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Treeranaaurous, because I have never played at the grass starter also I like to pun

I dont which starter Pokemon to pick cuz all of them are cute😍

The redraw actually is amazing huge improvement! Keep it up ❤👏

i really like your Ganyu! very elegant

Absolutely love thissss

I thought it turned out so cool looking and loved the green highlights!

Stories that are in the same genre are bound to share terminology and concepts, in copyright terms youll be completely okay i believe, but if you wnat to make your story more original id say focus more on world building and subverting some of the concepts you have right now along with drawing inspirations from similar books that have concepts youre interested in

I disagree, the final result was so cool looking to me! I’m wondering how to do this experiment myself, bc when I color pick in Procreate on my iPad it just picks the gray version that shows on the screen, and I have to actually turn it back to color just to pick the color 😭

After going down a worldbuilding rabbit hole for the past few hours seeing something like this is kind of refreshing. Just saying this to help your sanity as I tell this to anyone who does writing (and to myself). You should write for yourself. Always. About yourself, about things you know and to tell stories that you want to tell. This should always be first and foremost. Whether the story is "good enough" or is able to "see the light of day" is something that comes after the first hurdle of actually putting pen on paper. Writing drafts and making ideas are two processes and both of them can be really fun! If you're worried about copyright/similarities then you can always ask for second opinion from the people around you. There are also so many other things to look at before even looking at originality of concept (tho that's still pretty important if you want to get published :')) Personally speaking? Despite no longer being in my potterhead phase (esp w all the things going on w the franchise and whatnot - I could go on a rant about how so many childhood franchises are getting pwned and it makes me sad) I would be happy to read your writing simply by the fact that you're so enthusiastic and happy about what you've made! Hearing people talk about things that they're excited about makes me happy :) I'll leave this last bit of the yapfest for words of encouragement. I hope whatever you decide to do with your piece is something that you'll be proud of and wishing the best of luck to your writing/drawing journey! If I manage to finish one of my many projects before this gets dropped I'll be disappointed (I never finish my work bahahaha)

sounds like a super fascinating story and world! would totally read it!

painting cloth in cell shading be like: "it looks good to me, but its well done?"

your proportion ratio is really good on this one!, and the rendering also shows how much thought you put into it ! also 18 hours is a loooot of time , i wouldn't know how to stay focused that long on a single piece, even on several sittings haha! im sure as you practice more, streamline the process and learn what simplification of real life works for you youll get way faster at it!. keep it up, cheers!.

I'm in the traditional publishing sphere, and we have these things called "comp titles". If you want an agent to read your pitch, you need to compare it to other successful works in your genre. I'm in the strange position of worrying that my books aren't SIMILAR ENOUGH to other books!

fun video as always! youll grow in no time ! theres just something so relatable/down to earth about your videos!

You should have more subs

It's really good 😊😊

First: I love your story idea! It would definitely be something I’d have an obsession over and I find the world building really interesting! I would’ve took that book off the shelf and if you never mentioned in was inspired off Harry Potter I would’ve never guessed. I personally love magic academy’s since I grew up with Harry Potter and little witch academia! I would love to see how unique and fun the hierarchy school idea could be! And second: I’ve been also struggling with a story idea which I’ve barely started but I feel like I’m just writing toilet bound Hanako kun 2.0. The basic premise is that a girl named Charlotte who had grown up with a completely different childhood than her older sister. She was pampered and treated gently while her sister was subjected to harsh parenting and a rough childhood. She grew up knowing that she will never be as wise and knowledgeable as her sister since she never got the pain and experience her sister got. She became obsessed with being smart and knowledgeable but always fell short of the top student because of her low art grade. That all changed when she met the ghost of a young nun in training named Rosabella who was pushed down a well by a mysterious Jane Doe. The ghost was an amazing artist and she offered to help Charlotte with her art grade if she helped Rosabella pass on by helping her find the regret she had before dying. They also like fall in love lol. It’s good to know other people have been struggling with this mindset when it comes to writing. As someone who doesn’t have much writer friends it’s nice to know that I’m not the only one going through this.

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Nice ! Keep up the work

If 50 shades of gray counts - your story counts

Awesome !!

The story I'm currently writing about is one I plan on turning into an animated series of my own. The only issue with that is, even though I haven't necessarily gotten too deep into the plot and have just a rough idea, I am a little bit worried that the plot might be slightly too similar to the anime The Promised Neverland (which, granted, has been a huge inspiration to me). The basic story goes like this. There is a big scientific organization which has a secret project in which they are trying to do human testing to figure out if the 'soul' is connected to the brain and if it actually genuinely exists. Basically, the organization has designed this secret facility in which they keep almost a human farm area for the humans to live in. The story follows a group of a few children inside of the facility who are trying to figure out how to escape it and they're trying to figure out the truth of the facility and why the experiments are being performed (as it is never taught to them). So I'm js wondering if the story is too similar..? The characters are almost nothing alike in terms of ages, appearances, etc. However, I am still just wondering if it is possibly too similar to TPM??? 😭

Omg yessss! Whenever I draw guys they end up looking like girls and Idk how to fix it 😭 Also new sub! <3

Her : is my story too much like HP ?? Me : 6:05 the Law of Cycle ? Madoka Kaname ?? Serious comment : this is also something I struggled with as a writer. Because obviously you're inspired by what you like. I can also write a comparison that will make it look like my story is just like Kill la Kill, Divergent (which I actually hate) or Deltarune. Apparently, there's a lot of similarities with Psychopass, which I then pruposely didn't watch to not get inspired, contrarly to Heathers, which I purposely watched to get inspired, but probably noone would any similarity with my story. I think the key is to be inspired by multiple very different things. You can't control what you'll be inspired by but you can control what you watch/read/play. Yes, my story takes elements from a lot of other works and so in turn, there's hardly any one overarching inspiration. So my first tip is to get inspired by more than one thing. As you said, as you write, your characters become themselves, and stray away from their original inspiration. Sometimes, even subtle changes in theme and style can make a BIG difference between 2 similar plots (Ring of Power vs Frieren). Frieren is a completly different approach to the very classic high fantasy. Tbh I feel like "the feeling" of something is more important than the actual plotpoints. By having a different vibe, 2 stories with similarities will be very different. Meanwhile, a lot of shows are labelled "gravity falls rip-offs" because despite their different plots, they alledgedly want to emulate the same feeling (I haven't watch any of these so idk). It might not be obvious to detect, but at some point, your story gets its own identity and that's what's important. Also, there's so much existing works. It's like trying to avoid cliches. "oh, that's a cliche, I should do the opposite... Oh... the opposite is also a cliche, damn." Everything is a cliche at this point, especially when it comes to characters. I don't think you should fear the copyright hammer, with all the japanese isekais that are all the same, a few similarities won't do anything. Also, my highschool chemestry teacher actually wrote a HP-like book series. I haven't read them. But, apparently, it was the same vibe. So, I don't think you should worry. PS: good quality videos, how tf do you have less subs than me ??

I think you should just go for it!!!!!! I am immediately hooked by your summary!!!!

This video is wayyy too underrated. It’s crazy. We must emphasise how little attention u have.

I want to emphasize how nice this video is! hahah, cheers, and keep it up!

At the end of the day, fiction is always gonna be informed by other fiction, intentionally or not. The mere idea of a special magical school or hidden magical worlds are definitely not new, and while the Harry Potter comparisons will inevitability be drawn... I feel like most people in your target audience wont care or take it that seriously. Even from what little you’ve described with the world and characters involved the vibe feels completely different, and as a Br*tish "person" I feel like that setting was a big part of what tied the original together, so not having that influence is going to inherently change the feeling of the story just a little bit. All that said, please make this story, your artstyle is gorgeous and I'm sure whatever you make will be fantastic. I also completely sympathise with your frustration with book 5 lmao. It really feels like editorial went hands off as time went on and massively regretted it in the long run. Its easily like 200 pages longer than it needed to be.

I'd say... Considering that you seem to have given this A LOT more thought about this than JK Rowling herself... (Who actually isn't really that "original" herself, not that "originality" ultimately matters...look up both "A Wizard of Earthsea" and "The Worst Witch" to name a few examples.) Assuming your work doesn't have JK Rowling's hints of transphobia, anti-Semitism, and/or racism... (She outed herself as a transphobe back in 2019 and has kept going downhill ever since, now also saying she likes the book Lolita... Yes THAT one about the adult man who grooms and abuses a little girl, and describes it as a "tragic love story". So, now I can add "'pdf-file'/nonce supporter" of Rowling's "sins". 🤮) I'd say your work would even SURPASS hers! ^_^b

first: ALL work is derivative, if you look deep down enough second: sounds cool, yeah! and third: you can always change terms or things enough that it wont be a problem. the important part is the structure and actual story, so if you change superficial things it wont matter, since the story YOU want to tell is unchanged. and lastly, you never know until you try, and you'll most likely never succeed before you fail. so the only real thing left is to try. this first step of getting your idea out there to an audience is the first and really commendable step! Cheers and keep it up, you got this!

its always a treat when you render them, so lovely!. Also, all those years of keeping at it have paid off! cheers!

these are all so nicely put togheter. lovely!

you'll advance so FAST with this mentality! even faster if you manage to "not care" about the result since its practice after all not a finished piece. and from what ive gathered, more, quicker, and directed drawings are better than single, slower refined pieces to practice. since you want to practice only the thing you are practicing (in this case differences between male and female) ive had this problem many times, luckily i have learned to give me some breathing room and i can practice longer and even have fun while doing it! also, something that has helped me a lot is merging practice with what i want to do, put characters in hard perspectives, on colorful scenes, emphasizing the part of the body im practicing on the composition, etc. keep up the good work, cheers!

You are going to advance SO FAST with that mentality. if you can get to not care about the results you ll advance EVEN faster. because the result is not important, whats important is that you learn something from drawing it, even if its just a tiny bit of experience! its the reason they say doing several "quick" drawings as practices is better than losing hours and hours on one, since in this aspect volume beats quality (because you are practicing to achieve a quality level you dont have). i`ve had this struggle with many things, but upon convincing myself that its IMPOSSIBLE to do everything perfect, EVER, and specially on first-ish tries. its like a huge weight lifted from you and lets you practice more and sometimes even have fun while doing it ! keep up the great work!.

If you're wanting to draw men, I suggest starting with just basic real life studies (photos, screenshots, etc) However, I personally find it better to break up photo studies with some style studies as well. A good source for that might be to look at Bruce Timm, the guy behind the Batman animated series character designs. It's an exaggerated style but it helps to understand what is and isnt necessary to detail in representing male or female Otherwise, have fun with it. It gets better when you compare say the 10th or 20th sketch to the first few and see some actual progress

Very awesome :0

I see video, I click. Good job on dealing with your weaknesses!

YOU SHOULD TOTALLY GO FOR IT!!!! Seriously, if I saw your story at any book store, I would buy it, NO hesitation!!! The magic system and lore is fascinating, and there's enough of your own elements that I wouldn't see it as any sort of ripoff.

I’m not sure I can help with your problem as I don’t think I’m your target demographic but I can relate to the struggle. Even as a fan fiction writer I have the urge to make things more original and make sure I’m striking that perfect balance of creative yet recognizable.

All these redesigns are real nice, I really like your work But I do have a gripe, super minor nitpick nothing wrong with the design In the Dori redesign (I actually really love this one), her headwear is super vacuumed sealed on her head and her head looks kinda flat because it looks like you drew over her head outline base Realistically (I didn’t want to say that I just can’t think of anything else) her headwear would hover a little over her head (not literally) Think like a sandwich (?) n layers Think her head, hair, then whatever goes on her head. It goes on top so you’d see it a little, if that makes sense Anyways just a super minor nitpick I really love the Dori design and the reasoning And also correct me if I am wrong about anything

Thank you for the advice it kinda help me with my silly oc story! I still don't know how to write properly for my sometimes animation or generic homework like that because i suck at it, so this advice is really great!

Awesome!

The way you draw hair looks so good!!!!!!

The redraw is so beautiful ❤️

I wouldn't go with lolita just because it's a little too childish, but I would want to keep her mature. I would prefer some of the colors though you have in your design. I think it would've been awesome if they took ideas from way back when Avon or Mary Kay started out as companies for women to sell products such as perfumes.

THANK YOU for saying that about Yanfei. And she's what, 16?

Absolutely obsessed with dori

Your Emilie looks so great, I'd lose the 50/50 trying to get her anytimee

I lovee your Emilie designn

I really love the Emilie one! I love the green and purple combo...