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This gives a game lobby vibe

crazy beat love it!! 🥀

The melody is okay, but the drums are extremely repetitive and it sounds shallow. You can add an extra deeper melody as a bass track, or something else and look at some other drum patterns like ones used in rap for some inspiration

Pretty good for the first song

You really cook 👍👍👍

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My favourite top 5 songs are : 1st . Submarine 2nd . Enlightening 3rd . There’s a hope 4th . Dearest Synthia 5th . Know my name

sick

How si this not popular? 0:21

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2/10 repetitive. claps feel very off and unnecessary. if u wanna make music try and draw up a melody. the synth-like thing that comes in at around 0:52 is reallllllly horrible sounding as well. good effort, but there's a long long way to go.

repetitive 2/10

this really does sound like autumn, on a sunny day. i like the slow feel. 7.5/10

I love the way the stringed instrument sounds, probably 6.5/10

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I like it and if you want feedback on my thoughts check the other guys comment, i just commented on there but other than that, thats great work actually, also if you want to go over any music things, i have a discord thing where i help with music if you'd like mate, no pressure, good luck to you man, you'll do great

the melody is very good, and you have a solid base here. it could use a little more variation. i really like the parts 2:19 here, they sound very dynamic and "trippy". i like this track a lot and hope to see what you do next!

This is one of my most experimental tracks, so please let me know what you think of it?

"Your music sounds awesome! I’m new to DTM as well, but let’s both keep at it ☻ I can’t wait for the day we can collaborate!"

1.5x speed makes it better 👍

the shit that goes on with the synth with the almost a key change is phenomenal

It sounds like a song from Portal! Very cool!!

Needs some other layers, like sweeps and swooshy sounds, though that's just the style I go for. A little repetitive, but I will say that the synth that comes in at 1:46 has a very interesting chord progression, especially how a bard ends out of key, but almost like it's trying to push a key change, but it pulls back to the starting chord of the bar. That has some really good potential and just needs to be refined. Good work, overall! 😃

It's not bad. a little repetitive in some areas tho

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7/10

Miles better than my first song

This is pretty good for a first song. I like the percussion loop and great work on the synths

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Sounds like a top down rpg game when youre in like, a factory about to face an important story boss. Gotta let the homies know i fux with this

(8/10)I'm genuinely love how the song sounds ominous in contrast to the name. Less like "there is hope." And more like. "is there hope?" and I love it. Song still could use some improvements, but overall pretty good. (I'm not really good at music so I don't have that much advice)

7.3/10 main bassy melody goes super hard, i liked the percussion as well. when that singular repeating note comes in its a bit repetitive; you could have added a little stepwise variation every so often, for example. also, when the next harmony part comes in its very similar to the bassline. when the next part does come in, however, the new synth sounds *really* good with the previous parts. and then the return to the original melody works really good as well. i feel like the next could have been a bit shorter, though, and the ending section could have been a bit different. like the new synth at the end could have been more of a descending line than its original one. overall tho i liked it!

7/10 it has potential! i liked the instrumentation changes and liked the main melody. i would try experimenting with song structure (e.g. ABA structure) where subsequent parts have a different melodies, and then return to the original. i disagree with the other comment about dissonance; the synth sound is a little unstable but it fits the song nicely. and also, if you want, you can try experimenting with other styles/genres (e.g. something less electronic) to get more ideas. keep it up!

A little bit dirty and dissonant on chords side, needs improvement there. A little bit repetitive, would win from more melodic and harmonic variation. Overall it's fine, just keep up the work, I'm making music too and I get the struggle, just keep doing it Also, might be subjective, but consider using some better software (Ableton Live i.e.)

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6/10 sound like music from a space level of a cool maths games platformer (compliment)

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its actually really good! its quite a relaxing piece of music, well done!

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Lots of sections for not much going on you could say..? sounds great but i feel like you only let each instrument do one thing instead of letting them each take on each others roles at some points

Pretty cool

Love it. Hate the people saying "Repeition". MEDIC! repeats a lot and people love it. LET THE SMALL CREATORS RISE UP!

hey man you have some good ideas. reach out to me if you wanna collab

Oh wow I really enjoyed this!! I think this would be a perfect piece of music for a game soundtrack, it really gives me sci-fi vibes. I agree with other commenters who say that it's repetitive, however it's not boring at all in soundtrack context some repetition isn't a bad thing! I think its well made and that it sounds great, keep up the awesome work!

its good, but there's room for improvement. like some other people mentioned, repetition is not great. you can add a bridge and a chorus and i think it would be a lot better.

if you cut out the repetitive boring parts, the song is about a minute long. (🧀 out of 10)

i feel like it repeats a lot

Hey you just got into GarageBand right maybe you should start layering your beatbox even more like adding a bass and some harmonies

Hehe it sounds funni