Let's Review Crap Writing
Let's Review Crap Writing
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Star Wars The Acolyte Ep1: A Script Written with Crayons
Disney Star Wars has never been so bad. I'd take ten Reys over what ever this is...
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The American Society of Magical "Knees that Grow": Actual Divisive Trash
Просмотров 3,7 тыс.День назад
As a crap-writing connoisseur, I have never seen a film so vile in messaging. Now, I understand the premise of a black supporting character being a trope within the media and the satirical take it could produce, however, this wasn't satire, it was full on messaging disguised as a "comedy". Not cool bro. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837
Rebel Moon Part 2: They Mooned Even Hardlier
Просмотров 4,7 тыс.28 дней назад
Rebel Moon Part 2 - The Scargiver is somehow worse than Rebel Moon Part 1 - The Moonering. Zack Snyder has absolutely zero writing skills, which make me wonder whether ChatGPT wrote it for him.... Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837
The 2020s Part II: The Summer of Mostly Peaceful
Просмотров 1,1 тыс.Месяц назад
The 2020's have so far been a decade of utter stupidity. In this instant, destroying own cities because the media wanted you to. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837
The 2020s: Descent into Madness (Part I)
Просмотров 3,3 тыс.2 месяца назад
The 2020s is a decade of utter lunacy. For most, it would have been the time of kicking back and cracking some cold ones, but the virus from China had other plans, and so did our elected officials who thought the best way to deal with it, was to cause societal and economic meltdowns. Greatest time to be alive. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837
The Story Behind the Cringe of Power
Просмотров 20 тыс.3 месяца назад
The Rings of Power not only cost Amazon Studios 1 billion dollars, but it also went down in history as the biggest mistake Jeff Bezos ever made after not signing a prenup. So here's the story of how it got made. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837 #amazon #ringsofpower #lordoftherings #tolkien
Random Ancient Aliens: The Founding Fathers and Alien America
Просмотров 1,8 тыс.3 месяца назад
Ah yes, it's Random Ancient Aliens again from the History Channel. It turns out the United States of America was founded because of aliens. I guess that means it wasn't the Revolutionary War or ancient philosophies, it was just aliens. Kinda makes sense...
The Dying to Death of Disney [Complete]
Просмотров 4,7 тыс.3 месяца назад
The once-great Disney has fallen. They had won it all with Pixar, Lucas Films, Marvel Studios, and everything else they bought, but slowly Disney began to realise it was not good enough, as lecturing the audience and directly insulting them was a better financial decision than just making good content. Disney sucks. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837 #disney
The Dying to Death of Disney Part II
Просмотров 4,4 тыс.3 месяца назад
Welcome audience to the second half of the Disney disaster. It only gets worse for them... Watch part I here: ruclips.net/video/4LgDtZ4MkXI/видео.html Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837 #disney
The Dying to Death of Disney Part I
Просмотров 7 тыс.4 месяца назад
Disney was the greatest of all time, but all that is good must come to an end; even if it is entirely unnecessary and brought on by themselves. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837
Rebel Moon: The Most Cringe Film Ever Produced
Просмотров 11 тыс.4 месяца назад
Netflix did it again with yet another disaster of a film for the modern audience. Rebel Moon has got to be the worst movie produced to date, even worse than Battlefield Earth and Disney Star Wars combined. The "Strong Female of Power" trope has to end, it is pure hellfire cringe. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837 #rebelmoon #netflix #netflixmovies #starwars
The 2023 Entertainment Disaster Awards
Просмотров 17 тыс.5 месяцев назад
2023 has been a year of the worst entertainment. From Disney to the BBC, all the way to Canada's Global TV, everything has been terrible. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837
The BBC: Dirty Dirty Smear Merchants
Просмотров 75 тыс.5 месяцев назад
Ah yes, the publically funded BBC. The haters of indigenous populations and corrupters of entertainment. If the BBC had a leg to stand on when lecturing the general public, they'd need a crane to lift them out of that hole they dug themselves. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837 #bbc #bbcstudios #elonmusk #fakenews #uk
Doctor Who Wild Blue Yonder: Must Get That Representation No Matter What
Просмотров 6 тыс.6 месяцев назад
It's episode 2 of the 60th anniversary special and wow, this was actually a really entertaining episode ruined by the worst of "diversity and inclusion". What a terrible time line we live in. #doctorwho #davidtennant #catherinetate #bbc
Doctor Who The Star Beast: Ask Those Pronouns You Bigot!
Просмотров 15 тыс.6 месяцев назад
Wow, Doctor Who is an utter dumpster fire of a show. They even managed to get David Tennant to come back for the Star Beast and all they did was lecture him on the modern audience. What a complete and utter failure. Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=94887837 #doctorwho #bbc #starbeast #davidtennant #catherinetate
Robyn Hood Ep.8: It's Over
Просмотров 6 тыс.6 месяцев назад
Robyn Hood Ep.8: It's Over
Robyn Hood Ep.7: You Get What You Deserve
Просмотров 5 тыс.6 месяцев назад
Robyn Hood Ep.7: You Get What You Deserve
Robyn Hood Ep6: The Best Show on TV Right Now
Просмотров 6 тыс.7 месяцев назад
Robyn Hood Ep6: The Best Show on TV Right Now
Robyn Hood Ep.5: It's An Unstoppable Crime Wave
Просмотров 5 тыс.7 месяцев назад
Robyn Hood Ep.5: It's An Unstoppable Crime Wave
Robyn Hood Ep4: It Is The Best Comedy Of 2023
Просмотров 6 тыс.7 месяцев назад
Robyn Hood Ep4: It Is The Best Comedy Of 2023
Why Ahsoka Absolutely Sucked
Просмотров 4,9 тыс.7 месяцев назад
Why Ahsoka Absolutely Sucked
Robyn Hood Ep3: It Just Keeps Getting Worse
Просмотров 6 тыс.7 месяцев назад
Robyn Hood Ep3: It Just Keeps Getting Worse
Robyn Hood Episode 2: Totally Ripping Off Trailer Park Boys Now
Просмотров 8 тыс.8 месяцев назад
Robyn Hood Episode 2: Totally Ripping Off Trailer Park Boys Now
Ahsoka Ep8 PissTake: It's Like Graduating Clown College
Просмотров 7 тыс.8 месяцев назад
Ahsoka Ep8 PissTake: It's Like Graduating Clown College
Robyn Hood Ep1: It's As Bad As You'd Expect
Просмотров 15 тыс.8 месяцев назад
Robyn Hood Ep1: It's As Bad As You'd Expect
Ahsoka Ep7 PissTake: It Just Gets Crapper
Просмотров 4,2 тыс.8 месяцев назад
Ahsoka Ep7 PissTake: It Just Gets Crapper
Ahsoka Ep6 PissTake: Crayon Munching Plot Convenience
Просмотров 2,1 тыс.8 месяцев назад
Ahsoka Ep6 PissTake: Crayon Munching Plot Convenience
Ahsoka Ep5 PissTake: General Green Butt Lady Tells Everyone She's a General
Просмотров 4,2 тыс.8 месяцев назад
Ahsoka Ep5 PissTake: General Green Butt Lady Tells Everyone She's a General
Ahsoka Ep4 PissTake: Totally Incompetent Bad Guys vs The Stunningly Brave
Просмотров 2,1 тыс.9 месяцев назад
Ahsoka Ep4 PissTake: Totally Incompetent Bad Guys vs The Stunningly Brave
Ahsoka Ep3. PissTake: Space Karens
Просмотров 8 тыс.9 месяцев назад
Ahsoka Ep3. PissTake: Space Karens

Комментарии

  • @cameronjones8641
    @cameronjones8641 23 минуты назад

    "Thats impossibru" had me in absolute tears. This was simpmy the best break down i have ever seen. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

  • @shadowpapito
    @shadowpapito 2 часа назад

    You are That Man!!! This video is game changing! This is ALL BAD! I had to check to makes sure: 4 years as his Personal Assistant!!!!!

  • @M0j0J0j0
    @M0j0J0j0 3 часа назад

    I've seen TONS AND TONS of these posts but this is the BEST ❤😂

  • @majorgear1021
    @majorgear1021 4 часа назад

    “Somehow, the Matriarchy returned.” - Poe.

  • @majorgear1021
    @majorgear1021 4 часа назад

    This show makes the SW Christmas Special look good.

  • @vdanger7669
    @vdanger7669 4 часа назад

    Scissor me with all your Force.

  • @Ys_Guy
    @Ys_Guy 5 часов назад

    I keep telling people the same thing about hitler and art school rejection...

  • @Peter_Morris
    @Peter_Morris 5 часов назад

    Wait. This is set only 100 years before the Galactic Civil War? I can’t deal with this level of imbecilitude anymore. I’ll be back when Disney sells Star Wars to a local model railroad club or something.

  • @Ys_Guy
    @Ys_Guy 5 часов назад

    somebody killed Trinity to death quote is hilarious😂😂😂😂

  • @AJS-zn3cj
    @AJS-zn3cj 5 часов назад

    You silly man...This wasn't written with crayons. This was fingerpainted on the wall with their own shit.

  • @jesserussell9286
    @jesserussell9286 6 часов назад

    Chill out with the yelling you spaz lol

  • @monickalynn4365
    @monickalynn4365 7 часов назад

    It was so lousy I couldn't look away! Ridiculous lol

  • @AncientRylanor69
    @AncientRylanor69 7 часов назад

    h 😂

  • @rolfstuh
    @rolfstuh 8 часов назад

    Spoiler, twins = one turns to the darkside and the other to the light side of the force. Yeah its the plot of leia got twins.... Just ripped of for this bullshit of a show. A crime against humanity

  • @KeytarArgonian
    @KeytarArgonian 8 часов назад

    Squidman > ‘don’t believe your own eyes’ Squidman > ‘I saw her die so it must be true’ ‘My sister isn’t dead!’ Squidman > ‘I know, I believe you.’

  • @dewulfe9913
    @dewulfe9913 9 часов назад

    I can't wait until the chaos that next week's episode is going to bring...as long as Disney is going to ruin this franchise (because that's all it is to them), I'm gonna roll up with popcorn to see the Mouse take a beating 👍

  • @michelecastellotti9172
    @michelecastellotti9172 9 часов назад

    Reinforced steel doors? Oh nonono, you silly little man, those were reinforced, 30 cm thick DOUBLE *DURASTEEL* walls. You know the material star wars ships use that even when they are plummeting to the ground from orbit doesn't fucking burn even if surrounded by plasma because of the friction? Yeah, that material is CANONICALLY better than TITANIUM at resisting heat and yet a lightsaber xan effortlessly melt trough it. These series are so dogshit

  • @jonmetcalf6565
    @jonmetcalf6565 10 часов назад

    To give an ounce of credit to the writers, at least they went on and ate the crayons after they finished writing in order to help the environment.

  • @Dark_Snider
    @Dark_Snider 10 часов назад

    Why did they put a shitty mop on the " diverse woman of color" head. ?

  • @Dark_Snider
    @Dark_Snider 10 часов назад

    I heard they are going to make Yoda a degenerate diverse character. I can't wait!!! This is the best Star Wars EVER!!

  • @paulmurgatroyd6372
    @paulmurgatroyd6372 10 часов назад

    I'm sure the Disney gay offensive will prove successful next time, or maybe the time after that. It's supposed to be written for children, not by children.

  • @theangrybarman384
    @theangrybarman384 10 часов назад

    ...melted fucking crayons at that ☝️

  • @CarlWheatley-wi2cl
    @CarlWheatley-wi2cl 11 часов назад

    The more you look at these Disney scripts and writing the worse it gets. A running theme. You realize they just haven't thought things through. Thinking things through to develop coherence doesn't seem important to them. Very odd.

  • @grantmiller6570
    @grantmiller6570 13 часов назад

    Why was the prison ship being flown by a pair of fucking chairs, christ, the autopilot on the movie Airplane was more credible.

  • @sharksbreath7
    @sharksbreath7 13 часов назад

    I'm pretty sure this show only exists becsuse Lesby Headland wants to play scissors with Amandla.

  • @CroydonTramp
    @CroydonTramp 13 часов назад

    NEVER STOP. You deserve millions of subs. Best on RUclips. Thanks .

  • @rl2204
    @rl2204 13 часов назад

    haha

  • @testdep
    @testdep 14 часов назад

    lol I literally d1ed laughing when jedy kids meditated on NStream pipeline 🤣👍 Your writing is soo amazing, it's too good for Hollyweird and too good for planet Earth. Truly refined sense of humor from another galaxy! PS. Back in the 90s me and my momma also watched Sunset Beach TV series in Moscow, Russia. The show was quite a hit 😆

  • @genin69
    @genin69 14 часов назад

    Lesbian Headlamp def doesnt have dirt of the sith lord KK to get her and her wife loads of money for making this intergalactic ejaculated horse shit

  • @krax1121
    @krax1121 19 часов назад

    "But very scary bad guys - who may or may not be diverse..." Put a fork in me. I'm done! Brilliant, as always, sir.😂😅😂

  • @vskane
    @vskane 21 час назад

    This is the best up and coming pop culture (and more) channel on RUclips. I’m calling it. A little bit of traction from one of the big channels and LRCW will explode. I’ve never done a superchat (got kids) but we need to superchat bomb Open Bar. We need more of this creator.

  • @jaywhite8659
    @jaywhite8659 22 часа назад

    The first women to sank a multi Billion corporation Kathleen Kennedy! Bye bye Disney! 👋

  • @dfoleyusa
    @dfoleyusa 23 часа назад

    The ActualShite

  • @Jiraiyashouse666
    @Jiraiyashouse666 23 часа назад

    "Space Floyd and Darth Chauvin"😂😂😂😂

  • @Scottadamsfan3481
    @Scottadamsfan3481 День назад

    If someone is murdered and you are accused of it but you were literally at your job on a space ship light years away don’t the Jedi realize you have an alibi ?

    • @majorgear1021
      @majorgear1021 4 часа назад

      You’re putting more thought into it than the writers did.

    • @Scottadamsfan3481
      @Scottadamsfan3481 3 часа назад

      @@majorgear1021 of course I’m just surprised no one else has pointed that out

  • @unitron2005
    @unitron2005 День назад

    14:53 Holy sheet, someone who actually has a grip on what's going on!

  • @drewtwon7374
    @drewtwon7374 День назад

    Cancel your subscription or you’re paying for this crap even if you don’t watch it.

  • @mxvega1097
    @mxvega1097 День назад

    It's like a zen koan: A murder mystery with no mystery A thriller with no thrill A sci fi fantasy with no science A grand sweeping epic with very small sets And action sequences with people who can't move properly. Or run. And how does distance work in this fkn show? Trayvon, pet, and barman seem to get across the galaxy in mere minutes to see VonQueesha. The space ships look like they're on strings, which makes me nostalgic for Space 1999. There's just no context. Meh. I also cannot wrap my head around Stenberg as a diversity rep. As a foreigner she looks 100% Californian to me.

  • @michaelschroeck2254
    @michaelschroeck2254 День назад

    1:40 hey!!!!! My pants aren’t crusty. I wash them regularly. Well. My mom does. I live in her basement. I PAY RENT!!!!! Sometimes.

  • @michaelschroeck2254
    @michaelschroeck2254 День назад

    Well to be honest no one asked for the A-Team or Seinfeld but those were kick ass shows. BUT Disney Star Wars ( and Disney+ content in general) sucks hairy donkey dicks. Writers are inserting themselves into situations they have no business being in. If the she hulk marketing was “ we are purposely going to shit in Ben and make everyone cringe” then watching it in that light , it works have worked. But people tuned in to see a genuine attempt at a good she hulk story, which is possible to do, but not anymore. Writers: want to do self inserts? Make a story about yourself within your own realm. Not a beloved franchise. Quit using popular media to throw in your own baggage.

  • @7thZeppelin
    @7thZeppelin День назад

    The American Society of Purely Socioeconomic Issues

  • @swedishbob_7315
    @swedishbob_7315 День назад

    Well this is the best review so far👍

  • @DeltaCodeGames
    @DeltaCodeGames День назад

    Wow! Watching your video is like chewing 5 gum, what a rush! Can't wait for the next episode!

  • @drechenaux
    @drechenaux День назад

    I think you're right- this does look like an old people daily soap wearing a Start Wars skinsuit

  • @whos-the-stiff
    @whos-the-stiff День назад

    So the bar owner abandoned his child and his damaged business so he could instantly teleport across the galaxy for a 10 second identity parade ? Great writing.

  • @cz7425
    @cz7425 День назад

    The “Ahh yes…” just nourishes my soul. ❤

  • @kthxpls
    @kthxpls День назад

    Do you guys remember that Gillette commercial? About "toxic masculinity"? I didn't bought any product made by Gillette since that commercial they made! Years that I don't watch new movies and years that I don't read new comics, it is this simple, when these people get in control and start pushing their agendas down your throat, the only thing a man needs to do is walk away and never come back. It bothers me the number of men that still watch these tv shows and movies, go do something else with your time, lift some heavy shit, go for a walk, start reading or write your own book or comic, instead of giving your time and resources to these woke garbage.

    • @whos-the-stiff
      @whos-the-stiff День назад

      Exactly the same here. Haven't bought Gilette since and Star Wars is in the same banned basket.

  • @LordRollo
    @LordRollo День назад

    Best review ever...thanks for the yuks

  • @antimatta8714
    @antimatta8714 День назад

    There is clearly zero tolerance for any - logic, common sense, testosterone, or even straight white men in Disney Star Wars...Hence it's colossal and failure. Apparently even in a galaxy far far away, you still can't escape from the woke mind virus that makes people obsessed with box ticking and virtue signalling.😂

  • @PunksterOS
    @PunksterOS День назад

    I am very much looking forward to your review after the events of Episode 3, I mean, yes Ep. 2 as well, but Ep. 3 is where _"the fun begins."_