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@@reubenjames2273 Thank you. We appreciate the support.

A thirst for vengeance doesn't exactly bring our the best in people.

@ScorchedEarthRevenge I think it's the lack of real justice that does it.

Thanks for the feedback. There are definitely elements I could have shortened with a bit of hand waving. Like manipulating Chelsea into doing the Cuck scene. The next few I have lined up will come in at around 30 mins. What is your idea of an ideal story length? I've seen some as short as 15 minutes.

I was pretty conflicted on that point. In an earlier revision, he took her back, and they had two kids. Then we fast forwarded 5 years, and he suspects her of cheating again. He follows her on a business trip, expecting to catch her. The only problem is that she isn't cheating. They both then realise (too late) that the trust iin their relationship might never be recovered. They stay together for the kids, but it's like a business arrangement until the kids go to college. Then they separate amicably.

@bc-xt4ok Are you volunteering :-). What I was hoping would come through is that he desperately wanted to know every detail. This wasn't directly for the divorce proceedings, it was for the infidelity baseball. If he had a lot of detail, he could catch her out on her lies, forcing her to tell the truth. Plus, if you get through part 2, you'll hear him say the video wasn't admissible in court. It's her confession that was instrumental because it was recorded after she became aware of the recording devices (implied consent). Not deflecting your criticism here. If these elements didn't come through, that's on me. I genuinely appreciate the thoughtful feedback and I'll use it in future.

The point I was making was he said he finally found proof,like he never watched them on video beforehand,don't get me wrong the story was very good with allot of good detail's,and with a tweak or two it could be perfect,just saying

Oh, I get you. I meant that he found everything he suspected would be in the phone. Not that the evidence in the phone confirmed his suspicions about her infidelity. He was just looking for extra details to use when he confronted her.