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Obviously AI written, but enjoyable nonetheless if you're not looking to nitpick, thanks for a fresh story.

I'm only 3 minutes into the story and I'm confused. He set out to investigate the jungle, he's attacked by a beast towering above him and he grabs a jagged piece of metal from his crashed ship to defend himself. What did he do walk in a circle around his ship? His ship needs to be nearby to grab a jagged piece of metal. Does anyone proofread the stories before posting them? That is a big continuity issue.

unlikely repetitive AI rubbish. Too many basic mistakes to mention. The best was Derek went from not understanding anything to speaking their language in hrs & then back to requiring a translator. The AI can't decide if he understands or not. Poor story

Great story. I liked it!

How many times do we have to hear the phrase "transcending species differences " or its like. Otherwise great story. Part 2?

That is how you go one back for more.

I love the story

Hello This story needs to be edited a bit. Some passages seem to have been duplicated and merged with differing storylines. I’ve enjoyed your stories and see a real connection in using YT to put out more stories. 88 my friends(and what’s up with 88? 42 I get, but 88?)

Nice story.

Good story.

Oh, come on give me a break. He arrives in their village. They have spears they can’t fend off predators and now they’re launching a spaceship. They have airplanes they have scientists now this is a wild tale, and I don’t know what all the other people are thinking of this, but I didn’t like it at all. It’s two storiesseparate go one way or go the other, but you can’t have airplanes and spaceships all within a matter of a year or so rewrite it or take it off the Internet

I liked it, thanks you

It's nice to have humans and aliens co-operating rather than fighting

How can we finish a story if you don't finish it? Damn!!!

It is refreshing to hear positive stories about fighting for combination learning

Yes, I did like this story very much.

I enjoyed the story.

I liked this one. It needs part 2 .

I liked this story well written

"Those omnivorous teeth can only belong to a carnivorous predator"? Do you read your own words, more importantly, do you understand words? Your statement is a huge jump in assumption. Omnivores are not necessarily always predators so the "can only" part is pretty stupid, they are opportunistic eaters. Do you know what "omni" denotes?

Beautiful - I like that story 😀😀😀

I like the story

I like the story.

Great story ❤

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Good piece of entertainment. When I hear the Lt. taking orders from the Sgt it takes me back to Nam, my Gunney gave me suggestions and as a Butterbar I listened. But he always showed me respect and he made me a better officer through my career.

Aliens don't have access to porn!

Excellent

the premiss of this story is dogshit, have sex or we invade your world... and earth agrees to this? i belive this could have been written better to be more smothed out like for exampel if they already were dating secretly and were cought by the father in the process of having sex, that would better explain why he was ready to go to war, the way its written is just clunky, an obvious porno plot the premiss is mearly thinly veiled excuse to get to the action.

Giggity….

Don´t they have pornos in the future?

The beginning was certainly a strange one

Wtf is wrong with you

good show

88

CE? Part of the fiction?

plausible

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Tholian is a copyright enfringement from Star Trek. You should make up your own race. Blue skin alien is not in the story they are not insect. Otherwise good story.

Story only halfway 😢!!!!!!

This was great story. Would like to read continue of more adventure these two will see and do. Possible’s of young siblings?

He learned to love her mating cycle she could not say no.

Captain Kirk is not happy Terry C***blocked him .. The Romulans are Enterprise territory

I really liked the story. Could you make and show ', display more ilustrations during the playing of each one of your stories?

One of the better stories I’ve heard! Adventure, love and betrayal.

good show 88

Thank you that was excellent.

Can't you come up with some different lines? You repeat the same stuff in every video.