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I think it's okay, but I have a concrete and specific advice: Learn more harmony. I've noted you wanted to create a classical-modern style, but it still sounds like something that tries to be something new, but using mostly very classical harmony, or pop-like harmony. I heavily recommend you to read the book "Harmony of the XX century" by Vincent Persichetti, that books introduce the concepts that you may want to use in those pieces, like quartal chords, clusters, negative harmony, etc. Also, I recommend you to search for concepts like: Non-Functional harmony, atonalism, polytonalism, dodecaphonism, bartok's axes, pitch class-set, and neo-riemann theory, but principally bartok axes and non functional harmony, because those are the principal things I use to compose, and I feel that the style you want to represent is similar to mine.

It sounds a bit odd

En que te has inspirado para componer esta pieza??

is this twelve-tone technique?

too fast, sounds like you're trying to not waste anyone's time by presenting as much asap

Me ha gustado esa melancolía inicial y ese incesante juego de escalas y modulaciones tonales...

Let's hear the rest of it (and the rest of the Sonata).

much better than the last attempt! still some minor discrepancies like bar 30, parallel octaves in middle and bass voice. but still a much better attempt at fugue!!

Ouch the jumps

Обязательно переложу это на гитару.

Хочу такое найти в переложении для гитары, но мне кажется это сложно играть из ща темпа.

Time signature should be 4/4 and triplets for left hand

Ragtime Mozart.

This is an amazing work

I love this brother!

Muy guapo David🎉🎉🎉

Was this inspired by Chopin's Winter Wind Etude? Great piece.

Beautiful 🎉🎉🎉

sounds great!

Really nice! I have some suggestions tho The waltz part has beautiful melody but it's missing something, you know, some decorations. Take Chopin scherzo 2 (or maybe 3) for example, you can add some cheeky little RH run during the pauses in the melody, or add some sort of pedal notes (like Chopin scherzo 1) and ornaments. You can even add a second voice. That way, the music would be more interesting!

Very nice brother!

Me ha gustado muchoooo

Chopin 2nd Sonata, 2nd Movement .. right ? nice...

This is the most difficult work of Chopin.

Was expecting the charlie brown theme to start playing

Me encanto, muy rítmico ,😊

Nice work. Inspiration from Come Sweet, May by Mozart?

If you speed up the video 2x it sounds a lot better ☝🏼

REMINDER: The menuet in this sonata actually is the one in my first sonata (No.1 in B-flat minor) too.

This is so good! You would have fit in with composers in the classical period

Amazing piece!

Came back to this. Very nice!

You make "classical music" but a lot of your recent compositions sounds more like pop or rock. It's not criticism, just an observation.

i really really like this piece.

not really a fugue but definitely fugal. also too many parallel 5ths and 4ths, try to avoid when possible. but otherwise, i like it

Fantastic ! Actually the initial rhythmic motif is very Indian.

what does phrygian mean

Like it!

It's good. But I think it's more appropriate to call it "F Dorian" Than "F minor".

Good piece🎉

Nice challenge! In my opinion, you've done well on the tonal relationship of the fugue's subject. Unless this piece is intended to break traditional fugue compositional conventions, I think we need to be careful about the rules in fugue (detailed rules have been mentioned a bit by others, so I'll omit them).

0:38 be careful, that parallel fourths spoil the piece a bit. Edit: There are actually many parallel fifths and fourths in this piece, so you can consider checking the harmony and counterpoint rules.

this is beautiful.. great job??!!?!

Genial.

"Transposed"

F minor*

Who is performing? Sounds like Zimerman

Любимая тема этой сонаты👍

😊 muy bien David!!

Fenomenal ❤