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"The Alien General’s Gift: A Human Soldier Unwrapped" or 'Unbox Me' | Sci-Fi | HFY Story
"The Alien General’s Gift: A Human Soldier Unwrapped" or 'Unbox Me' | Sci-Fi | HFY Story
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Planet of Warrior Queens To Hunt A Human But All Of Them Got Pregnant Next Day | HFY
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Planet of Warrior Queens To Hunt A Human But All Of Them Got Pregnant Next Day | HFY This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short Story, HFY ...
Wait, Human! You're Seriously Taking Me There? Alien Princess Can't Believe It! | Sci-Fi | HFY Story
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Wait, Human! You're Seriously Taking Me There? Alien Princess Can't Believe It! | Sci-Fi | HFY Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY S...
"Let Me Taste Your Warmth Again, Earthling" - Starborn Lover's Craving| HFY | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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"Let Me Taste Your Warmth Again, Earthling" - Starborn Lover's Craving| HFY | HFY Sci‐Fi Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short S...
Alien Queen Furious After Human Male Impregnates Her First Try | Sci-Fi | HFY
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Alien Queen Furious After Human Male Impregnates Her First Try | Sci-Fi | HFY This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short Story, HFY War Sci...
You’ll Put a Ring on Me, Human, or I’ll Make You! - The Starborn Beauty’s Ultimatum Sci-Fi HFY Story
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You’ll Put a Ring on Me, Human, or I’ll Make You! - The Starborn Beauty’s Ultimatum Sci-Fi HFY Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY S...
Left To Perish Among Monsters, An Alien Girl's Life Is Saved By A Human Sci-Fi HFY Short Story
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Left To Perish Among Monsters, An Alien Girl's Life Is Saved By A Human Sci-Fi HFY Short Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short S...
She Thought the Human Would Eat Her, But He Surprised Her Completely...| Sci-Fi | HFY story
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She Thought the Human Would Eat Her, But He Surprised Her Completely...| Sci-Fi | HFY story She Thought the Human Would Eat Her, But He Surprised Her Completely...| Sci-Fi | HFY story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like a...
Galactic Soldiers Laughed at the Prisoner-Until They Found Out He Was a U.S. Marine | HFY
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Galactic Soldiers Laughed at the Prisoner-Until They Found Out He Was a U.S. Marine | HFY This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short Story,...
She Was Chained and Mistreated, Until the Human Bought Her and Changed Everything| HFY| Sci-Fi Story
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She Was Chained and Mistreated, Until the Human Bought Her and Changed Everything| HFY| Sci-Fi Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY S...
Heroic Human Rescues Alien Beauty From Drowning and Receives an Unbelievable Reward.| HFY Best Story
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Heroic Human Rescues Alien Beauty From Drowning and Receives an Unbelievable Reward.| HFY Best Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY S...
Alien Girl Dying of Thirst Drank "Human Nectar" Thinking It Was Water |HFY| Sci‐Fi Story
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Alien Girl Dying of Thirst Drank "Human Nectar" Thinking It Was Water |HFY| Sci‐Fi Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short Story, ...
"ALIEN GIRL'S HUMAN OBSESSION: Uncovering the Fascinating Truth"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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"ALIEN GIRL'S HUMAN OBSESSION: Uncovering the Fascinating Truth"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short Story, HFY ...
Left to Die on Deserted Planet, Until The Human Found Her |HFY| Sci‐Fi Story
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Left to Die on Deserted Planet, Until The Human Found Her |HFY| Sci‐Fi Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short Story, HFY War Scie...
Human Wins Galactic Lottery-The Prize? An Enigmatic Alien Beauty|HFY| Sci‐Fi Story
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Human Wins Galactic Lottery-The Prize? An Enigmatic Alien Beauty|HFY| Sci‐Fi Story This channel directly supports the author of this story by sharing the ad-revenue it generates with them. Your viewership makes a world of difference. Thank you for being an essential part of our community! Like and Subscribe for more! Wrote myself, feedback is appreciated! HFY, HFY Story, HFY Short Story, HFY Wa...
My Alien Mail Carrier Is in Mating Season - And It's Driving Me Crazy! HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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My Alien Mail Carrier Is in Mating Season - And It's Driving Me Crazy! HFY | Sci-Fi Story
TRAPPED WITH ALIEN BEAUTY: Elevator Malfunction Sparks an Unforgettable Night | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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TRAPPED WITH ALIEN BEAUTY: Elevator Malfunction Sparks an Unforgettable Night | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
UNEXPECTED ROYAL ENCOUNTER: Alien Princess Stumbles Upon My Bare Reality| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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UNEXPECTED ROYAL ENCOUNTER: Alien Princess Stumbles Upon My Bare Reality| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
ALIEN GIRL'S CRY FOR HELP: Humanity Intervenes to Shield Her from Her People's Cruel Justice"| HFY |
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ALIEN GIRL'S CRY FOR HELP: Humanity Intervenes to Shield Her from Her People's Cruel Justice"| HFY |
"ALIEN'S AWKWARD ENCOUNTER: Humanity's Strange Medical Practices Leave Them Baffled" HFY| Sci-Fi Sto
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"ALIEN'S AWKWARD ENCOUNTER: Humanity's Strange Medical Practices Leave Them Baffled" HFY| Sci-Fi Sto
"ALIEN BEAUTY'S UNEXPECTED PREDICAMENT: Humans Race to Save Her"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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"ALIEN BEAUTY'S UNEXPECTED PREDICAMENT: Humans Race to Save Her"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
Human Engineer and Alien Seductress Are Forced to Share Quarters on Military Ship | HFY Sci-Fi Story
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Human Engineer and Alien Seductress Are Forced to Share Quarters on Military Ship | HFY Sci-Fi Story
"MIDNIGHT ENCOUNTER: Sweet Alien Girl's Shocking Arrival in My Room"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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"MIDNIGHT ENCOUNTER: Sweet Alien Girl's Shocking Arrival in My Room"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
"THE PLEASURE TRIGGER: Humans' Secret Weapon Unleashes Alien Desire"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story1119 7
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"THE PLEASURE TRIGGER: Humans' Secret Weapon Unleashes Alien Desire"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story1119 7
"CAPTIVE OF THE CANNIBAL ALIEN: The Shocking Reason She Spared My Life"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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"CAPTIVE OF THE CANNIBAL ALIEN: The Shocking Reason She Spared My Life"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
"Bring a Human for Reproduction with My Daughters - The Alien...!|HFY Best Story
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"Bring a Human for Reproduction with My Daughters - The Alien...!|HFY Best Story
Forced To Remove Clothes After Spaceship's AC Broke, Alien Beauties Are Shocked | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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Forced To Remove Clothes After Spaceship's AC Broke, Alien Beauties Are Shocked | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
"ALIEN SLEEPOVER SHOCKER: Her Surprising Request Left Me Speechless"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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"ALIEN SLEEPOVER SHOCKER: Her Surprising Request Left Me Speechless"| HFY | Sci-Fi Story
Human Male Engineer and Alien Engineer Forced to Share a Room and Bed on a Military Ship |HFY Sci-Fi
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Human Male Engineer and Alien Engineer Forced to Share a Room and Bed on a Military Ship |HFY Sci-Fi
My Alien Roommate Accidentally Saw Me Naked and She is Delighted | Sci-Fi | HFY Story
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My Alien Roommate Accidentally Saw Me Naked and She is Delighted | Sci-Fi | HFY Story

Комментарии

  • @mycastlecellar
    @mycastlecellar 21 час назад

    You need to decide on how you gonna spell something. You have spelled Lyresha three different ways, 18:06 Larissa, Lirisha, and Leresha! And whatever else you can come up with. Learn to be consistent.😊

  • @audioelitist3677
    @audioelitist3677 22 часа назад

    I really lucked out with the last alien slave girl I bought. I was doing the whole white knight thing, hoping she would be all like... "Yeah, this guy is so great... I can't help but to fall in love with him..." It just didn't work out like that at all. Anyways... I buy her, and do the whole white knight unchaining thing, where I say "you're free." She fires back, "What makes you think I want to be free? Chain me back up and make me to things!" "So, it's like THAT", I think to myself. She cooks, cleans, gives amazing massages, and is down for ANY twisted thing I can come up with. Occasionally, I get feeling guilty, because she really does do a lot... but... every time I go to set her free, she complains and demands to remain enslaved. I keep waiting for somebody to pop out and tell me it was all a huge joke, but it's been two years. This ever happened to anyone else? I feel guilty, but at the same time, it's really great.

  • @tombatchelor5591
    @tombatchelor5591 День назад

    It's a nice story. Well done! 😊

  • @mikegann551
    @mikegann551 2 дня назад

    So many of 5hese stories just end without finishing the story. Aggravating

  • @LUCKYPUCK-007
    @LUCKYPUCK-007 2 дня назад

    Bad story, jumps around, double story. CACA. Do better or do something else.

  • @GeorgeFrei-g4l
    @GeorgeFrei-g4l 4 дня назад

    The sentence should read "who now identify as males but haven't made the transition yet?"

  • @GeorgeFrei-g4l
    @GeorgeFrei-g4l 4 дня назад

    Why is the female letter carrier referred to as "his" and "he" in this story as women are referred to in many others so that the words "her" and "she don't have to be mentioned? So are you telling me now that your females are actually gay males acting as crossdressers or transexual females who now identify as males but having made the transition yet? If either case is true then I will cease viewing your stories and block you! Fix the problem and when you say that a person is a woman say "her" or "she" and when it is a man say "his" or "he." ALSO, when you tell us a discription of the character make sure that the description matches the photo or video of the character. I have noticed BOTH of these errors on other Sci Fi videos as well! Have good day!

  • @ronsindric4241
    @ronsindric4241 4 дня назад

    Speaking of the artwork; it sure is cute. Makes me think of what you might get if you genetically mixed a Smurf, Barny the Purple Dinosaur, and a Teletubby 🤪

  • @kaval187
    @kaval187 4 дня назад

    Where is her other ear in the picture Congratulations with your AI picture It set off my OCD Where is the other ear I'm only here for that Give it another ear please

  • @ronsindric4241
    @ronsindric4241 4 дня назад

    The AI is BAD. Tale verbose, rambling, repetative and predictable. Story a HOOOOOO HUUUUUUUM weak, poorly thought out and weakly written. Suggestion- every power has a warrior elite. Better would be for Earth to guide, train, and prepare the Woman Diplomat and to teach Her military stealth, logistics and leadership. Armed with Her restored Diplomatic acumen and synergized with a powerful military mind-set, she returns to lead a new Diplomatic Mission. Her clothing reflects a blend of Grace, Elegance, and hidden Military Utility. On her first day as Diplomat for Earth, someone says she looks familiar. She speaks that she is new to these negotiations . Oddly different, Her tunic bears the markings of Earth's Diplomatic Service and a name patch that says, "Laura Croft". Her kidnappers return "waiting in the wings". But as the kidnappers look in to Her eyes, they have a feeling of unease and the beginnings of the Fear that descends on criminals who see Justice coming for them. By day, she is an exemplary Diplomat. By night, she becomes a terrifyingly efficient and stealthy Warrior who seeks out and punishes her kidnappers leaving them alive, terrified, broken, and weak. Justice is served; the CALTHRAX leadership hesitates moving towards a less beligerant stance. They abandon these criminals who become beggars with no Rights as Calthraxian Citizens.

  • @a_z.tazzzfan8497
    @a_z.tazzzfan8497 4 дня назад

    Good story & enjoyed it. However, it had nothing to do with the title. Good stories don't need click bait titles & images. 🤔🤨😒

  • @robertdoughman6545
    @robertdoughman6545 5 дней назад

    Why does Ai always write about blue alien women and crystalline energy?

  • @lifelongconservative3338
    @lifelongconservative3338 5 дней назад

    The journey had just begun? If you say so. I'll never know what their journey was going to be because you chose to end this tale when the Climax hadn't been completed. Without that happening there cannot be a Falling action nor a Resolution. You have no intention of taking this tale to fruition which means the tale will never continue as it should. IMHO that is not acceptable. So I won't ever be frustrated again with another unfinished tale from this channel. Why? Because RUclips has this awesome feature titled "Don't Recommend Channel." I'll activate it and then poof'.....your channel will never be recommended to me by RUclips ever again. I'm gone.

  • @wonttell4873
    @wonttell4873 5 дней назад

    To many words and to much repeating. Dislike.

  • @larrymitchell3502
    @larrymitchell3502 5 дней назад

    This guy defines a young engineer. A few years ago I read a study of highly educated professionals in their late 40's-early 50s. They possessed what seemed to their younger colleagues an uncanny diagnostic ability - to quickly & correctly analyse a situation and arrive at a solution, then to further refine it during application. What their younger associates didn't - could not - grasp is that the ability is based in literally thousands of prior real world instances. A knowledge base arising from right - and wrong - resolutions, by themselves and others. It allows them to assess a problem and quickly arrive at what seemed an instinctive method of addressing it. One that proved correct in almost every case and that they were quickly able to adapt and adjust to resolve the issue in most of the cases when their initial diagnosis wasn't ideal. Other studies indicates, for most individuals, prodigies excepted, across multiple fields - medicine, music, science, teaching - mastery of a field requires 20,000 hours of DOING in that field. In that time an individual builds the internal knowledge base allowing one to solve problems their highly educated associates (but haing less experience) viewed as almost mystical. Circumstances forced me to stop providing flight instruction in my late 50's, almost 15 years ago. I had never been better - at understanding different students based on their behavior and reactions, in anticipating their thoughts, at succinctly communicating instruction in real time, adapting it both to their response and the changing flight environment we were in. Now in my seventies with a degree in Journalism and decades of sales experience, I'm better than I've ever been at communicating and convincing. If 'Ethan' is fortunate enough to age he will likely reach a point at which Lyricia's different abilities will be not only easier to understand but welcomed. True partnership is rate even in the same species. It would be a good theme to explore, I think.

  • @davidnorris394
    @davidnorris394 5 дней назад

    A good message about working together but a couple of issues with the overall story. 1. Deep space is cold. They wouldn’t be getting hotter, but colder. 2. If the inside temp reached 160 degrees Fahrenheit none of them would survive.

    • @csi1392
      @csi1392 5 дней назад

      vacuum is an excellent insulator. all on board heat sources would build heat inside. in a real situation the crew would shut down anything producing heat

  • @MikeC-s2j
    @MikeC-s2j 5 дней назад

    One thing about this video and others like it is that all the men are fully clothed, but when it comes to the women, they barely have anything on. Whom ever write this video appears that they think that women walk around with barly anything on. They need to grow up PIGS.

  • @Leon-ck3td
    @Leon-ck3td 6 дней назад

    Why is ALMOST every story sexually oriented? And why are ALL alien females always nude? Answer; a sexually frustrated creator's idea.

  • @sharolbangerter4057
    @sharolbangerter4057 6 дней назад

    So you are telling me that the Mail man is gay . !!!

  • @thomasmain5986
    @thomasmain5986 6 дней назад

    Look's like Barbie and Ken Engineer.

  • @danielbenyair300
    @danielbenyair300 6 дней назад

    seductress??

  • @butterg9535
    @butterg9535 6 дней назад

    My story's so much shorter: - It gets hot - I remove my shirt - Alien girls send me to check the airlock

  • @charleskuss8538
    @charleskuss8538 7 дней назад

    Really irritating AI narration when it can't even pronounce the protagonist's name correctly

    • @audioelitist3677
      @audioelitist3677 5 дней назад

      I won't have anything to do with AI until it can give me a back rub and do the dishes.

  • @chloekaftan
    @chloekaftan 7 дней назад

    i completely lost interest as soon as i learned that we wouldnt get to make them suffer, the incessant repetition of awful AI written slop is the final straw. i'm blocking this channel from my feed and you should too.

  • @NekomusumeDaisuki-s8x
    @NekomusumeDaisuki-s8x 7 дней назад

    What happened to the nanites in their veins reparing their wounds 'instantly'? Why leave a message that "Earth Remembers' if earth should not be implicated? Why even attack if you know the enemy fleet cannot be stopped? Their retalliation will come, unless you can make certain they won't be able to. The story is a collection of plotholes, repeats and weird, incorrect assumptions. I stopped it halfway. Also... Why not 'leak' the information gathered from the intelligence centre... Let the entire galaxy know the plans, forcing them to unite for their own safety... Yeah, not impressed at all with this one...

  • @ThomasAlexander-nu8pp
    @ThomasAlexander-nu8pp 7 дней назад

    Bla bla

  • @John-x7r7p
    @John-x7r7p 7 дней назад

    Certain words are misspelled .... Example : ' as the evening wore on .. ' Instead the caption said / as the evening moron... ( Why the mistake?

  • @John-x7r7p
    @John-x7r7p 7 дней назад

    Why a blue face and neck,, but a different color from the neck down.., ? ( Just a curiosity question

  • @stevedenning4928
    @stevedenning4928 7 дней назад

    This is such a rip-off of Star Wars and Independence Day among many others that I'm surprised you aren't being sued for copyright infringement!

  • @MaestroGrey
    @MaestroGrey 8 дней назад

    The stories like this are kinda boring because you can't put anything naughty on youtube. Just stick to "wow humans are strong/tough/weird" stories.

  • @goatkiller666
    @goatkiller666 8 дней назад

    So they sent basically their entire military command structure on this milk run to smack an infant species. Because they wanted to make sure nobody got lazy. And what happens? The military command just half-assed an attack anyway, so their soldiers were still unprepared. Maybe letting the snipers retire the top 15 in line for the throne would put some better generals in charge.

  • @goatkiller666
    @goatkiller666 8 дней назад

    Command failure #1: we should have realized that once we do any visible action, they’ll launch an “overwhelming” invasion. If our stealth tech is so good, we should have put cloaked bombs on every enemy ship. “Oh looks, they’ve sent their Third Fleet to smash proxima… <presses button> so now the third fleet mysteriously vanishes en route to attacking Earth. I assume these aliens still have a single sovereign. Every time they move against Earth, whoever is the sitting monarch dies. Three or four cycles of that… eventually someone who assumed she was so far from the throne it would never be theirs. And now that person is realizing if she attacks earth like her older sisters did, she’ll probably be assassinated.

  • @williamchandler2937
    @williamchandler2937 8 дней назад

    This sory had promise,to much repeat and repeat,repeat

  • @kevinearle8955
    @kevinearle8955 8 дней назад

    Did they not say that this was a mission not to implicate Earth but yet still left a message implicating Earth? I could be wrong...

    • @gaiusmarius4209
      @gaiusmarius4209 7 дней назад

      well it was about sending a message, what almighty superiority complex Empire is gonna tell the rest of the galaxy that a group of pitiful weak stupid humans (their words probably) snuck into one of their most secure facilities on their CAPITAL and then scrubbed their computer system of whatever they wanted... they'd be not only a laughing stock but the leaders that allowed it would be... violently removed from their positions by the people or even their own military. so the Calthrax know who did it but they cant really DO anything about it cause of their prior stances and relations with other races and the Humans. At least that's my read on it

  • @edwardsdeacon
    @edwardsdeacon 8 дней назад

    🤔 This was cool until the narrator mentioned the two female members of the special forces each unit. Special units don’t have females nor should they. That took away from the story. Other than that it would make a good move. A lot of repeats and the characters name are used in several similar stories . Most likely A.I. generated or assisted.

    • @tzarius78
      @tzarius78 8 дней назад

      Stop nit picking. It a story to entertain.

    • @avalineriley6809
      @avalineriley6809 8 дней назад

      It's fiction, get over yourself.

  • @lukaprelozniksegel4947
    @lukaprelozniksegel4947 9 дней назад

    At some point it feels like the ai got caught in a loop and didnt know how to continue the story

    • @CeciliaRios-i1z
      @CeciliaRios-i1z 8 дней назад

      sorry for this time.... i'll try my best in next videos

  • @russell5078084
    @russell5078084 9 дней назад

    Pathetically Repetitive with totally implausible plot holes.

  • @rev.jonathanwint6038
    @rev.jonathanwint6038 9 дней назад

    This is actually badly written. Again we see a complete lack of research. A diplomat would Absolutely have access to secret information. Also human politicians wouldn't care what happened to a diplomat unless it became public knowledge.

    • @quinncanada9045
      @quinncanada9045 9 дней назад

      A diplomat wouldn’t know anything truly important that the calthrax wanted. It’s still badly written but not for the reasons that you stated. Also she was dropped off at the neutral planet which meant that the whole universe could potentially be aware weakness is not something that humans want to be seen as even in real life.

    • @JohnGelino
      @JohnGelino 3 дня назад

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  • @stephenhudson8739
    @stephenhudson8739 9 дней назад

    So is she like a cyborg or an Android it talks about being programmed and sensors

  • @helenmira7218
    @helenmira7218 9 дней назад

    The humans mess with the data...Somehow, the the Calthrax noticed the intrusion. 😮‍💨

  • @alexkaen1701
    @alexkaen1701 9 дней назад

    clickbait

  • @darkshadow9291
    @darkshadow9291 9 дней назад

    It's Gypsy Danger's big bro

  • @ryanmuhm7584
    @ryanmuhm7584 9 дней назад

    Listened to less than half because it was read soooooo slow. Need a new robot to read the story.

    • @DarkAbyss-em5ly
      @DarkAbyss-em5ly 9 дней назад

      You know there's a button to speed up the video right?

    • @ryanmuhm7584
      @ryanmuhm7584 8 дней назад

      @@DarkAbyss-em5ly Yeah but it alters the voice into an even less human tone. There are lots of others to listen too. Many on this channel. Just didn't want to not finish it without letting the poster know why.

  • @tombatchelor5591
    @tombatchelor5591 9 дней назад

    So is she an alien robot?

  • @medunn675
    @medunn675 10 дней назад

    Let me get this straight all of humanity’s super soldiers are women 💩

  • @richallcorn
    @richallcorn 12 дней назад

    I am impressed that you didn't use the same names used in other stories like this; or the same phrases like "atmosphere was palpable", etc. You are original. Great job!

  • @350BuickBoy
    @350BuickBoy 12 дней назад

    Likely A.I. written, constantly repeats itself. Cool artwork, and a good concept.

    • @CeciliaRios-i1z
      @CeciliaRios-i1z 12 дней назад

      Thank you sir

    • @voctorfloud9341
      @voctorfloud9341 10 дней назад

      The repetition is extremely , repeating the same thoughts is annoying to the point I just skip to the next story

    • @teigynoake4633
      @teigynoake4633 8 дней назад

      But that’s exactly how reporters make their reports or just like those stupid news articles on facebook

    • @DeepPastry-m7d
      @DeepPastry-m7d 8 дней назад

      @@teigynoake4633 Not hearing anything you wouldn't expect to see Ai... Reporters have been lazy forever.

    • @viarlikophkamininsky1491
      @viarlikophkamininsky1491 6 дней назад

      Way too much repetition. Story was completely ruined by the amount of repetition. So much repetition the constant repeating of a single statement is just so repetitive. Repetition. 😂 this was so ass

  • @Shadowkey392
    @Shadowkey392 13 дней назад

    Nice artwork.

    • @CeciliaRios-i1z
      @CeciliaRios-i1z 12 дней назад

      Thank you 😊

    • @voctorfloud9341
      @voctorfloud9341 10 дней назад

      @@CeciliaRios-i1zgood story please stop the unnecessary wordiness, and the constant repetition of the same thought . Thank you

  • @carlmanis879
    @carlmanis879 13 дней назад

    She learned nothing. John should have told her the truth the growth was controlled by her leaning over him in the loose top she was wearing. He should have told her if you want to see something neet watch what happen if you let me hold them for science.

  • @justinsellers9402
    @justinsellers9402 13 дней назад

    Humans could get almost wiped out and as long as James Kirk survives, he can repopulate the galaxy.