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Okay Here's my issue. I'm not trying to criticize this one over much, but if you're going to go to the Elemental Nations have Harry raised there that way when he finishes ninja Academy. He can go in to Hogwarts. Don't split the plots. Don't start out with him already thinking about leaving. You end up making the plots too convoluted. You water down both plots instead of having a strong back story. This is just my opinion, my critique people can ignore it. I don't mind, but really when you come across more often than not, where Harry's character just abandons the plot. Or Naruto abandons the elemental side. It's like what is the author's trying to accomplish you mix it up too much. It ends up feeling fake and forced.

What will happen as house of the Dragon House of the dragon and Harry Potter's world the same water world wars the Nelson House of the Dragon was in Hogwarts

The house of the Dragon the house of the Dragon what happened the south of the Dragon the same time was the same time as Harry Potter world Harry Potter's world

The DADA teacher should be old man Hakuro or Benamaru.

OK, why do they keep throwing around the name demon lord, they're not all demon lords. Some of them are primordial demon some of them are evolved monsters. But they're not all demon lords yet. Every time you turn around someone is calling someone else a demon, Lord. Harry needs to rename Hedwig that way she evolves. Another thing is they forgot about Harry's mait's. The 2 hobgoblin girls that he re named Alexis and Alice. Why are people calling Harry's group muggles? If they have any magic senses whatsoever, they know, they're not muggles, particularly talking about healing, potions and stuff like that, that doesn't make a bit of sense that people automatically make assumptions. One way to protect Harry is to give him items and accessories. Saying quite a bit of him in the slime story. So why haven't they equipped him up?

Can you plz continue, if possible?!

He owns a house in Forks, Washington. Are we going into Twilight after we get done with the Hogwarts Arc?

Oh God we had to have another one say swimmers, build people don't know what that is okay, if you're going by Olympians like Greg legens and other people that's not a true swimmers build their cross trainers, a swimmer's build tends to be lean nothing but. Skin muscle in bone very little body fat, but they don't bulk up anywhere. If you're talking about the build of someone like Bruce Lee. That's a fighter's build that is not a swimmer's. So I wish people would quit using that as a descriptivegymnast. S and swimmers don't have a lot of muscle at least not like. Someone like Bruce Lee but somewhere along the line. People got it in their head that these Olympic swimmers, that's a swimmer's bill. No, it's a cross circuit bill. They build muscle a true swimmer doesn't have that. Kind of don't know why people would find someone that is just totally lane scale told with a little bit of muscle attractive in the first place. There needs to be a little bit of heft to the muscles. If you want someone with strength, I've heard people talk about Captain America. Kind of build as a swimmer spill that is not a swimmer's spilled. And why do people find bulky muscle unattractive? I think that's a load of s***

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Enjoyed Harry's respose about his staff being handled by other - shocking.

It is a great example of love that Harry showed to his Godfather by providing the essential food, medicine, and clothing to save Sirius.

Apparently, Harry missed the memo that he was to be pliable, under feed, submissive, not one who knows about magic, and has control. That Harry is well dressed, and looks like a lord. Dumbledore plan has gone awry, he need to regain control.

33:26 ok so merlin is a guy, and hermione is in ancient times. This is going to be trash, im out

So, Dumbledore stated that he was fully accepted into the home, and a happy home as the conditions for the ward to work. The Dursley failed to understand, and comply with the conditions, so the question is how did the wards stay in place with the manner the Dursley treated Harry?

It is interesting that Hedwig is of Germanic origin is a combination of two words - Hed, and Wig with the meaning of a fighter, warrior. It is a feminine..

Never defined the amount that was in the trunk. The only description is that the coins covered his bed. It would have been a nice detail.

Studious nerd knowlgeebale scholarly boookworm

Plz continue with this awesome story! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Second part please

Is there going to be a part 2?

Next part please 🙏

More pretty please

Part 2 please.

Part 2 please. This is good

Hilarious, please more!

Is it yaoi

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Part 2 please

part 2 please

Was the luna from the beginning a wild card that doesn't make sense on purpose

We need a part 2 please

Can you please posted the part 2 when it release please 4:19:16 i really really like the story post the part 2 when it's made please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️💛💛🩵🩵💙💙🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 4:19:16

30minuts in and no mention of Harry yet 😢 Good build so far though

1:24:31 dumbledore is a hypocrite. He feels sadness for elsa but not for harry. He did the samething to harry

Part of me is glad I found this what if now so I could enjoy as much as I have instead Of having to wait for each chapter But because of that voting is unnecessary Commenting on the conversation between characters the laughing the I can't believe he said that moment's But can't help but agree and can't stop laughing

How long will it take harry to understand that one of his skills can talk ??

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Prank idea either use the portals well Fred and George are taking a shower and have them show up in the Great Hall without realizing it Using a portal to move the Weasley twins beds and all while they sleep to float on the Black lake Or one morning while they're sleeping use the portals to drop them into the lake A bit derivative I'm sure but you could also drop them into poop fertilizer dragon fertilizer that hagrid's been spreading around his garden You could use multiple portals to drop them into a vat of sticky substance use portal to remove them from that And drop them into the chicken coops and then teleport them into the Great Hall

Part two continue to series it's really good

Wring link

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So dumb why the fuck is Harry the weakest out of ginny and Sarah

Ok stfu with the author notes your channel has a big problem with that shit

Ok its been two hours and hes still bitching and complaining

I'm not getting upset with your story or anything I actually really enjoy it but it is common knowledge that you can't choose what animagus form you get it's just what's in your soul the likelihood of anyone getting what they actually wanted is very small

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Dumbledore Machiavelli approach is where he uses Harry to do the heavy lifting, and Dumbledore takes the credit. However, what Dumbledore fails to understand is that three are destroyed. As Remus Lupin, Dumbledore, allowing Remus to be educated at Hogwarts caused Remus to feel he is now indebted to Dumbledore, so he is now controled.