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Great Story. Good job..❤😊

Do this story has text version?

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Шикарная история, хотелось слушать её дальше и дальше, и что бы она не заканчивалась🤗😇 а продолжение будет этой истории😉☺

The way this ended, will there be an update?

Shsnnayes❤😊

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Name

So sad.😞

Beautiful story❤❤❤

Shannayes❤😊

I love it. Great job ❤😊

Name???

There are many language switches (Spanish accent or something), halts, hesitations, bits of random noises. Missing or skipping events. I expected more from these guys.

What a interesting story, even though the word "wifey" confused me. Are they boyfriends or nah 10 years in the future? 😄😊😅

FOR GODS SAKE, STOP THAT DOT DOT DOT! It works in writing in the form of ... but it's totally ridiculus in spoken form. It destroys the whole story.

Lust not love. You loved your husband, you built your life together , grew together. You wanted to “f” his boss. If I had a dollar for every chance I had to cheat Id be a millionaire . STOP NORMALIZING CHEATING. Just leave him if you cant be faithful or have an open relationship but don’t cheat and not with someone he knows. And don’t tell me I’m slut shaming. If I was him Id be waiting for the Boss to cheat with the next guy.

This is the 3rd page I've found this story on. The robotic voice is a little creepy, but it doesn't skip bits of sentences.

Honey not be rude or any thing but did you steal the story form manhwa princess 😮😅 cause they both sound the same and have same name characters 😅😂

Lovely story. Have read a few. Looking forward to more. ❤

Beautiful story. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

Shannayes❤😊

Cute 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

❤❤❤Wifey

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Não é legendado não vou assistir 😢

I want to see this pls pls title pls pls

Title plspls pls

I want to know what is this manga name... Plesse tell me

The story contains several mistakes which make it hard to follow this story. The constant crying of Troy is also very irritating.

Hate the narrator voice

I guess it's the wrong title or the wrong story, Anyway I would have focused the story on Jake's journey, how he met and fell in love with Alex and how he overcame his upbringing,

what the hell is going on with this story

I would have never given Noah that meeting. Your sorry… too little too late Noah…

Shannayes❤😊

Why does this story scare me. Damon gives me groomer vibes 🤦‍♀🤦‍♀

You need to reread your tales for continuity before you publish. Your Omega is introduced like a mouse hiding surreptitiously and sneaking through the palace with his face half covered by a hood his eyes never gazing at a none, who hides and works somewhere in the bowels of the palace behind a desk in an alcove located the farthest from the door who interacts with no one...and you introduced him as a scribe. Suddenly he is a known advisor to the Alpha. When did that happen? Next, after finding the scroll about the Omega rebellion, a scroll you never refer to again, you have him scurry back to his bedroom, lock the door, jump into his bed, and repeat his bed. The Alpha suddenly flings open this supposedly locked door and they make passionate love all night in the Omega's bed, fall asleep...but wake up in the Alpha's bed having fallen asleep in the Omega's bed...and now he is a known advisor rather than like a scurrying mouse..and everyone knows who he is. The story is good but the lack of continuity is jarring.

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Shannayes❤😊

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Pls the voice

Ifposs change the voice’ this one sounds like a chipmunk!,

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❤❤❤I heard this one already. Did he ever get his dog back! Lol😊

Shannayes❤😊

❤❤❤ Such a sweet story!

Why do I come think of Elmer Fudd when I hear this story?

Boring 💩

Paint the cucumber green? ! 🤷‍♀️. This story is very confusing…