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Brooks Elms
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Get coached from amateur to pro screenwriter 🚀
I'm a WGA screenwriter who also coaches other writers to become professional 10x faster than if they try to figure it out on their own
But don't take my word for it...
"The seeds Brooks plants in your subconscious will help you blossom into the writer you want to become -- a writer who strives for greatness."
--Vanar Jaddou (Nicholl Fellowship WINNER)
"Group Coaching calls with Brooks are amazing. It's crazy valuable to see writers develop so quickly. I recommend him to anyone."
--Lisa Franek (Nicholl Fellowship Top 50 out of 7200 scripts)
“The feedback Brooks gave is the greatest takeaway in my entire educational experience. It is priceless.”
--Tohru Iokibe (UCLA Extension Student)
Become a pro writer 10X faster - www.BrooksElmsCoaching.com
I'm a WGA screenwriter who also coaches other writers to become professional 10x faster than if they try to figure it out on their own
But don't take my word for it...
"The seeds Brooks plants in your subconscious will help you blossom into the writer you want to become -- a writer who strives for greatness."
--Vanar Jaddou (Nicholl Fellowship WINNER)
"Group Coaching calls with Brooks are amazing. It's crazy valuable to see writers develop so quickly. I recommend him to anyone."
--Lisa Franek (Nicholl Fellowship Top 50 out of 7200 scripts)
“The feedback Brooks gave is the greatest takeaway in my entire educational experience. It is priceless.”
--Tohru Iokibe (UCLA Extension Student)
Become a pro writer 10X faster - www.BrooksElmsCoaching.com
Why is screenwriting HARD?
Check out a free group coaching call on my simple 9-step framework here:
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bit.ly/9StepScreenwritingSystem
Or just throw down 10 of your hard-earned bucks to get the system for yourself and slice through your writing woes like a hot knife through butter:
www.BrooksElmsCoaching.com/book-videos/
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[for WRITERS] 😌Here's an amazingly self-evident & soulfully spectacular way to MEASURE success 😌
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Hey Writer - You've got the burning desire to make a big impact with your stories, but something is missing You're afraid you're wasting time/energy because you're stagnant, or you have a vague plan or Hollywood ignores you What if you could MEASURE screenwriting career progress in a way that's delightfully self-evident and even quite enjoyable? You can... Hop on my waitlist for a friendly asse...
How to go from amateur to 👊🏻PRO SCREENWRITER 👊🏻
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Curious about how coaching can move you from amateur to pro? Answer these quick questions bit.ly/Hey-Coach
Film School Grads | How do I get an agent?
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Recent Film School grads have sent me questions, here are answers... AND - check out this FREE Film School Survival Workshop Thurs Jan 4, 1pm PST bit.ly/Thrive-After-Film-School
Film School Grads | How to develop your creative VOICE
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Recent Film School grads have sent me questions, here are answers... AND - check out this FREE Film School Survival Workshop Thurs Jan 4, 1pm PST bit.ly/Thrive-After-Film-School
#1 Success Tip for Success After Film School
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Recent Film School grads have sent me questions, here are answers... AND - check out this FREE Film School Survival Workshop Thurs Jan 4, 1pm PST bit.ly/Thrive-After-Film-School
How To Write a Logline Professionally | Free & Easy | In-depth Workshop
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How To Write a Logline Professionally | Free & Easy | In-depth Workshop
Get Coached By WGA Screenwriter Brooks Elms
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Get Coached By WGA Screenwriter Brooks Elms
Use MYTH in Your Screenplays w Brooks Elms & Pamela Jaye Smith
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Use MYTH in Your Screenplays w Brooks Elms & Pamela Jaye Smith
Why Screenwriters Don't Need Agents Anymore (And What To Do Instead)
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Why Screenwriters Don't Need Agents Anymore (And What To Do Instead)
Get Paid for Your Short Fiction with Creag Munroe
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Get Paid for Your Short Fiction with Creag Munroe
Get Your Script SOLD | Get STAFFED - Outreach Hacks by Brooks Elms & Steve Harper
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Get Your Script SOLD | Get STAFFED - Outreach Hacks by Brooks Elms & Steve Harper
How Law of Attraction powers The Shawshank Redemption
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How Law of Attraction powers The Shawshank Redemption
Crazy SOCCER TEAM FIGHT from an indie film
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Crazy SOCCER TEAM FIGHT from an indie film
Screenwriting is never easy, however by developing a clear working process it makes the job far less confusing and far more productive, which makes it easier.
YES, to the value of a process. And for me and the writer I coach, screenwriting IS easy - unless I create the experience to be hard. That's a decision and a practice to allow it to be hard VS easy. We get to choose.
@BrooksElms For me it's always challenging. Maybe not on every page, some pages are a lot easier to write than others, but I've had difficulties in every screenplay I've written, which is almost always related to structure. Deciding what scenes need to be included and their arrangement. I only find screenwriting easy once I have a solid structure in place.
@@matthewlavagna6080 There are 2 levels to this: The MATH Problem, which is sorting out the story craft puzzles. This has inherent tension, which is why the challenge can be so appealing. If there wasn't enough tension (conflict) you wouldn't be drawn to it. The 2ND level is The MINDSET Problem: how deeply and how often do you write from flow state? THIS is the part that can actually be easy, as you practice flow. And any sort of "suffering" that writers experience, is because they're blocking flow - and they usually don't realize it.
@@BrooksElms I can write in a flow state, but only once I know the purpose/purposes of the scene, which characters are in it, and where it's located. It's as though I'm watching the scene play out on film. I allow the characters to take the lead, sit back, watch what they say and do, and I just write it down.
@ Awesome!
The beard looks good BTW👍
Thanks. Beard = practice of effortlessness :-)
Thank you Brooks 🙏
I appreciate this advice, thank you
You’re welcome. Here’s to your windfalls and navigating them with ease 🙌🏼
Take control. Be proactive!
Excellent! Once one specfic task you'll do today that's proactive?
Very helpful. Thanks Brooks!
To take my own advice, I’ve reached out to a young producer about him potentially getting involved in the packaging of a screenplay I wrote. Easy. Enjoyable. Differentiated from outcome.
This is great! Thank you Brooks 🙏
That's cool it was helpful for you 🙌🏻
To take my own advice, here's my current fav writing research tool powered by AI... PERPLEXITY www.perplexity.ai/ BONUS: here's a link to an extensive list of AI tools for filmmakers... curiousrefuge.com/blog/ai-filmmaking-tools-for-filmmakers
Thanks Brooks! I am right where you described. I've written numerous screenplays, had representation, doors opened, but have yet to close "the deal." After a long layoff, I'm back in the saddle / driver's seat with some new material and shopping for an agent or manager.
Awesome. Welcome back! Reach out to me at the email in my profile. Happy to hear more about your journey and share a few ideas to help you get repped ASAP. Or... even better for you... alternatives you can consider to skip reps altogether, so you never have to depend on them again
Wow - that’s a large group - plus - I like the topic.
For the lady whose movie is based on a true story this is the Loglines I thought of. " When a drug dealer - addict, insert character name, decides to live a straight and narrow life, she learns that it's no easy task. She must outsmart a boundy hunter and overcome the corruption jail system. Based on a true story." Or When , insert character name, decides to leave the world of drugs and crimes , she must overcome revenge , self sabotage and find healing in an unlikely place- ,jail, . Based on a true story
Thank you, brook. This was very inspiring. I like the terms victim energy vs. empowerment energy. It's much clear to me then hope vs. despair. I really appreciate this video. Thank you!!
That's cool that was helpful for you :-)
Well said Brooks.
I love your videos very encouraging and motivating 😊
Cool. That's awesome they help you 🙂
Just discovered this guy Brook Elms tonight he was so fascinating to listen to such genuine humility, expressing his experience.
Thanks, Joe. That's cool it was helpful for you 🙂
My goodness I haven’t been able to stop watching your videos. You have been so incredibly helpful. I have delved into trying to write a script a couple of years ago Picked it back up last year and it’s hard . The dialogue So much to think of but you hit all the marks dead on. Thank you for your such motivating videos thank you And I was fully aware of how difficult it is to do. Do it correctly, from the heart. I realized that I can probably get it into a rough state
@@joeribot7810 You are welcome. You can get the 9 Step System I use to write scripts I've sold here -- brookselms.gumroad.com/
love this, Mr. Brooks Elms! ❤
That's great you found it helpful 🙌🏻
Anybody who wants to write good stories ought to watch this video.
what is the point when NOBODY WILL READ THE FKN THING?
They read it RIGHT AWAY when they selfishly love the concept. I know a writer who got a movie star attached to his project, based only on a concept and a rough concept trailer from scraped footage. Same guy later sold a franchise movie based on one sentence. Focus on creating material that emotionally blows people away.
@@BrooksElms sure, but the "no unsolicited" submissions barrier is the problem.
@@gianthills That's an excuse. Not a real problem. Build the relationships first. My friend that signed the movie star built a relationship with the INTERN at the star's company. Sent the trailer to the intern. The intern emailed the star. 45 minutes later, the star attached himself to the project. UNsolicted. You can do the same thing - today. But ONLY if you drop the excuses.
@@BrooksElms just reality. a rare example of success isn't the norm. How do you "build relationships first" if you can't start a conversation? I've never seen contact info for interns anywhere.
@@gianthills They're online. Get their names from IMDbPro. Find them on Twitter, or LinkedIn or direct email. Interns, entry level workers, even writers of MOST TV shows are wide open to connections - IF and ONLY IF you've got the goods. "No unsolicented material" is code for - "you haven't shown you've got the goods yet." Don't focus on "the norm." Focus on YOU, and what's in your control.
This is gold. Thank you for sharing this.
That's awesome you found it helpful, Anthony! 🙌🏻
Jeez. Share the platform with Josh and shut up.
Listening to you flesh out your process is really helpful. Thank you.
Glad that helped, my friend!
Sounds awesome, can’t wait to hear more!
I’m here Mr Brooks
I see you, Kandi! :-)
Here's the link to get a custom writing resource to meet you where you are on your journey... bit.ly/HelpFromBrooks
Somebody left an excellent comment here that was too long-winded to keep, but brought up a GREAT point. How do you get Hollywood to read your script if you don't already have an agent? While it's true that Hollywood (rightly) refuses unsoliceted submissions from amateurs, they also love, love, LOVE to discover new talent! And that discovery can be YOU when you genuinely build a QUALITY relationship with them - directly through social media. To be clear: this is NOT about you bugging them on Instagram to read your script. It's the opposite! You are contributing to their life with a passion-driven conversation. You know, film lover to film lover. Watch the video for details.
Ok, in theory sounds good, but it's disingenuous to pretend you just want to talk to film when the reality is you want them to look at your synopsis. And they know what you want. Best to be honest. In my view, go after the producers who do what you do, and just pitch them online or ideally in-person. This idea of building a "relationship" can only happen if both parties have an interest in the same thing. I got a meeting with a an established British producer a few years ago. How? I sent out a blast email that featured a teaser trailer. Believe me, visuals are more effective than words.
@@gianthills Cool! Since that works for you, keep doing it.
Definitely agree with this, and in all aspects of life! The most important thing is good relationships.
Learn how to write a logline for your project or get a refresher if you're struggling. Great video with multiple mentors working together to give sound advice and tools for success.
Thanks, Jodi!! Really glad you think this will be helpful for writers
This was a fantastic, quick, yet extremely helpful workshop. I was able to recognize where I was stumbling with my logline and, subsequently, why my screenwriting project was feeling so stalled; I had too much going on! Since viewing this, I have reworked my logline several times and feel more confident as I progress with my work.
Wonderful! Really glad you found it helpful. 🙂
Brooks is the GOAT in sharpening your skills as a screenwriter, and as a human being in general. Always love his content and his uplifting spirit 🤙🏻
Thank you, Robb! 🙌🏻
If you're serious about scriptwriting, Brooks has created a nurturing and supportive community of writers that's well worth becoming a part of.
Thanks so much, Howard! Means a lot, especially coming from you.
It's interesting I found y'all, I'm adding some diversity to the pool and very green. Here's hoping there's more uploads soon
Had such a good time and learned so much. Enjoyed meeting everyone!
Awesome! Very good to hear that, Cynthia!
Thank you Brooks for such an amazing learning experience.
You are welcome, Susie! Really glad you joined us and it was so fun to support you in the breakout room!
An awesome workshop and A Great investment of my time!! 🎉
Wonderful! Really glad that was helpful for you, Abeeshen!
so many money scams related to writing. there is more business in the "teaching" of writing than there is in the writing.
Yes, her defining "religion" as "to bind" to control" is spot on. A great read is the 2nd to 15th century writings of the The Philokalia is "a collection of texts written between the 4th and 15th centuries by spiritual masters" of the Eastern Orthodox Church mystical tradition. I visited the Greek holy mountain that did the translation, for research. It's the first book to break down the Abracdraba pyramid...has all the elements and a host of characters that intrigue me to script! Thank you both. Bravo.
That was really good. I like using a well-known film to show the aspects of writing. I get stuck at this crossroads and the next chapter is like a blank but now I can see how I can move characters past what they're are doing with the LOA, by using the other characters, this makes so much sense now. I want to write fun reading and this made it more fun, thanks!
Wonderful! Thanks!
Thanks for this.. and for this channel..
Glad it was helpful!
Such a great discussion. Thank you. And I love your cat!
Glad you liked it!
Great movie
Great video!
Glad it was helpful!
This is actually really great. Now I wish I wrote short stories
Noice 👌
Amazing Thankyou! im an avid follower of Abraham and other spiritual teachings, I’ve been incorporating the LOA in my own storytelling, I’ve been developing a graphic novel for years now and been trying to figure out how to discreetly put this universal truth into the story itself to create something powerful and magical for people to enjoy. I got to this video through the film courage RUclips channel. What genus is here, as a fan of Shawshank redemption and LOA. when I analyze a film I’m always looking for a link between the two, storytelling & LOA. It’s super encouraging to find someone as successful as you who has done just that. 🙏
Hi Aaron! I’m so glad you found this helpful. 🙌🏼
Fantastic video! I thoroughly enjoyed it. 40 mins flew by. Btw, your phrase, a 'lack attack' is really great, I'll be borrowing that in times of doubt when needing to push myself out of a rut.
Right on. This stuff is all about what we practice each day. And we can choose to practice staying focused on the joy of the process, allowing ourselves into a flow state more deeply and more often. And the paradox is, the more we let go of emotional attachment to delightful outcomes, the faster they actually come.
@@BrooksElms indeed... 'the score takes care of itself' (I think the quote goes, by Bill Walsh I believe)
37:50 Perhaps the slightly surreal nature of the final bit on the beach is because that's just what Red as visualizing as he hopes on the bus. I like to think of it like that. Plus, you've just gotta love the massive grin on Red's face after looking so serious and sad for most of the movie. If the beach bit is just him visualizing his dream, his hope, that grin says it all about his state of mind at that point.
I like that reading of the ending. A lot. And that ending is clearly serving the audience wonderfully, which is our job as professional screenwriters. Yes, from a personal growth POV, focusing on the joy of the process is more helpful, but audiences love a rousing ending. So give that to them.
30:50 An awesome little detail in this scene is Red's response, through fearing the dangers of hope, "this is just shitty pipe dreams". Andy literally crawls through a shitty pipe to achieve his dream. Such great writing.
Yes! Great observation.
Drear Brook, Thanks so much for this exceptional video. What a fascinating pleasure it was to watch. Having studied Save The Cat and LOA for years, (but still yet to produce my masterpiece!) this video has confirmed for me how our success on our journey as Screenwriters metaphorically mirrors the journey of our story's hero. The same virtues and values that will enable our protagonist to arrive at their own Return With The Elixir are what will enable us to overcome the obstacles to our success and achieve/attract the results we desire. So many great lessons in this video. Thank you again.
You got it, Andy! I'm excited that you found takeaways that might be actionable for your projects.
This is a beautiful breakdown of SR. First watched this movie as a rental from Blockbuster 😄 One of those life changing movies and now I really know why on a much deeper level. Hope is the higher power at work through this film. Thank you Brooks. Well done.
You're welcome! Really glad this helped you see how powerful hope can be in so many ways. It works in the movie because it's true in our lives. :-)