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Oh No! 😮 Good story though 👍

I’m a little disappointed she didn’t think to use space as the refrigerator. However, the rest of the story has been so far so so good.

Great chapter But as always I have thoughts 😂❤😅 There should have been some interaction between Erin and Leo about all that happened and invite him to join her in her bed. And how well they felt after waking up And some chat after they woke up. Could have added 5 or so minutes to the video Also hope next chapter there should be telling Leo parents and sleep together again in Leo room. great job ❤

This is my favorite series. It really grabs my attention.

Hey. When is 23/24 being released?

Very Good thank you really looking forward to the next chapter 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😃😃😃🤗🤗

great video ,i really love it please more.

I kwou ,I repeate my self but WOW!!!!

yes yes yes .. great stuff

A great chapter Enjoying this Would have been nice to have a few lines about sleeping together for the first time as a couple Also the voices were a little mixed up but whatever, it happens There should be some interaction between Leo’s family as they tell them about the mating ❤️

wold prefer to see more stories like necromancer, so we aren't alone and pre warp survival.

NO!!!!! i wonder how that force field would stand up to a beserker rage that shunts the energy effects and keeps getting stronger the more pain you feel.

This is a stellar equivalent of a train wreck

One of the better stories, tell the author to keep up the great work, repeating what others have said, try and keep the same voices a 1- 20, it was working well. Keep them coming please.

I really liked this story, I also like how it was not repetitive like many others are, others just repeat the same thing over and over as fill, because they just want to make a story longer and lack the structure. This storey is very well constructed in a well thought out "universe" and set of characters. The addition of Cryptozoology is excellent. Well done, more in this same series please. And other writers could learn from this.

Awesome chapter! One request, ... *PLEASE do not cut up the next chapter!* ( I meant 41, my bad.) It is such an awesome chapter and chopping it into two or three parts will take away the entire thrill of the story. The last few chapters were totally okay to chop up, even if I like longer ones, but the next chapter... It deserves to be told from beginning to end. I hope you'll make an exception for what's coming! Pretty please? 🥰

Any story that can evoke strong emotions or feelings from the reader/listener is well worth the time to partake. Well done, author and narrator, you gave me the opportunity to better know your character Pen and feel for the wounds she suffered; physical, emotional and mental. Again....well done!

Another enjoyable chapter. Thank you.

I'm guessing Martin is not going to get the promotion he thinks he's getting. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Excellent story.

I absolutely Love this Story.. it's GREAT. THANKS so much❤❤❤❤ Wish there was more quicker.😊

Great story so far. A human security officer with intellectand a military background, on an alien's ship is a good plot. But this super soldier with enemies manipulating everything else is just more of the same old plots of most books and movies.

Perfect, thank you

Ty for the next chapter in the story 😊

great video, love it please more.

NICE! A great way to spend part of the day!

Just realized that alpha feather wind is now speaking English instead of the native language

Another great chapter Solid

I'm glad the human woman knew in this story that her (U.S.) gov't lied to the people as a matter of course, but it sorta seemed like a CIA written story when she got to "vaccines".

Thanks! The best so far 🥰😁🙏🏻💪🏻🍺 Really enjoyed seeing alpha feather wood arranged the whole thing Looking forward to the conversation to come , between Jacob and Erin Then going back to the pack and telling Leo parents about them As always, going to be another LONG week waiting 😁❤️🙏🏻🤣🤣

great video, love it please more.

hey there storyteller the fat grows more powerful day by day thank you very much for another very good episode Man...

Great story, but isn't Marks sire Chester Miller in chapter 20, and now he's Finn Clancy!😅

i love this story, my only complaint is the episodes are to short 😢😉

Fantastic part, Thank you again… so talented.

I like the stories that you tell, but the filthy language that comes out is not what I want to hear, so, ime sorry but you have lost a regular listener to what we’re great stories.

Goosebumps 😊

WOW!

Way to short 😢

Yay!

great

Well I haven't seen any more chapters that tells me this is probably going to Peter off I'll check back in a month or two

Part 2 please.

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