesome
Wow that was incredible !
Is that a personal statement?
YOUR NARRATION SWEPT ME OFF MY FEET.
About ehat topic should we write essay..? Ourself ?
Please how do you guys learn SAT and ACT?? buy book?
Hey hw can we connect on email?
Wow, I felt that writing an essay isn't as tough as the Costco essay (that level is too high for me) thanks~
Thank you!
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Great essay loved your diction and the editing made listening to someone reading their essay a lot more engaging. I’m feeling inspired so I’m gonna write an essay about a personal interest of mine. Good luck those of y’all applying to colleges. Let’s make it happen! 💪
Thank you so much for this!!!! I love it so so so much, thank you for sharing and CONGRATSSSSS <3
i wish i was smart:(
Excellent essay! You were short and to the point, which seems to be very unreachable by most people who write about their essay. You certainly accomplished a lot. But once you started reducing the pressure, you got more out of your experiences. U of Penn liked it!
Hello! I loved your essay and would extremely appreciate it if you could give me your email. My group and I are working on something and were wondering if you could help. You would very valuable to us. Please tell me what you think as soon as you can.
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Good essay. Creative editing. Very expressive reading. Well done. Blessings. Be safe. Be well. May all your ups and downs have only soft landings. ☮🕊☯💙💛💙💛💙💛🙏4 Ukraine.
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"Woah" is the only emotion I can muster up. This essay dealt with a perfect balance which, of course, lead you to a well-deserved admission to UPenn!! Good job, girl!!
oooh that last line though! so good!
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Thanks for sharing. It is a great inspiration point for others.
this Is sooo sooo good
Such a beautiful essay🥲💕
we love u!!!
Meanwhile my essay will be about my SA and being in and out of metal hospitals
This is the most humble brag essay and I respect you for it.
do you have your essay in pdf? :')
awesome! Refined thoughts!!
i genuinely think this video is a sign to me that i should stop carrying so much stress on myself, due to school. i’ve recently been struggling a lot with the balance between personal life and academics, and so when i heard what you wrote, not only did i think it was beautiful, i took it as a sign; a sign that i should allow myself to freely breathe in the environment i crave the most, which is feeling care-free. thank you, i will cherish this video forever.
this is so beautiful omfg
does anyone know which Common App prompt she used?
i want this to be me bruhh
Hi, I was wondering if there's any website or forum where peopke can read my application essays and give feedback
omg queen
Hi Valerie!thank you so much for the video, I am currently writing my essay for Cuny and I was wondering about the world limit you chose for this essay. Thank you!
Hi Valerie!thank you so much for the video, I am currently writing my essay for Cuny and I was wondering about the world limit you chose for this essay. Thank you!
it's actually so beauty, i'd read it if it was a book omg!⭐🤩
HOLY CRAP THAT ESSAY IS SO FREAKING GOOD WHY AM I LITERALLY CRYING OMG THIS IS SO GOOD
That was a beautiful essay and you’re beautiful too
Who taught you how to write so beautifully 🥹 please teach me hehe